Shivika SS: Billu-Billi ka Billa

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Hello Folks,
I am Diva_Vineet and I am not that silent of a reader of this forum, I was an active Writer and reader on IF, on IPKKND forum ( Anyone from there, big shoutout. If by any chance you people remember me I am glad😆)
anyway, I have written many stories on that forum but unfortunately couldn't complete them because I had left for a boarding School. I am back now and after reading such amazing stories, I just couldn't control myself and wrote this story down. Hopefully You guys like it😃

I will ONLY continue if I get a good response 😳

And I dedicate this story to 'rainbowveins' ❤️
Anklet, you are a sweetheart :*

* The scene sets after Shivaay has rescued Annika from Daksh and before Tia revels her pregnancy.*
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The Introduction

To say Shivaay was flabbergasted, would be an understatement. He was beyond expressions. He was aware about the arrival of few of their relatives from the village, to bless the newly weds i.e., Annika and him but what stood in front of him, wasn't a few relatives from the village but a village of few relatives at the station, with a 32 inch long smile and 32 kilos heavy luggage respectively.

Am I mistaken? They can be tourist over here too; I mean c'mon no way can so many people show up for a ritual.

I mean look at them they travelled one thousand three hundred and sixty kilometers for a ritual, a ritual?''

Shivaay still tried to reason himself but the truth to be told, they were here for a ritual and they were the right set of people, whom Dadi had asked Shivaay to pick from the Navi Mumbai railway station and yes they did cover a distance of one thousand three hundred and sixty kilometers for a ritual, he sighed.

Coming out of his stupor, Shivaay mentally started counting the number of people standing in front of him and immediately called Khanna to send another 8 fortuners to the station.

By the time Shivaay reached Oberoi Mansion, his spine had given up, the number of times he had bent to take the blessing, he must have done his two days of cardio schedule, more than that what was more painfully, was the pat that his back received, legally they shouldn't be even called pats. He was sure that his white back, by now, must have turned into a blackish blue color. What he doubted was, whether or not had his any spinal bone fractured?

Right now all he wanted was his treasure of medicines, some sprays and his bed.

As he made his way towards the staircase, his eyes missed the sight of Omkara, sitting in the corner of the lobby and munching onto something.

To Omkara, the Oberoi mansion looked more like a circus than a home, to make this into a circus in it's truest sense, what lacked was, someone walking on a rope with a stick.

But what shocked him more were his thoughts, he was right now betting himself, if he said out loud what he was thinking he was sure someone from the crowd would be readily capable to pull of a stunt like that, and just like that another chuckle made it's way out of Om while he munched onto the nachos salad his elder brother had baked for the few' relatives, who were to grace the Oberoi mansion for few' days, and just like that Omkara doubted the latter few' too. Other than this what amused him was what Shivaay had cooked for the relatives from the village, though no doubt they wouldn't have denied it but surely this wouldn't have been their preference!

Chuckling again, Omkara imagined Shivaay's expression when he would get an idea of the round off calories these people took per meal. And just like that Omkara found another spoon attacking his bowl, he turned right, finding a little pissed off Rudra.

To Rudra, everything seemed petrifying, literally every damn thing. Firstly, there was no space to breath and secondly, the amount of time he has seen people openly burping and farting was straight out disgusting and horrifying! But the bigger tension he had right now was his room; He could yet again see his room going to someone else. Previously it was his Soumya, aahh his?

Who snatched his room and threw him out of his own bloody room and then disgraced it by tidying it and now that he, after a lot of ordering and tantrums, had gotten a room ready for himself he could clear see someone else using it's luxury, Sigh!

Now all he was left with was sharing Zulfi Singh Oberoi's room, mentally already agitated on the nights that would now be gone in untangling his buttons and beard from his O's hair. Poor soul was in real crisis.

What happened Rudy? You look a little annoyed.'

Om spoke, initiating a conversation and slightly worried upon his younger brother's mood.

Annoyed? I am everything in its synonym! O'

Rudra said with a mouth full of salad, gulping, he continued,

Every other person I met has asked me this question remember me? I am this Chachi; I am that fufa, last time we met, you were 6 months old. Really O we met, No! You don't meet a 6-month-old baby, you see him! And are they really expecting a grown up of 23 years to recognize someone, who apparently met at the age of merely half a year. My question is why are they even questioning me? Because before I can think of a response they already have answered their own question. And this doesn't end here, what follows right after is even funnier, last time I saw you, you were this tiny and now you have grown up so tall, Oh my bad that I functioned like a normal human and grew up, sorry to trash your hopes of seeing me like the tiny you saw me exactly 22 and half years ago.'

Rudra poured his frustration to Omkara without a pause for breath and munched another spoon full of the nachos salad.

Hey, you ate the last bite'

And that's what you chose to say after my long rant, O'

Om gave Rudy a look of I-don't-give-a-penny-to-your-thoughts and carried on with licking off the spoon, before Rudra could put a fight with Om, both Om and he noticed the noisy filled room suddenly turning into waves of whispers and then dying down to pin drop silence and every eye fixed on one spot, when the turned towards the source for such an abrupt change, they stood there awe struck because descending down the stairs were the enchanting image of royalty.

Mr. & Mrs. Shivaay Singh Oberoi

Looking every bit of beauty and happiness, hands in hands, they captivated everyone's attention, complimenting each other they walked to the center of the room and sat down on the decorated swing that was placed for the occasion.

Where Annika was glowing in Golden, Shivaay ruled it in all black (Their engagement dresses).

However they married each other, the fact is bhaiya couldn't have gotten a better life partner than Annika bhabhi.'

And Omkara couldn't agree more to Rudra's words, though how they married and exactly how Annika agreed to marry Shivaay had literally torn him apart but somewhere, even then, he was happy that Shivaay had married Annika and not Tia. His happiness had doubled up when Annika had accepted the marriage- not forgiven Shivaay yet but accepted Shivaay as her husband, he was sure though, one day Shivaay will earn his forgiveness too. And now from few days that he has been watching them, he noticed how they both were adapting each other's presence happily just like a couple arranged into marriage.

True Rudy, just look at them, they radiate love in dadi's words, they radiate takkar ki ishqbaazi, someone has to be really mentally challenged to not know that these two are immensely in love with each other.'

Haw, are you calling my Bhaiya and bhabhi mentally challenged? Wait until the function isn't over, I'll tell bhaiya what you were bitching about him. And also about Choti maa, though I agree with Choti maa's part'


And both the brothers broke into fits of laughter, though ironical much but what Rudra said was unfortunately a legit truth, the two in love were actually unaware of their own feelings. * Sigh *

The rasam started, one by one, everyone came lifted Annika's veil, complimented Annika, congratulated Dadi and Pinky for getting such an angel like bahu, fed sweets to both Annika and Shivaay, gifted them something and the process continued peacefully until;

Someone from the crowd questioned,

How many months?'

Not a day more to a month,'

Jhanvi answered.

And when is the baby due for?'

Another person piped in curiously, While Om, Rudra, Priyanka and Soumya stood flabbergasted. Shivaay and Annika chocked onto the sweet that they were fed, Red and shocked, they sat still.

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For a newly wed, It is already difficult to share emotions, adjust to each other's habits and lifestyle and Bed!

So what happens when society wali aunties starts questioning about a baby?

"koi problem toh nhi"

"Raat me na waise kapde pehna"

"Ye baba ki wo dawai khao ho jayega"

Let's see how Shivaay Singh Oberoi and His Annika handle this situation and romance a little 😉

Leave your thoughts below, give it a thumbs up if you liked it 😊

Warm Love

Diva_Vineet

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Posted: 8 years ago
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RES

UNRES

Divs

Where do I even begin?

I know we don't do thankyou-s, but can we make this one exception?

THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU

For dedicating this to me, for updating early when you weren't planning to, and for writing this amazing story.

I swear, I knew I was in for a good read when I read- wasn't a few relatives from the village but a village of few relatives. That made me crack up so hard! Just imagining Shivaay Singh Oberoi, in a station in his three-piece suit, waiting to receive his relatives from a village; Gosh, I can only wonder the michmichis he went through there! I totally under his shock though, SO MANY people for one ritual? That is some dedication towards their relatives! And ofcourse, then his Calculator Singh Oberoi avatar emerges and he instantly knows how many vehicles would be needed to carry all these relatives of his. Ahh, my smartie.

Poor guy though, it is indeed painful to take blessings (we've all been there, done that), and for someone jo kisi ke saamne nahi jhukta , it must be much much more difficult! But I do hope that all the exercise he has gotten here comes in handy to him later (if you know what I mean ;) ) I wonder if he'll make his wife tend to his wounded back hmm...

I loved that you put in Om and Rudy's perspectives here too, because God, for me that's probably the most difficult part. They both have such incredible characters (my babiesss), and I always feel like I won't be able to do them just. But you did. And I'm proud of you for it :* I absolutely loved Om's thoughts- he was right on point guessing that it probably won't be a few' days, I think (and hope). And his ever intelligent self also knows that this isn't the sort of meal village people would like to have (I mean, nachos Shivaay, really?)

But mostly I loved Rudy baby's perspective! He is ever realest and honest self, behaving exactly like any of us would have when suddenly graced with the presence of so many relatives (one relative is enough to make me go into isolation in my own room, I can only imagine Rudra's state. Becharaa). The way he, even in his thoughts, said HIS Soumya, my heart melted. GIVE ME BACK MY RUMYA PLEASEEE :'( Also, damn I'm jealous of Rudra for being able to share a bed with Om... okay stop getting michmichis I just love Om WAY TOO MUCH UGHH.

"Annoyed, I am everything in it's synonym -LOVED this line.

And then comes that stereotypical exasperation we have ALL faced- relatives asking us if we remember them from our infant days. Um, NO, we do not.

Could your story get any more real and relatable, Divs? :')

But seriously that part made me laugh so hard. "Oh my bad that I functioned like a normal human and grew up. LITERALLY TEARS RUNNING DOWN MY FACE. Rudra is LIFE. ( and you girl, are out-of-this world amazing for giving us this part of him, for we rarely find it in the show anymore).

And then enters the star couple- Mr. and Mrs. SSO. I think my breathing stopped too at that point, like all of theirs. They probably looked so beautiful sighh. I miss this period of their relationship now more than anything- even tho they were both aware of the circumstances in which they had married, and how easily the marriage could have been broken , they still just carried on living and laughing and just BEING like a normal couple. The teasing and flirting, gosh I miss that so much. But hey, I'll be able to see that again in this story and that's better than anything. That's perfect.

It's heartwarming to see Om and Rudra being the most adorable devars ever. They know exactly how perfect Shivika are for each other, and we couldn't have asked for better shippers. And Omigod, I absolutely loved how Rudra just burned Shivaay, Annika and Pinky so subtly 😆 Mentally challenged, indeed. Just open your eyes and face the truth, dammit. There couldn't be two people more madly in love. Period.

I could sense something really beautiful in that simple rasam done by the relatives. They were village people, and it didn't matter to them at all what kind of a background their new bahu had come from; they were ready with their blessings instantly. And compared to all the high-society people the show always seems to talk about and show, this was a breath of relief. It was also too sweet and even naive of them to just guess that Annika was expecting, out of the blue. Like whoa guys, you don't know our Shivika! They can go months playing their dard' and farak padta hai' games, while sleeping inches away from each other, and not become sexually frustrated. We fans have waited MONTHS for simple hugs and kisses, and you're demanding bachhe right away? Not fair! (but I don't mind, ofcourse. I'm cheering you all on from the background. And I'll make sure that Divs here gives you all exactly what you want- it's my job to push and pester her about updates and romance. Leave it up to me 😉 )

Jeez, I wish I could see, live, everyone's reaction to that sudden news! Like hey, the couple itself knows nothing, how do you guys suddenly know?

And the advices at the end- right on point. I do hope Annika takes the advice and raat mein waise kapre pehene... Thought I'm sure her husband will be all over her anyway!

Divs, this was absolutely amazing. I waited so long and this was much much MUCH better than I had thought, making the wait SO worth it. Now I know you're not planning to update soon, but I think I'll DIE of anticipation if you don't. I'm unressing now because I didn't want to make you wait till tomorrow (also, I'm trying to butter you into updating soon heheh), and I know I'm not even close to expressing how I felt when I read this, not even close to giving half the insight YOU do to my stories. Just know that I absolutely love you from the bottom of my heart, baby.

Loads and loads of love

Anklet

Edited by rainbowveins - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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INDEX

Introduction : Scroll up 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ohmigosh! This is sooo good. XD
I'm so so so excited to read this. Please do continue. I'm absolutely in love with this fiction. Hehe Rudy frustration. Lol. Can totally relate with the whole aunties and fufas.
A really great start! Do continue soon. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is going to be a fun ride
Haha
Bring it on
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome...amazing...fanyastic
It was a fun ride...eagerly waiting what will happen next
Continue soon diva
Do pm me if possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hahahaha very funny, very interesting, and most important stressbuster
countinue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey diva long time since we spoke😊
hope u r fine😊

Am really happy fr ur ss😊am sure it ll b grt

Res for now

Will unres after reading

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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome yar...
it was too hilarious...
especially the last part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you ma'am, it's like a breath of fresh air. Love your the last part of first chapter

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