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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 3:

Back in his room in Haveli, Omkaara was trying to process the information. It was too much revelation for a single day. Firstly, he got the shock of his life when he understood Gauri is chulbul, the next one being on his gross misunderstanding on Gauri without even realizing her situation. She has been the breadwinner of the family from her young age.? What kind of struggles she must have gone through to do this at a very young age..? And did kaali taakur wanted to marry her along with his brothers? How cheap a person can get more than this?

He still didn't like the fact the Gauri lied to him and took the pretext of chulbul, his best buddy. But her circumstances are clearly overwhelming. Whatever it is, she needs to be saved from this demon. But how does he escape her from this haveli.. He was thinking of all possibilities.. Suddenly an idea dawned upon his mind.. But for that is he ready? Will his family accept whatever he was doing? He knew many people were witness to their marriage here, so the society will not be a problem. The problem is that he hid this truth to his family and to himself that he doesn't accept this marriage. At this point he himself was not in a position to rethink all of this. The only thought which came to his mind was, let's get out of the situation and will face the consequences later.

He dialed police and filed an abduction case. An abduction case which was filed on behalf of Omkaara singh oberoi on Kaali taakur for kidnapping his wife and trying to forcefully marry her. Since it was a matter with Oberoi's, police immediately took attention. He felt he needed to tell all this to Shivaay atleast so that someone will handle affairs at home. He dialed Shivaay and told the entire story starting from their marriage to chulbul truth up until now. He made up his mind on what to be done.

It was 5 am in the morning.. Omkaara sneaked into Gauri's room. Gauri was still asleep. He went near her bed. He was looking at the sleeping Gauri for few seconds and called her to wake her up. She was not waking up. He touched her hand. Gauri slightly moved her body but was not fully awake. She took his hand and held it near her chin.. "Omkaara ji.. aap humhe chod ke mat jaaoge naa.?" Her eyes were still closed and she was talking in her dreams.. Omkaara was looking at her stunned. Is she awake or is she mumbling in sleep? He called her again, she still didn't wake up. He shook her gently.. Gauri opened her eyes and was surprised to see him standing. She rubbed her eyes to confirm whether she has woken up completely or not. Indeed, he is standing before her. She still held his hand, unknowingly.

"aap, yahaan?"

"To aur kaun aata?"

"Nahi.. aap humse itne nafrat karte.. humhe milaane aaye?"

"Haan, tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai"

"Boliye"

"Tum 7.30 tak tayyar hona.. Registrar aane waale hai.. Yahan haveli ke peeche.. humhe sign karane hai kuch papers..?"

"matlab.. kya.. kyun?" She wasn't understanding one bit of what he said..

"We are getting married by law.. Wo kaali pe legally complaint dene ke liye, humhaari legally married hona zaroori hai.."

Gauri eyes widened to the extreme in astonishment.

"Par aap humhe kaise shaadi kar sakthe. Humhe kuch samaj nahi aayi.. kal tak aap itni nafrat bhari baatein keh rahe the.. kya.. hua kya hai..?"

"Wo sab main baad mein batata hoon.. Kya tum mujhe legally shaadi karne ke liye tayyar hai?"

He wanted to keep his promise of friendship he gave to chulbul, Omkaara singh oberoi is not the one who restrains away from promises..

"Par Omkaara ji.. aap ko humpar galat femi..?" She was not understanding anything at all..

"Wo sab baat baad mein karlenge.. Kaali par FIR daalne ke liye sabot chahiye.. ki hum pati aur patni hai.."

"Omkaara ji.. aap"

"Ssshh.. kuch aur nahi.. Mansoor hai ki nahi.."

"Aap poochne waali koi baat hai?"

"Haan.. ya naa.."

"Haan.."

Omkaara saw her hand was still clutching his hand.. he saw it.. She released it immediately. "Wo. Sorry.."

"teek hain.. tayyar rehna.. I will come by 7"


Love,

Yayini..

Updated the chapter.. Please read and provide your comments and feedbacks..



<To be cont>

Edited by yayini - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Awesome!
Loved the idea
And both chapters were too good
Especially Agent Rudy 😉
He really is smart!! in show how easily he found the freezer behind that glass wall thing & now the way he lead om to the truth 👏
Edited by -simmi- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: -simmi-

Awesome!
Loved the idea
And both chapters were too good
Especially Agent Rudy 😉
He really is smart!! in show how easily he found the freezer behind that glass wall thing & now the way he lead om to the truth 👏


I am glad you like rudy's debut in my chapter thanks for the comment
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

The chapter is simply wow!!!

Liked when Om asked Gauri to get ready and register...

Om is sooo cute...

Thanks for the update...

Hope u liked the Title!!!😳


Edited by Mahira_khan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Chapter 3 was simply awesome. I could find the glimpses of our hidden Omkara (or was it just my obsession for the character). Now they are all set to get married...legally. Chapter 4 ke writer, don't include any problem in the registration. Consider this as my sincere request 😆.
Cheers,
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Anyone else interested in writing chapter 4???

Other couple debut is allowed but RiKara should be in centre focus...

-Mahira...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Wow.. Nice written story Yamini.. Fianlly Om realized he hid the truth from Family.. n first thing he did it to tell Shivay.. Shivay can convince his family members he knows it.. So now.. One thing .. their marriage registration.. I'm so sure.. if KAli willdo any tamasha der are lots of villagers will give der statement against him as.. Om-Gauri are already married..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Chapter 3 was beautifully proceeded with registering their marriage and om can put the blame of kidnapping his wife... Eager for chapter 4 Mahira can i update 4 or I have to wait for others...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Im sorry if I'm violating the story circle rule but I just came to know about this from another friend(Twerping) and as a member of the Priveer story circle I feel so exalted omg you people are doing such an amazing job I'd definitely start reading your story as soon as my exams are over. Much love! Yay ❤️

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