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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 2


"agar tumne use kuch batane ki koshish ki to... tum jaanti ho main kya kar sakta hoon." Kali left leaving Gauri alone in the living hall cry over her condition. Neither could she help nor could she tell anything to Omkara. He would never take help nor listen to any of her pleads. Dejected, she left to her room.

Omkara had no option but to listen to kaali as he knew what kind of a person he is... He was only worried for chulbul and thinking of his welfare. He was sitting on a bed and was thinking... He was sure that something is wrong why I am not seeing chulbul here. I know kaali had made him captive but he is not the one who will hide chulbul but he is a kind of person who loves to see his enemies torture and for that he would have done something with chulbul in front of him to torture him. Omkara was thinking that he suddenly remembered about gauri's presence and he was furious and shocked to see her. He thought she is still with him... Damn.. but suddenly he remembered his wedding and thinks how she was trying to say that she consider him as her husband and now living with kaali shayad log sahi kehte Hai paisa hi sab kuch Hai... But he was distrub with the concern in her eyes... As if he was familiar... Omkara forget about her first of all think about chulbul where is he and how to save him. Kahin kaali NE uski biwi ko toh kidnap nhi kra liya aur fir usse gayab paruje uski biwi k baare mein b toh nhi pata... Isse pehle kaali chulbul k pariwaar vaalon tak pahunche muje hi chulbul ki family ko save krna hoga... Par kaise... Usse pehle muje to uski family k baare mein pata chale... He called rudra..

Omkara- hello Rudra

Rudra- Haan O! Tumhe chulbul k baare mein pata chala...?? Kaha had kaisa Hai yaha mom b puch rhi Hai t theekh ho...

Omkara- Haan rudra main theekh Hun and chulbul ka muje abhi kuch nhi pata chala but tuje ek kaam krna Hai chulbul ki family k baare mein pata Kar kaha Hai Kya krte Hai aur abhi Kya kar rhe hai specially uski biwi k baare mein main nhi chaahta kaapi uski family tak pahunche.. aur Jahan tak cgulbul k bolne k style se lgta Hai ki voh barielly ka aaspaas k hi gaon se hain.. aur muje bta main unhe safe jagah pahuncha dunga...

Rudra- ok bro! I will do it... And main aapko btata Hun...

Jhanvi was listening and got scared of omkara's reaction that what will he do when he will got to know about gauri... She went to rudra for stopping him from telling or finding the truth... But rudra convinced jhanvi that don't worry I won't tell but he will show the reason behind gauri bhabhi's like why have she told him a lie? By which omkara will be able to understand her situation...

Next day omkara was waiting for rudra's call and was worried here kaali was preparing for the wedding... Gauri was worried about omkara that how will she protect him she knew omkara will not go without chulbul and how could he tell that she is chulbul because she knew omkara will not understand.

In afternoon Rudra called him and told that he had a address where chulbul's mother is living with his childhood friend and she can tell about chulbul's wife to omkara. Omkara cut the call and left the havelli as soon as he got the opportunity he was extra careful from kaali's men and easily dodged him.

He reached at chulbul's friend's home and a lady opened the door. She greeted him and told to come inside omkara touched her feet she got overwhelmed and told him to sit. Omkara told he doesn't have time he come here to pick her and he shift her in safe place. The lady asked why what happen? Omkara interrupted her and told he will explain later but he told chulbul is in danger and he will save him but before he wants chulbul's family to be safe.

Lady was shocked what omkara was saying md asked chulbul kaun Hai? Aur gauri kaha Hai?
Omkara was speechless.. he said chulbul apka beta humaare yaha kaam krta Hai and gauri ap gauri k baare mein kyu puch rhi Hai...

Lady told main kisi chulbul ko nhi jaanti gauri kaha Hai ? Kya voh tumhre pass nhi aayi tumne toh shaadi ki thi naa usse... Maine usse Mumbai bheja Tha... Shaadi chaahe jaise b ho shaadi shaadi hoti Hai...Hai bhagwaan Meri bchi Mumbai Mei. Kha hogi...

Omkara was surprised to see the lady.. he got inquisitive and asked apko pata Hai apki beti kaali thank k yaha Hai... Usse shaadi krne jaa rhi Hai. Pehle b yhi Kar rhi thi. Maine toh usse sirf gain vaalon see bchaane k liye shaadi ki thi vo toh paison k liye fir se usse krne ja... Before he completed the sentence he felt a strong slap on his face and got the realty check. Lday told him the truth.. Meri beti na pehle uss insaan shaadi krna chaahti thi naa ab.

Tum kyanjaano bchpan se usne kya saha Hai.. pehle uske papa guzar gye for uske chacha chaachi ne naukar bna Kar rkha... Meri beti Meri dwaayi k liye kaam krti thi bhagwaan k kapde bechti this par na jaane kaunsa manhus din Tha ki kaali thank ki Nazar Meri bchi par padi. Usne usko merko maarne ki dhmki dekar shaadinkrna chaaha yhi hi nhi balki apne bhaahyon ka saath b jaise taise krke voh vaha se bhaagi aur fir tumne use shaadi krke use bchaaya...

Tum toh chale gye main hi pagal this Jo usse vachan le bhaiti ki voh iss rishte ko nibhaayegi... Mere kehne par Mumbai gyi thi voh... Par naa jaane kaise voh uss raavan k changul mein fass gyi ab kya karun mein... She was holding him... She requested him tum toh uske pati ho... Usse bcha lo voh Mar jaayegi vaha... Main haath jodti Hun pair pdti Hun omkara stopped her and told and assured her that he will save her and he left.

The realization dawned upon him he got to know the truth about gauri but one thing was not clear why rudra sent him here rather to chulbul's home. Then realty seeped that chulbul was actually garui... That's why he always feel that he behaves like girl...

He was angry but knowing gauris truth he felt bad for misunderstanding her and thought to help her and give her right but first thing was how to escape kaali thakur.

He left for haveli.

It was night gauri came in her room. Omkara had sneaked to her room and was hiding behind the curtain of window. It was the night of full moon and the moon light had illuminated the room for two souls. Gauri was worrying what will she do... She came to window and seeing the moon and omkara was seeing her from the bed post... Gauri was wondering and without realizing someone's presence started talking. Shankar ji ab main kya Karu Kyu aone omkara ji ko yaha bheja voh chulbul k begair jaayenge nhi aur chulbul unke saath kaise jaaye... Voh main hu aur jab unhe yeh pata chalega voh aur nafrat karenge pehle hi voh vishwas nhi krte tab toh voh aur pathar Dil ban jaayenge... Humein iss mushkil bahar nikalo Shankar ji.. aap hi toh ho Jo humesha humaari madad k liye kisoko bhej dete Hai aapne hi omkara ji ko behja Tha humaari madad k liye ap hi NE unhe humaare pati k roop mein chuna. Maante Hai omkara ji humein apni patni nhi maante humein ummeed b nhi Hai magar. Hum maante Hai hum unhe sahi salaamat dekhna chaahte Hai nhi chaahte kaali thank ka saaya b unpe aur unki family PE pade.. pleaj kuch b karo unhe yaha se dur bhej do...


Kaash hum Mar jaate toh omkara ji ko yaha nhi aana hota unki mom ko voh sab nhi sehna hota pr yeh kaali.thakur humein Marne b toh nhi deta... Kya kare hum... Ab toh hum omkara ji ki madad b nhi Kar Skte... Ab Shankar ji aapka hi Sahara.. vo kehte Hai na jiska aap rakshak uske kaun bhakshak...

Gauri went to her bed and try to sleep. She knew she wouldn't but she have to... But today she got the peaceful sleep as if she knew omkara is here.

Omkara listened to her talks and thought how much he misunderstood he thought gauri was right when she said kabhi kbhi Sach ouch aur hota Hai Jo dikha nhi Hai kbhi kbhi usse dhundhna pdta Hai kaash pehle Maine try kiya hota... Pr ab jab pata chala toh omkara Singh oberoi apna vaada jarur nibhayega gauri fikar mat kro main tumhe iss jgh se jarur nikalunga chulbul aur gauri dono hi Meri responsibility ho aur meri taaqat b aakhir best buddy Jo Hai... So don't worry bas todhi so der uske baad tum mere saath hogi.. ik best buddy ki trh nhi ek biwi ki trh...haan todha time lagega pr Jo tumhre Shankar ji ne humein sompa Hai use pure Dil se nibhaunga.. he went toward her and he touched her face with his gentle hands. And left from there.


the end of chapter 2




hi i have update chapter 2 i hope you like it
Edited by IlaTanwar - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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When will the story start?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow!!!!

Nivi... It was more than I expected...
Its sooo good... and liked the way you brought the ironic situation...
Loved it😳...

Thanks for the update...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mahi, the title is very good. Apt for the situation in the story.
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Originally posted by: Mahira_khan


Wow!!!!

Nivi... It was more than I expected...
Its sooo good... and liked the way you brought the ironic situation...
Loved it😳...

Thanks for the update...


Thanks Mahi. I'm glad the chapter met upto your expectations.
Cheers,
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congo Mahi for this interesting thread👏
And Tejuuu so lovely banners yaar...love them ..😳😃

Nivi awesome start dear...


Ps- Hum tho likhne layak nahi hai..par encourage tho zaroorar karenge😃...

And I can see that the list of writers are all very good ones at writing and am following all of their stories. .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nivi U put everything in such a nice manner.. loved it.. Thanks for it..
Waiting for next one.. who is gonna continue it..
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Originally posted by: ss1609

Congo Mahi for this interesting thread👏

And Tejuuu so lovely banners yaar...love them ..😳😃

Nivi awesome start dear...


Ps- Hum tho likhne layak nahi hai..par encourage tho zaroorar karenge😃...

And I can see that the list of writers are all very good ones at writing and am following all of their stories. .

Thanks Sumi.. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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And we begin.. n what a beginning.. really liked it..


Well written .. goes without saying.. loved that the stories begin from a point in the show.. so now we are gonna have the reel on one side n our fabulous writers on the other side.. n even when cvs falter m sure we can take heart from our writers here :)..

Loved the irony,, the inherent helplessness n the sadness.. can't wait to read on..

Thanks for this Nivi... hope I can call you that :)

Neha
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Originally posted by: ss1609

Congo Mahi for this interesting thread👏

And Tejuuu so lovely banners yaar...love them ..😳😃

Nivi awesome start dear...


Ps- Hum tho likhne layak nahi hai..par encourage tho zaroorar karenge😃...

And I can see that the list of writers are all very good ones at writing and am following all of their stories. .

The banners are indeed great, Teju (I can call you like that, right). And thank you so much for the appreciation, Sumi.

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