RiKara sToRy CiRcLe [CHAPTER 3 UPDATED] - Page 3

Originally posted by: --Zehnaseeb--

Nivi U put everything in such a nice manner.. loved it.. Thanks for it..

Waiting for next one.. who is gonna continue it..

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me

And we begin.. n what a beginning.. really liked it..
Well written .. goes without saying.. loved that the stories begin from a point in the show.. so now we are gonna have the reel on one side n our fabulous writers on the other side.. n even when cvs falter m sure we can take heart from our writers here :)..
Loved the irony,, the inherent helplessness n the sadness.. can't wait to read on..
Thanks for this Nivi... hope I can call you that :)

Neha

Hi Nivi.. Thank U.. 😊 yup U can call me teju..

Chapter 2 update by me hope you like it... I was thinking of his scenario from the beginning...

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

Chapter 2 update by me hope you like it... I was thinking of his scenario from the beginning...

awww the second chapter was really superb

Revelation in a simple and straight forward way . Loved the last part where Om was slowly accepting Gauri as his wife. Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: yayini

superb Ila.. Chulbul to Gauri revelation is done in an unexpected way simple and sweet without much drama.. Loved it..

Thank you glad you like the revelation of the story... I wanted omkara to know that some lies are also positive right now he got to know the some lies are told so that there loved ones should be safe... And after this it's upto the other writers to show how will they show gauris like of hiding her as chulbul to omkara... How will they show some lies are not harmful but bring the truth from the dark

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

Chapter 2 at page 2