Poetry: Sita's Swayamvara

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Madhuri

@Viswasruti

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Posted: 8 years ago

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A bow - breaking and enormously innovative poem , great emphasis on the sensitive feelings of a young princes Devi Sita dealt with tenderness by the poetess beautifully .😊

The rhyme and lyricism accelebrate all words shine with wonderful feelings which carries emotions with intimate delight !

You draw a visual picture with carefully selected words with enormous expressions in this Swyamvara poem ! Bow my head with appreciation for the poetess in you whom I like most . ⭐️

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Janaki

@RamKiSeeta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Wow Ramya, your poem is absolutely beautiful!

You found the perfect rhyming words, each one enhancing the scene you depicted divinely. I could literally picture the scene playing out in my mind, absolutely love it! You portrayed Sitaji's thoughts and feelings perfectly.

I suck at poetry, so I appreciate how hard you worked on each line, because I know just how difficult it is. Really well done!

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crazygul

@crazygul

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

by your poetry Ramya i felt the divinity of the real event thousands years ago. May Siya Ram bless you forever, i wish you write one shots. Fan fictions on Lord Rama and Devi Sita. 👍🏼

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