Poetry: Sita's Swayamvara

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Posted: 8 years ago
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So this is for my dear friend Srutha cause if it wasn't for her, i wouldn't have written this. A poetic tribute to the magnificent swayamvara of Devi Sita.

SITA'S SWAYAMVARA

The bride decked in jewels of price,
Her pious presence healing pain and vice,
Descended down the dreamy stairs,
Garnering many a lovelorn stare.

Among the royal descendants was a pair of earnest eyes,
Keenly eyeing not the beauty but the bow of fierce,
Courage and might endorsing his gait,
Silently honouring the testament of wait.

By and by the princes came,
Tried and tried but failed to claim,
The hand of the princess of charming ways,
As the bow stood sturdy and the target at bay.

And then was his turn, Raghuveer by name,
The pride of Raghukul and of immense fame.
Walking into the arena, saluting the weapon of the lord,
He strung it and it struck a chord.

Breaking under his incredulous strength, it fell,
Causing the spectators to rise and quell,
The apprehension of the old king and his kin,
A sight to behold, it was a triumphant win.

Beaming with reverence the princess stood,
Garland in hand, she walked up to him,
Into his neck it went and she shyly grinned,
Joy started to float and flowers were bestowed in whim.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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You know I always loved your poems . 😳
This one is beautifully written . Great way with words and a brilliant way of description .
do write more poems .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG! This is so so so sweet! Loved the sense of grandeur that you maintained throughout! Very beautiful! <3
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ResWa😆
I love you 🤗
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Rammy 🤗
Awesome dear!!!! So beautiful <3!!

I've been reading a lot of poetry nowadays,and you just topped it all!!!

Siya-Ram ❤️!

Really nice dear, right from the description of her beauty to the Swayamvars description!!!

Keep the awesome work coming!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is one of the best poems I have ever read. Lovely work Di.
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Beautiful poem there Ramya👏
loved itt😊
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Fabulous poem Ramya😊
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Delicate and beautiful! Well carved and etched!
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You be the best, detailed review ke liye waiting karing pleej. <3

I loveee <3
Sorry, my vocab died. It is a beautiful piece of work, that just flows as poetry should. Rhyming is something I suck at, and you have a gift for writing poetry. This was not too sugary, sweet in the right measure and so enrapturing!
I wanna see so many more of your poems 😉
I wanna see something on Parth also *wistful sigh*

Enough of my random comments, I will leave you in peace! 😆
Much love <3
Edited by Shrinika13 - 8 years ago

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