PriVeer Story Circle- Season 2 (Last Updated 07.07.17) - Page 33

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Anu, we're all geared up for your update! 😉
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Update will be up within an hour 😳
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By the time Svetlana had returned after finding her friend, Prinku had had two more shots of tequila, and the world was growing fuzzy around her for real.

"Ippy, meet Prinku. Prinku, meet Ippy," she introduced them.

"Ippy?" Prinku giggled, wrinkling her nose. "What a cute name! Ip hic py...Heee."

"She is a little drunk," Svetlana chuckled, noticing the extra glasses next to Prinku.

Prinku giggled again, and shrugged. "Who knew alcohol, as bad as it tastes, could be so much of fun?!"

She saw Ippy grimace. "Sounds like something one would say at Alcohol Anonymous."

Svetlana laughed. "Oh Ippy, relax. Prinku's just enjoying her new found freedom. She is finally an adult now, after all."

"Should we drive her home?" Ippy asked, and Svetlana snorted.

"Drive her home? Ippy, you are forgetting who she is. Look, her brothers are here. And so are a handful of guards. She will be taken care of," she assured Ippy.

Prinku, though, wasn't paying attention to anything but just one word of their conversation.

"Drive!" she suddenly yelled.

"Sshh," Svetlana shushed her.

"No, Lana, I am 18 now. Do you know what that means?"

"...That you can have way more drinks than you should?" Ippy suggested, still eyeing the new drink the bartender had just handed her warily.

"That...and well, I can drive now! I am an adult! Hah!" Prinku went on.

For a moment, or longer, all Priyanka heard was the fast music number playing in the background. The new girl was staring at her, her face a cross between incredulity and amusement, while Svetalana's eyes had widened rather comically.

"You know what? You are right! You should give driving a go sometime soon...I mean, who can exactly say no to a birthday girl?" Svetlana proposed with a shrug, replacing the drink in Prinku's hand with a glass of water, as if to drive her point home. Just one glass of water wasn't going to cut it if Prinku wants to be sober enough to drive, considering how much of hard liquor she had just consumed, but the Oberoi princess didn't know that, did she?

Prinku gulped the glass of water down in one go, and bit back the wave of nausea that consumed her immediately.

"Time to head back home, then," she announced, and the Prinku back then had no idea why Svetlana gave her a smirk.

"I...I don't think that's a good -" Ippy started with a nervous laughter, but Svetlana cut in

"Bring her to Om," she instructed the nearest guard, nodding towards Prinku. With that, Svetlana bid the birthday girl goodbye, and tugged Ippy along.

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It was no surprise, therefore, that hours later, Prinku was the one behind the wheel.

"Prinku, you have to be carefuly, alright? It's pretty slippery from the rain, and "

"Bhaiya, I got it! Don't worry!" came the slightly annoyed reply. She wasn't listening to him at this point. The alcohol still left in her system, coupled with the fact that she was actually driving a car, was enough aldrenaline; Priyanka pressed her foot against the accelerator.

"Prinku -"

"O Bhaiya, I got it, na! See!" she laughed, and her brother relaxed a little seeing the empty Old Bridge road ahead of them.

And then BAM!

"BHAIYA!"

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With a gasp, Prinku returned to the present. She was clutching the brooch so tightly in her hand, it was leaving a fine imprint on her palm. But that wasn't her concern now.

Ippy. She remembered her.

That was the girl she had run over.

Prinku shut her eyes, trying to remember the finer details of the accident. The girl she had hit, the face was covered in cuts and bruises, and blood...oh, so much of blood! But in her alcohol and panic-induced haze, Prinku had barely registered her face. She only remembered telling O Bhaiya that the girl had been present at the party, when they had admitted her to the hospital in an attempt to save her life.

She had refused to let herself remember the disastrous night since then, but now that she did...the memory of it baffled her.

Svetlana knew Ippy.

As if on auto-pilot, she reached for her phone with her free hand, and dialled Ranveer's number. One hand clutching the brooch, one hand on her phone, holding on to both as if her life depended on them.

"Priyanka?" His voice, and the concern laced in it, washed over her very briefly like a wave of tranquillity.

"Ranveer? We need to talk."

Edited by emerald39 - 8 years ago
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@Twerps
The interrogation room part was damn awesome.I liked that part so much that when I was making strange faces my parents suddenly raised their brows to notice was their daughter officially out of mind or not. 😃 😃 I really don't have the exact words to express my feelings of the way I liked the ACP and Dev.I just loved that part. Also I liked the way u have come up with the real thing between Priyanka and Swetlana.
@Emerald
The drinks which Swetlana had made Priyanka gulp down was deliberate I think 😕. Also the way u have come up with the idea of making these three together was fabulous 😃. It made me feel like I was watching some Chick flick. Now what does she gonna do? Priyanka? Why did she call Ranveer? Okay for these answers we need updates !!! And that too soon 😳. I know I sound greedy. But I just love the way u all are updating 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
HoliCrappamoli! Anu Twerps Sarcy Darcy... You all seem to have PriVeer Fever! Update after update! Like it love it and want more of it!
Who would like to go next? 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Anu, super stuff! So Svetlana orchestrated the whole thing and got extra lucky when Prinku decided to be bratty and demanded to drive. Now that she knows that the girl was Ippy and the fact that she was Ranveer's sister, I can't wait to see how he will react! Volatile times ahead? 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Anu That was freaking fantastic! You have set in.motion the very meat of the problem...that whole scene was so fantastically played out. Sighhh...I wish we got to see this scene actually being enacted by the actors
@dimaag hahaha! I can imagine what your parents must have witnessed! I do that a lot and the most difficult part is when you realize that they are looking and you have to school your expressions into looking 'normal' 😆

And like Rishu said, so who will go next? Nav (dimaag) if you feel like writing the next update, drop a line. Otherwise Sarce, we can roll the ball back to you.😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
Okay, Twerps! Nav, let us know.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Okay, Twerps! Nav, let us know.



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@Dimaag Thank you, Nav! Even I am greedy for more updates now 😆
@Rishu 😆😆

@Sarce Thanks Sarce! Volatile and angsty, I am hoping...we'll see! 😳

@Twerps Thanks Twerps! Uff, I'd love to see it on screen as well. But for now, all updates are being played out in my head, so I can live with that 😆

Looking forward to read more updates

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