MG SS: ~ZINDAGI BAN GAYE HO TUM~|| NOTE PG 67 March 21

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suhaaana

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Posted: 8 years ago

INDEX

PROLOGUE PAGE 1
PART 1 PAGE 3
PART 2 PAGE 4
PART 3 PAGE 5

PART 4 PAGE 7

PART 5 PAGE 11
PART 6 PAGE 16
PART 7 PAGE 20
PART 8 PAGE 25
PART 9 PAGE 27

PART 10 PAGE 30

PART 11 PAGE 33
PART 12 PAGE 37
PART 13 PAGE 43
PART 14 PAGE 47
PART 15 PAGE 53

PART 16 PAGE 57

Edited by suhaaana - 6 years ago

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suhaaana

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Posted: 8 years ago

~zindagi ban gaye ho tum~

Prologue

Shh.. Its alright its alright I am here, nothing is going to happen to you. Please ... Are you listening .. Meri baat suno.. Don't close your eyes.. Maan. No.. Don't die... Don't.. I can't see one more.. Please no.. She wiped the blood that was on his forehead in order to stop it but it was not stopping.

Babaji , ye mar jayega.. Please help me.. Her chanting was also not helping her. No.. Don't die.. Maan no.. She just closed her eyes for a brief moment and next moment she made him lie on the ground and brought help..

Please bhaiyyaji.. Help me.. He will die.. Please bhaiyaji.. For humanity help us.

Sorry madamji.. Par hum aise kisi bhi ajnabee ki madad nai karsakte. The driver denied straightway. She was terrified and the man was loosing his breaths one by one.

Waise bhi aapka koi nai lagta h ye . chod dijiye yahin.. aur aap bhi jaiye madamji. The driver suggested her but her response made him help her.

Pati hai mera .. He is my husband please bhaiyaji help me.. Bahut khoon beh gya h .. Please help me the lady begged and the driver helped...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

Congrats on the OS! superb prologue! she is demanding someone 2 help her as Maan wil die! wt happened 2 Maan! Is Geet his wife? update soon

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Keepdreaming

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Posted: 8 years ago

scary prologue
maan in terrible condition
and no one is helping

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Posted: 8 years ago

Sad pro..maan fighting for his life

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sanum23

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Posted: 8 years ago

nice pro

maan injured and bleeding badly

woman asking fr help

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pop77

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Posted: 8 years ago

Congrats for new story...

waiting for update...

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suhaaana

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Posted: 8 years ago

Teaser

He needs blood .. Mrs Khurana , you need to arrange for that. The medical expenses and bills , please check them too. We can't proceed before the legal formalities are done. He had been stabbed very badly and complications are there. We need to start it as soon as possible.

Doctor do anything you want. But please save him. I will clear all the bills now. And blood I .. We..don't have any relatives and can I donate if.

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Don't worry darling , there is no MAAN SINGH KHURANA now . everything is ours and Make sure that you do whatever is planned. He will not come now.

Edited by suhaaana - 6 years ago