MG SS: ~ZINDAGI BAN GAYE HO TUM~|| NOTE PG 67 March 21 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb pro maan is injured n geet is asking for help no one is helping them who done that to him waiting update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1

She was looking lost in the deep recesses of her past. The past that was haunting her now. Her eyes were wet , lips dried and broken will to live. She was looking at the cliff in order to find some solace. It was very difficult for her to take that decision. Looking at the vast emptiness, she cried. Her cries were echoed in the empty vast land.

Why me .. Kyun babaji. Kyun kiy aisa mere saath , she looked at herself, she was dressed in a very old suit and her skin was pale , tears were flowing freely. She had a piece of broken glass in her hand and her mind was contemplating whether she should end her all the miseries at once she had already cut the skin and blood was flowing from the cuts she was lost in her thoughts when something diverted her attention.

Sa..v.e. .. Me.. She heard a faint voice. Save me.. The voice was very dull and it was appearing that someone was in a deep pain.

She quickly wiped her tears and dropped the glass from her hand. Wiping her tears with the dupatta she went towards the source of the voice. After walking some distance , she looked at the figure lying in the middle of the thorny bushes. There was so much of blood there and she quickly
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Edited by suhaaana - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice start
oh different start from what I thought
maaneet not married
he totally stranger still geet trying best to help her
but that man so heartless refused to help...
abb kya hoga
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg..very shocking n sad part yaar... geet was in misery n wanted to end her life but stop hearing maan cry fr help..she want to save maan so lied to the bypasser that maan was her husband..cant wait fr next part..the truth is maan n geet hv save each other unintentionaly..tk u.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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some one hurt one geet asking for help no body helping her so she leid that he is her husband nice update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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some one hurt one geet asking for help no body helping her so she leid that he is her husband nice update soonn
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update geet was standing on a cliff she had a horrible past and she was totally shattered contemplating whether she should end her life or not when she heard a very weak voice of help she went to see a man lying in a pool of blood desperately trying to ask for help geet came to it was maan she didn't know him but was very scared and wanted to save him she was asking for help but no one was ready to help her in desperation to save maan she told she is his wife the driver agreed to help her
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting starting...

loved it ...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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terrific update! superbly written! Geet sad! her past is haunting her! wt is her past! so Maan is nt her husband bt a stranger she helps! who did this 2 Maan?? the man refused 2 help! waiting 4 next

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice part di!
Poor Geet trying to end her life at the same time pleading to save him
Omg! That is Maan...
I think smone tried to kill maan for property :(
Geet has a good heart!though she doesn't know him..she is trying every possible way to help him!
The fate binded them together. ...to save his life she didn't end hers..
Loved it di! Plzz continue soon

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