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hai yeh banner kita sunder hai...mar java gur kha k 🤣🤣🤣

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hai yeh banner kita sunder hai...mar java gur kha k 🤣🤣🤣

aye haye... marjava gud khake...
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aye haye... marjava gud khake...


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badi hasi a ri hai😆😆
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badi hasi a ri hai😆😆

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Chapter 1
New day ,new life

Hey mann mohan..hey mann mohan..
Hey mann mohan..

This melodious voice heard by the elder member of the family who was awaken she came out from her room n found no one in hall... Then who is singing the prayer at very morning she thought... Oh may be it her illusion ... but no again she heard the same melody she padded towards sacred place "MANDIR"... There what she saw crept a smile on her face ... She is the new member of the house who has been added in family yesterday only... But wait ... what she is doing added to such early hours...didn't she had slept or didn't she tired after their first night... With this thought lady took her steps forward towards Mandir n stand beside the bride... n started listen her melodious voice but there is some kind of pain in her voice... She will ask this later she thought


Hey muralidhar hey damodar
Krishana muraari hey natnagar
Hey muralidhar hey damodar
Krishana muraari hey natnagar

Members of the family started joining in to the sacred place n getting mesmerised by this melodious voice but no one know what havoc their new bride getting through
Bhul gaye kyaa binati sunkar
Bhul gaye kyaa binati sunkar


Her voice shakes a little on this line ... No one having an idea what is happening to her



Hey mann mohan hey karunakar
Hey muralidhar hey damodar
Krishana muraari hey natnagar


Andhiyare mein gire hue hoon hey gopala
Jyotipunj bankar raah dikhaao hey nand lala
Kaise paar karungi tum bin
Kaise paar karungi tum bin
Jeevan saagar hey karunakar
Hey muralidhar hey damodar
Krishana muraari hey nandnagar

Some old memories flash in her mind which bring more tears in her eyes and left more pain in chest...


Hey muralidhar hey damodar
Krishana muraari hey natnagar

Kanhaa..krishana..hey kanhaa.

Prayer is completedby now and everyone join their hands in respect... Waah kya baat hai subha subha itni meethi awaz se starting hui said the male member whilst all just nod their head in agreement ...Listen the voice bride wiped the tears that were making way out of her eyes and replace the sad face into smiling one turn to face the members of the family... She saw her in laws standing there Dadi maa Papa Ji Mummy Ji Devar ji Bua ji Chacha ji Chachi ji n Badi maa and Masi maa...


She give arti to all members n after that she put the sacred thaal at mandir... n bent to touches the feet of her in laws in respect...


Beta u woke up so early... ask dadi maa to her new bahu... Ji dadi maa... vo m habitual to it replied came from her... Acha... go and take rest ab.. u must be tired... U r the new bride u have to take rest... Hmm beta dadi maa said to her while caressing her cheeks...She just nod her head in reply. ..


Vaise bahu u sing very well ... we weren't aware that our bahu have such a sweet voice ... aj ka to din ban gya(today you made my day) said the father in law... Aj ka hi ni papa ab to roz roz bhabi ka bhajan sunne ko milega (not only today dad daily we are going to listen the sweet melodious voice) said her Devar ji...Han Han vhi to (yes yes that only I mean to say) FIL replied and he fished his hand in pocket take out money from it and give to his bahu or ye betaji ka Inaam (and here is your prize) he also caresses her head lovingly in return she touch his feet in respect...


Ary every thing is fine... I think bhai is still sleeping he is tired by yesterday night... lagta hai zyada mehnt ki hai bhai ne siblings stated making fun of the groom who is nowhere to be found till now...Chalo chalo let's go to him and wake him up...lagta haI sapne me bhi vo bhabi k sath ahem ahem kar rhe hai (I think he is doing ahem ahem with babhi in dream also) and every one started laughing whilst sibling went off to disturb the sleep of their bhai but all are unaware what the bride is feeling right now...


She isn't enjoying the talks her heart is crying her soul left her body the day she came to know about her marriage being fixed to another man ... How much she tried to talk to her parents to break the alliance she doesn't want to marry anyone other tHan the love of her life whom she gave her everything ... Her soul Her beats her breaths her body and her heart ...But fate played with her by such a cruelty ... Now nothing can be fixed she don't know about her love's whereabouts or how he is right now ...is he aliv or dead.. Yes he is dead that day only when she died but now their body is only present their souls left their bodies that day only ... This society is very unfaithful, it can not bear anyone's happiness , wants, desire,love, all it concerned with only their conservative thoughts...

Her revire broke by the sound of laughing coming from stairs ... Surybhan what is this ?? Why are u sleeping till now ... Jodha already woke up since first ray of sun peep in your room n you were sleeping till now... scolded dadi maa to her grandson ... He ruffles his hairs n smile sheepishly vo dadi u know na m not a morning person by saying this he hug her btw good morning meri princess and kissed dadi maa's cheek

Hmm... chalo ab get ready for the further functions after wedding directed dadimaa... Kyaaa or bhi functions...(what...more functioni? ?) came a replied. .. han beta or functions replied his mother Surekha ... Oh maa... I hate sitting on one place and gazing everyone like a moron Surya replied childishly... Acha gazing like a moron chalo jao ab or bahu ko bhi saath le jao (now go n take ur bride with u as well) said dadimaa ... ummm... bhabi ko sath to le ja rhe ho bhaiya lekin fir se start mat ho jana jate hi (u r talking bhab along with u Bro but don't start again after reaching to room😆😆😆) teased his brother... chup kar Alok (shut your mouth alok)replied surya ...

He guided jodha to their room... and jodha followed him numbly to room


After reaching to their room they didn't talk a word... he was about to enter in washroom but heard the knock he opened the door and findo his sister holding a tray of breakfast for them he took the tray n shut the door on the face of his sister whilst his sister said irritatedly huh...some is so desperate Han? ? N run out from there... He also laughed also on his sister's childishness... He put the tray in front of her n ask her to do breakfast he will join after freshing him up with that he left for washroom whilst she didn't even touch the plate she got up fromg bed n stand near by window to have some fresh air but this air is also suffocating her... then she remind something ... Jodha tumhe jab bhi akela mehsoos ho just close your eyes and think about the moments we spen together you wil feel happy n this air will also ease your pain after that ... She did the same but it's not happening ... The moments she spent with her jalal is suffocating her instead of easing her pain those moments are working as a salt on wounds... air is suffocating her...she wants to runaway...she want to be with her jalal he can only ease her pain ... she want his arms around her petite waist whilst one hand caressing her hairs n sayang sweet thing in her ears... Jalal she said with so much painful voice ... plaese take me away jalal... plaese take me with you or else I will die here... take your jodha with you jalal...She blackout after that... Only heard her name Jodhaaa...


Precap:: didn't decided yet...



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Edited by harrystyolic - 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story Di

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