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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Radhika_r
Loved this story! Pl do keep writing

Thanks Radhu!

Next story's 1st part is coming out on Friday.

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vinlora

@vinlora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Amazing peice of work..beautifully written. ..loved it...loved sukor ..and loved shatanuu...thank u so much. .

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: vinlora
Amazing peice of work..beautifully written. ..loved it...loved sukor ..and loved shatanuu...thank u so much. .

Thanks for reading and letting me know your opinion!

Glad you liked it!

It's my pleasure to be useful(make someone smile or...)

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

OMG...what a masterpiece.👏

read all the parts in one go,and Maithu yaar THIS ONE LITERALLY POSSESED ME...❤️

I just love reading this kind stuff...🤓..this rollercoaster ride of complex and conflicting emotions...Maithili you have teased the inner demon inside me with this one,and yes, for all the right reasons...⭐️

Some parts made my eyes moist...😭.and the most incredible part NO MATTER HOW MUCH THE PLOT OR CHARACTERS ARE DIFFERENT...WE READERS KNOW THE PROTAGONISTS AS SUKOR...OUR SUKOR...AND IN SPITE OF BEING A COMPLETE OUT OF THE BOX CONTRASTING CHARACTERS...THE INSIDE REAL TRAITS OF YOUR CHARACTERS IS VERY MUCH SIMILAR TO THE REAL SUKOR...and thats were you nail it...👏

The first part was ahmazing...you are also good in adult writing😉,but not as Sanya...[dont mind,I am being honest].😛

But I really did not get the "shower...save water part"...not even in the 'cup of coffe TS'...😈.[dont think I am being too naughty,but I really did not undrerstood it,that is why asking]...😎

I was very happy,when got to know the good news😕but alas if only Chakor was pregnant in the show as well and it would have been best if Suraj would have been impotent in the show...😆

Anyways,,,,,,,,this "My Possesion" has been included in my list of 're-reads'...

Its indeed a special one.😊

Good job done Maithili...👍🏼

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: KUTUR
OMG...what a masterpiece.👏
read all the parts in one go,and Maithu yaar THIS ONE LITERALLY POSSESED ME...❤️

I just love reading this kind stuff...🤓..this rollercoaster ride of complex and conflicting emotions...Maithili you have teased the inner demon inside me with this one,and yes, for all the right reasons...⭐️

Some parts made my eyes moist...😭.and the most incredible part NO MATTER HOW MUCH THE PLOT OR CHARACTERS ARE DIFFERENT...WE READERS KNOW THE PROTAGONISTS AS SUKOR...OUR SUKOR...AND IN SPITE OF BEING A COMPLETE OUT OF THE BOX CONTRASTING CHARACTERS...THE INSIDE REAL TRAITS OF YOUR CHARACTERS IS VERY MUCH SIMILAR TO THE REAL SUKOR...and thats were you nail it...👏

The first part was ahmazing...you are also good in adult writing😉,but not as Sanya...[dont mind,I am being honest].😛

But I really did not get the "shower...save water part"...not even in the 'cup of coffe TS'...😈.[dont think I am being too naughty,but I really did not undrerstood it,that is why asking]...😎

I was very happy,when got to know the good news😕but alas if only Chakor was pregnant in the show as well and it would have been best if Suraj would have been impotent in the show...😆

Anyways,,,,,,,,this "My Possesion" has been included in my list of 're-reads'...
Its indeed a special one.😊

Good job done Maithili...👍🏼

Thanks for the compliments!

It's the first time I was writing something like that and as I said in the Fs, I didn't wanted to prolonge that part.😉

Yep I agree with u that Sanya is best in that, even BreakingBlue.

I'm sure u know what "The saving water" concept means.😊

You see in COC, Suraj wanted Chakor to wait for him everyday morining to take a shower after their long workout session but she is not cooperating in that.

So I made her cooperate with him in MP. (I don't want to do in detail what they do under shower or inside a tub)😳

For Chakor to be preg, first Suraj has to sleep on bed by her side and a lot of things to happen.😛

But for now, poor Chakor is going in to deep pain day by day.😭

Thanks once again dear.