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rarefan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Loved the update. I really hope om comes back in the next shot. Do continue soon

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Monidipa konar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

luving it...want to read more...😊

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farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Nyc and intriguing
I can't see him like this devastated...It pained me
Thnx fr pm
Continue asap do pm me

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Himanshi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

its too emotional Di ...
u made me almost cry... shivaay is broken he need someond bt he has no one ... r u planing 2 give happy ending or again sad one... :-( plz cont. soon...
thanks 4 PM

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MafiaQueen17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Emotional update 😭
shivaay suffering so much
i can't see shivaay like this
anika samir engagement hell no
plzz make everything right
countinue soon waiting

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Anya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: water9786

What was this dear?? Totally loved it.
You must continue it. I am waiting. Please update as soon as possible.
Update was superb. Shivaay is totally broken. I really don't know why but I am not liking Anika after reading this. I know Shivaay was wrong but I love Shivaay more than Anika so biased towards him😳
Anika and Sameer engagement😭
Rudra not picking up his call, have not seen him even once since three months, Dadi ignored him, Om and Prinku are also not there,where are Shakti, Jahanvi and Tej? And Saumya and Gauri?????😭😭
About Pinky I just hate her 😡
Waiting for next update do continue soon Anya Di.

Since I have read MPBTC I want that story to continue and have a happy ending but did not tell you. But here you itself came up with sequel. Totally loved it. Please update soon.
You always nailed your stories dear. Hats off to you.
Update soon...
With Love
-Chhaya

First of all thank you very much Chhaya for this constructive feedback! I really appreciate it Embarrassed

and second please don't hate Annika darling! Well I also Love annika but my love for shivaay is hundred folds greater then her's but please don't dislike her.Dear There is alot more to this maybe Annika had her own problem?her own issues and that is the reason she is taking this step.Wait first let me tell you I havn't dicided yet what will I do to annika but it's just I wanted to make you understand that there must some reason she is taking this big step or her kind nature ahd led her into this.Or guilty? ok I won't tell much you wil come to know about it soon.

regarding other members I don't know what to write I have just highlighted the important people of shivaay's life which are more close to his heart and regarding pinky I won't be givina a description to her chahracter.It will totally mess my mind.So it's good to be away!

And the most important person that is Om-- he will not show up in this ts maybe or maybe not but he will be in this ts sequel which will come as soon as I finish this one.😉

I hope I have cleared everything.

Love yaa to,

-Anya

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Anya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Nohsin10
Emotional update
I can't see Shivaay like that.
Plzz make everything fine.
Poor Shivaay he is suffering so much
Omru should take care of Shivaay.
Plzz do continue
Can't wait to read more

Hello Nohsin 😃

well believe me I too hate myself for writting this as I also can't see him like this but anyways I will soon make all the things fine soon.😳

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Anya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz
God!!! Shivaay is suffering a lot..
OmRu shud be helping him..
kya disease hai Shivaay ko?
Haeh!!! Sameer n Annika getting engaged!?!?!?!?!
FTW!!! continue sooonish..

Hey buddy 😃

well I won't show much of Omru here but they will soon come into view.

about the disease you will come to know about it soon 😉

yeah,don't be shock they are getting engaged 😆 not married!

Love yaa,

-Anya 😳

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Anya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
I feel bad when I say this but I am enjoying Shivaay's pain!
But why is Annika marrying Sameer? Or is it some other Annika? Can't wait to know!

Do PM me the link when you update next! Good going ; )

-Sanu

Hello Sanu 🤗

hehehe! well atlast I got someone who is enjoying this suffering of shivaay 😆😆

No! there is no other annika in this as i'm fed with the duplicate shivaay long before. 🤣

well it's just an engagement not marriage so calm down darling 😆

And yes will surely Pm you,Can you do me a favour please buddy me as it will be easy for me to pm you 😛

Love yaa,

-Anya 😳

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: moon99
ANYA!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SO GOOOD! WHAT DO I SAY?

I am feeling so bad for Shivaay 😭 😭 😭 I know he picked this decision himself, but still Whenever you write, I can, for some reason, always connect to the characters despite never ever been in the same situation. 👏 ⭐️

But I have a feeling that very soon he get his life back, in one way or another... I mean he's got Rudra back, sort of 😕 , but very soon, I know he'll get his life back 😳 (Omg, I laugh if were to be completely wrong [=))

SAMEER AND ANIKA'S ENGAGEMENT !?! 😲 OH NO! 🤢 , BUT I WONDER, WHAT IF IT DOESN'THAPPEN AT ALL 😉

Anyways, I loved MPBTC ❤️, and I ❤️ this too!

LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT PART! 😛

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

P.S Thanks for the P.M!

Sims🤗

Glad that you love this story also!😆

Anyone will feel bad to see him like this well sort of me too 😭 I know it's crazy as I have only written this 🤣🤣 yes he will soon get his life back but there is lot more for that to come 😉 but I assure at the last he will get them back! 😃

@Bold : maybe 😉 but I'm not sure 😆

Loe you too,

-Anya 😳

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