Finally I got time to read🥳
To create a plot using emotions is difficult to write, here you have shown a character might act when frustrated in a situation-- Arnav's frustrating clash with his wife Khushi.
Climax has been portrayed well, fully enough to convince readers even they themselves might react differently.
Simply superb OS.
Like every time here are also some words or lines which I liked the most : just tears were packed in her suitcase, waves were a drumbeat that echoed my heart, building walls... with a moment of faith this line stole the all lime light in OS.
Edited by lovetoread08 - 9 years ago
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
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