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ArshiAsya

@Alai123

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Beautifully written OS

Thanks for the pm😉

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Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

My hands r itching for comment lol.

Swagat nahi karogey mera...

Chalo welcome song gaawo mere lye...

Di I m nt back BT I m nt gone too...

I m nt making any promises BT u m trying to b regular if internet raha toh otherwise Duaawo mai yaad rakhna

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xZoyax

@xZoyax

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Mysticaldivine

Leisure Writing Corner...where I wrote this with a random characters
It was random, this , you can see when I think so damn serious over any issue when brought up in front of me and I just wrote it, surfing over IF , ended up on LW thread and picked three words.see, this was random.Not crumbling embers😆

😆 ok baba this was random, sheesh

But do these random ones more often then

short and crisp

can we expect more, yes we can😳

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beyonddarkness

@beyonddarkness

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Amazing OS
You have portrayed emotions so beautifully
Frustration , anger can destroy so much if one keeps thing within oneself
As you described arnav's mindset that khushi was a easy target to vent out his emotions which is usually the case with so many people- spouse or any loved one -these are the easy targets because they love and trust you enough
It's like you summarised the whirlwind of emotions through this OS 👏

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xZoyax

@xZoyax

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Lazyblazy
First of All welcome back.😊

Seeing you after almost two years 😊 salam and hugs.
miss you really badly😭

That kid-father moment is what I love the most,and this is my belief

girl , this is beautiful👏

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Asha1968
Lovely... the castles built symbolic of trust shared made stronger by him. The love that they share does not need words to communicate

Thnx Asha dear <3

yes, castles of trust .

Absolutely , when you know someone and trust and love and faith is there, you don't need words

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: shils28
Beautiful!

Thnx shills dear <3

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: neha2013g
Beautiful OS 😊

Thnx neha dear <3

glad u liked it

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: pmohan89
Good to see you there, after some time.😊

Very expressive and enveloped in the reality.

Love the analogy of castle👏

Thnx Priya dear <3

yes, after a while

yes true reality , no fiction

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sloppyjoe

@sloppyjoe

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Amazing and sensitive 👏

A human is a slave towards his emotions and you have captured that train of thoughts and emotions of Arnav beautifully.Khushi doesn't need his words, she knows every meaning of his touch and his look.What a bond of trust and love they share?

The climax is heart touching ❤️

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