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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 8 years ago

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xZoyax

@xZoyax

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful Faiqa, 👏

Arnav's state of mind has been portrayed so well.Naked truth of letting the frustration out over spouses is natural among couples, but the bond they share with each other carries love, trust, faith beyond imagination over years, then things settle after a little burst out here and there.

A gripping moment if building walls of a faith of those tiny hands...you touched my heart with that.

Simply magnificent...⭐️

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

Lovely os faiqa...

A moment is what it needs to either make or break...

Waiting for more like this from you dear..

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lovetoread08

@lovetoread08

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Finally I got time to read🥳

To create a plot using emotions is difficult to write, here you have shown a character might act when frustrated in a situation-- Arnav's frustrating clash with his wife Khushi.

Climax has been portrayed well, fully enough to convince readers even they themselves might react differently.

Simply superb OS.

Like every time here are also some words or lines which I liked the most : just tears were packed in her suitcase, waves were a drumbeat that echoed my heart, building walls... with a moment of faith this line stole the all lime light in OS.

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Lazyblazy

@Lazyblazy

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

First of All welcome back.😊

Seeing you after almost two years 😊 salam and hugs.

miss you really badly😭

That kid-father moment is what I love the most,and this is my belief

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Such a meaningfully beautiful OS. Loved it

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chinnulu

@chinnulu

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

Thanks for a Beautiful OS

Loved it.

Have a nice weekend

Thanks

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Humayra
Beautifully written

Thnx Humayra dear <3

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: xZoyax
Beautiful Faiqa, 👏

Arnav's state of mind has been portrayed so well.Naked truth of letting the frustration out over spouses is natural among couples, but the bond they share with each other carries love, trust, faith beyond imagination over years, then things settle after a little burst out here and there.

A gripping moment if building walls of a faith of those tiny hands...you touched my heart with that.

Simply magnificent...⭐️

Thnx Zoya <3

It was just a random thought as we were talking in the Lab and just came up from nowhere.Actually, I was reading a story by angel and this LWC got my attention and here it is .I wrote there by using a random character, and I changed into Arshi here...

Yes, That was what I saw missing in that convo we had and terribly felt to my gut so wrote it.For a child his parents, both are pillars of faith and without one that emptiness stays hollow forever.

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