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Rosie Raven

@Rosie_Raven

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Beautifully written, Faiqa...It may be short than I'm used to reading your FFs and a OS, still I loved how your wrote it. 👏

And a beautiful moment indeed to be shared and enjoyed...<3

Rose Raven 😊

Edited by raven1603 - 8 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: lovetoread08
Finally I got time to read🥳
To create a plot using emotions is difficult to write, here you have shown a character might act when frustrated in a situation-- Arnav's frustrating clash with his wife Khushi.
Climax has been portrayed well, fully enough to convince readers even they themselves might react differently.
Simply superb OS.

Like every time here are also some words or lines which I liked the most : just tears were packed in her suitcase, waves were a drumbeat that echoed my heart, building walls... with a moment of faith this line stole the all lime light in OS.

Thnx lovetoread.😊

lol, Readers are like a mirror which shows different faces of a same person, meaning I see how different ppl think totally differently and bring the meanings of the same context over a broad spectrum.Not two minds alike.Same is the situation here in this OS, every marriage and couple is different...relationships are not simple stuff.

Glad to see your selection of words and lines, and phrases.

Good to see you😊

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: xZoyax

LWC ?

what is that?

It was random and so good if you paid attention then>No seriously a very gripping narration.
Very much true and Who knows more than me,

Leisure Writing Corner...where I wrote this with a random characters

It was random, this , you can see when I think so damn serious over any issue when brought up in front of me and I just wrote it, surfing over IF , ended up on LW thread and picked three words.see, this was random.Not crumbling embers😆

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Lazyblazy
First of All welcome back.😊

Seeing you after almost two years 😊 salam and hugs.
miss you really badly😭

That kid-father moment is what I love the most,and this is my belief