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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey I am back with another ViTharv OS!❤️



This is the scene I wished to see for their first night after their wedding. I wanted to see some passion and intensity and instead all we got was a stuffed tiger ruining it for these lovebirds.😳



ViTharv OS- Homecoming!

As he stopped the car, a familiar fragrance and warmth embraced Vividha. As she finally let the feelings sink in if them finally being married after all the trials and tribulations, she realised what had transpired. She was standing in front of her home, their home. She looked back to see the cow shed. He pulled her in a side hug, resting his one hand on her shoulder and pulling her closer, his other hand holding her hand tight, he led her to the cow shed.



Vividha: "Ye sab kya hai?...Hum yahan?"



Atharv: "Hamara pyaar yahan se shuru hua tha...Ab hum nayi shuruat kar rahe hai...to wo bhi yaheen se hogi...hamare ghar se..."



Vividha was a bit confused, but she was delighted. She was finally home, they were home and they would finally live the dream they always had! A small family, small moments and their small little world.



She walked around the animal shed, caressing the animals with love and tenderness. She finally saw Payal, happily sitting eating in one corner. Payal had a special place in Vividha's heart. The very moment when Payal was born and she had found Atharv! How they had met, their first fight, their first impression about each other. All those memories came flooding back. She choked a bit. A small tear trickled down her cheek.



He gently tapped her shoulder, and turned her around. He lowered his face and kissed away her pain. She smiled gently!


Atharv: "Mujhse shaadi karke pachtava ho raha hai?"


Vividha pushed him away and nodded in her trademark style.



Vividha: "What nonsense..."


She threw a pile of haystack at him. He dodged it luckily. He slipped down, but he didn't fall alone. He pulled her along. He fell and she fell atop him.


Vividha: "Yeh kya kiya tumne..." she said struggling out of his grip. It was easier said than done.


Atharv: "Kuch yaad aaya..."


Vividha: "Bahut kuch...tum hamesha aise karte ho...bade besharam ho..."



She made his arms secure her tightly around the waist. She let her fingers trace his face and neck. She deliberately rubbed her fingers near his lips, keeping him anticipating for a kiss. He closed his eyes to relish this moment and he all got was a look from her. This woman ignited his inner passions and triggered his wild side.



He pinned her down, and locked her hands, entwining their fingers, enjoying the sounds of her bangles. He looked down at her with lustful eyes, making current run in both of their bodies. He let his lips linger on her eye lids making her shiver. He later traced his lips on her face, taking in the moment to kiss every inch of her features. He traced down his fingers near her neck, sending shivers down her spine. He kissed her neck, biting the silky skin. She moaned in pain. He kissed her again, soothing the pain. As he moved a bit, his hand got dirty in the dung that was near them. He transferred that by mistake on her too.


He realised what had happened. He picked her up, without saying a word. He rushed them in the shower cubicle and let the water flow down their bodies. He gently caressed her face again, drinking water droplets, dripping down her face. She moaned in pleasure. He pressed his body against her, leaving no gap for even air to pass. He kissed her neck again, making her gulp. She dug her fingers deep in his flesh, making him wince in pain. He removed her hair pin which held her hair in place, letting her beautiful hair falling over her shoulders. He later removed all her jewellery one by one, placing butterfly kisses. Finally she was devoid of any piece of jewellery. He stepped down and removed her payal, kissing her ankles. He rose to see her all ignited by his fire. She pulled him and pushed him on the wall. She let her hands unbutton his kurta as she was herself busy exploring every nook and corner of his mouth. She threw away the kurta and was again mesmerized by his chiselled body and his cologne was making her impatient. She later kissed his neck, kissed his chest, biting on his nipples making him moan in desire. He unhooked her blouse and the pin that kept her wedding clothes in place.



He rushed themselves out of the bathroom and laid her down on the bed. He kissed her again, almost wanting to get over with, but not daring to yet, not sure which way to turn; and he didn't want to hurt her feelings. It was all a little more difficult that he'd thought. There was no memory, no time, and no other person; there was only Atharv and his incredible gentleness, his endless passion and love for her, as he moved ever so gently toward her, and they moved closer and closer, until suddenly they became one and she could feel herself melt into him and she could bear it no longer. It was all so exquisite, and then suddenly they both exploded in unison and Vividha lay in Atharv's arms in complete amazement. She had never known anything even remotely like that. There was no similarity at all with what had happened to her before, no memory, and no pain, there was nothing but Atharv now and the love they shared!


Vividha finally spoke in the entire moment!



Vividha: "Thankyou for being so gentle Atharv!"



Atharv pecked her forehead and pulled her closer in his embrace. They snuggled closer to each other, to feel the love they had for each other and the promise they had given each other, to stay together in health and sickness, in sadness and happiness.



As they had promised each other, a relation of equality, a relation of love, a relation of respect.



The End!

I hope I have lived upto the expectations of ViTharv fans!


Positive criticism welcome!😳

Love,

Mayu

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harmanjot thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayu🤗

It was simply amazing & beautiful!
It was visual treat to see Vitharv in intense romance
Thanks dear.


Sun mere humsafar
Kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar
Ki teri saanse chalti jidhar
Rahunga bas wahi umrr bhar
Rahunga bas wahi umrr bhar haaye




Edited by harmanjot - 8 years ago
taraka2005 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awsm OS Mau...ur OS arr always deligh to read than watching show itself...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Love your imagination
Wonderful story
Thanks for pm, love receiving them
Great job as usual
Edited by Pagalpinky - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayu this OS is so hit to handle thanks for this amazing OS i want to see Vitharv romancing in tabela but i dont 😃know when we will get but here u complete my wish 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful once again ❤️
Wish they could have shown us their SR in Ajmer rathwr than in Bhoot bangla. That cowshed is a raw place where vitharv belong to each other and their emotions and passion are.

I wish makers ask the fans ideas about the track, we can give them better ideas and more creativity than CVs. This would have been such a beautiful moment with such a hot couple and the chemistry at their disposal.

Anyways this visualization of SR atleast partly fulfilled our wish to see vitharv like being this close.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful mayu.i wish this was real.nut we got a clown tiger.i hope they get back to ajmir.there we can get beautiful scenes like that 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8
Beautiful OS Mayu. Wish we'd gotten to see this on reel. :(
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful OS mayu
i love reading your OS and vitharv SH is more beautifully written by you than the stupid makers who till now even didn't show us a proper consummation

loved reading it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: harmanjot

Mayu🤗


It was simply amazing & beautiful!
It was visual treat to see Vitharv in intense romance
Thanks dear.


Sun mere humsafar
Kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar
Ki teri saanse chalti jidhar
Rahunga bas wahi umrr bhar
Rahunga bas wahi umrr bhar haaye





Jottie🤗

Thankyou so much😳

I miss my intense and passionate ViTharv😭 Bahut saara miss.

I loved the lyrics you posted. Apt for ViTharv❤️

Love,
Mayu

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