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Arrey wah
Meri yeh waali maa to aur bhi jyaada acchi nikli
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Nhi mujje nhi pata dhanno kaun hai and gabbar obvio i know..
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Ha ha gayu di. Suchi yani flowers bhi bengali hai mere tarah.. Woh bhi mere age ki samjhi.. Hum do bengali and aapki cutie and anj.. Hum chaar ek age k hurandhar appe vetal ban jayenge... Aapke sar par baithke raaj karenge.. And aapko bht bht pyaar karenge.. Itna kuchi koo karenge ki aap hosh kho baitho gi.. And gudgudgi bhi..
O ha.. Adi ko bhi bula lenge.. Woh bhi toh apni bachhi hai..
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Nhi mujje nhi pata dhanno kaun hai and gabbar obvio i know..




Dhanno basanti ki ghodi hai anu
Ab yeh mat poochna ki basanti kaun hai 😆
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Ha ha gayu di. Suchi yani flowers bhi bengali hai mere tarah.. Woh bhi mere age ki samjhi.. Hum do bengali and aapki cutie and anj.. Hum chaar ek age k hurandhar appe vetal ban jayenge... Aapke sar par baithke raaj karenge.. And aapko bht bht pyaar karenge.. Itna kuchi koo karenge ki aap hosh kho baitho gi.. And gudgudgi bhi..

O ha.. Adi ko bhi bula lenge.. Woh bhi toh apni bachhi hai..




Haan beta samajh gayi
Tum chaar ho tabhi to gayu dii khush hai
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Samjhi!!!!!!!
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Chapter Eleven


When Sona entered the suite she found it had been all aesthetically decorated for any newlywed couple's first night...shocked was a lesser word to describe Sona's current state...she was speechless by the things happening around her...she had just gathered herself back and was about to question the room service staff about these baseless decorations as she found Dev standing at the threshold of the room smirking at her devilishly...laughing sarcastically he entered the room closing the door behind him and threw his blazer on the couch in a fit of rage...

Dev : main to kabhi imagine bhi nahi kar sakta tha ki koi ladki itni jyaada desperate ho sakti hai...matlab samajhti kya ho tum khudko?...tumhe maine hazaar baar samjhaya ki mujhe tumme koi interest nahin hai...ki maine tumhe kabhi bhi uss nazariye se nahin dekha jiss nazariye se tum chahti ho ki main dekhu...phir bhi tumhe meri baat samajh hi nahin aati...pehle tum mere saath yahaan tak mere peeche peeche aa gayi...phir yeh gande se revealing kapde pehenke neeche party mein aayi...tumhe bataya tha maine ki yeh party mere liye kitni important hai...ki wahaan kitne saare log aayenge jo future mein humare saath business collaborations kar sakte hai...phir bhi tumhe apne mann ki karni thi...itna kuch karke tumhara dil nahin bhara to ab yeh room aise sajaa rakha hai...jaise ki hum yahaan honeymoon manane aaye ho...agar itni hi uncontrollable feelings hai tumhari to jab bimaar padi thi tab main tumhe saamne se offer diya tha ...tab kyun mana kar diya...kyun sati savitri hone ka naatak kiya jab ki tumhare dil mein itni gand bhari hai...seedhe seedhe maan kyun nahi leti that you are dying to sleep with me...sach bol deti to shayad tumpar taras khakar main tumhari iccha poori hi kar deta...

Sona was losing her cool now...all these days she had tried to act maturely but today Dev had crossed all his limits...now she had to fight back...

Sona : enough Dev...aapko ehsaas bhi hai ki kya bol rahe hai aap?...aap mujhe kabse jaante hai?...bachpan se na...to bass itna hi jaan paye hai aap mujhe...aapko kya lagta hai ki yeh sab kuch maine karwaya hai...aapko lagta hai ki mera koi character hi nahin hai na...sach to yeh hai ki ghatiya soch to aap rakhte ho...yeh saaree jiske liye aap mujhe blame kar rahe ho ki maine yeh aise kapde pehenkar neeche party mein jaakar sabke saamne aapki insult kii...jab ki sach to yeh hai ki yeh saaree aapne khud mere liye bhijwayi thi...sharab sar pe chadh gayi hai na aapke...yaad nahin aa raha hoga...koi baat nahi main yaad dila deti hoon...maine aapko call kiya tha yeh kehkar ki main aise kapde nahin pehen sakti...tab aap hi ne kahaan tha na ki mujhe aapki baat manni hi hogi aur yehi kapde pehenkar neeche aana hoga...

Dev : jhoot...ek aur jhoot...main kyun tumhare liye aise wahiyat kapde bhijwaunga...maine to tumhare liye bohot saari sadiyan bheji thi yeh sochkar ki tumhe jo pasand aaye tum unmein se select karke pehenlogi...par hotel staff ne mujhe bataya ki saari acchi saadiyan chodkar tumne yeh saree select ki...kyun taaki tum jab neeche aao to sab tumhe dekhkar apne hosh kho de...dekha na maine kaise sab laal tapka ke tumhe ghoore jaa rahe the...kyu nahin ghurenge bhala?...after all jab koi ladki khud chati ho ki mard use galat nazar se dekhe to mard bhala kyun peeche rahenge...tum bhi na kamal ho biwi...maine ghaas nahin daali to baaki mardo pe line maarna shuru kar diya...matlab koi bhi ho kya farak padta, hai tumhe to apni zidd poori karne se matlab hai...

Sona : I don't believe this ...koi itna cheap aur gira hua kaise ho sakta hai...tum na sahi maino main uss cheapo Natasha ke boyfriend ho...matlab tum dono ki Jodi na bilkul perfect hoti...woh bhi chaar paiso keliye khud ko bechne se peeche nahin hat ti ...aur tum bhi apne ego ko satisfy karne keliye kisi bhi ladki ke saath sone keliye ready rehte ho...I wish tumhari shaadi usse hui hoti...kya mast Jodi hoti tum dono ki...actually agar dekha jaye to tum usse itni hadbadi mein shaadi kyun karna chahte the yeh ab samajh aa raha hai mujhe...just because you were dying to sleep with her right...yaa...tumse wait nahi ho raha tha bilkul bhi aur shaadi se pehle tum uske saath koi bhi physical relation banakar apni sanskari boy waali image bhi kharaab nahin karna chahte the...isiliye tum usse fatafat se shaadi karna chahte the...infact abhi to mujhe shak ho raha hai...kahin tum dono ke beech already waisa waala rishta to nahin tha na?...I mean tum bhi despo, woh bhi despo...I'm sure kabhi na kabhi to kiya hi hoga na tum dono ne woh'...(she giggled irking Dev all the more...)...sach bolo kitni baar kiya tha...ek baar, do baar...kai baar?...

Dev : shut up Sona...hadd se jyaada bol rahi ho tum...maine Natasha ko aaj tak kabhi galat tareeke se chua tak nahin hai...aur waise bhi main tumse kyun baat kar raha hoon...mujhe koi jaroorat nahin hai tumse apna character certificate lene ki...jiska khud ka koi character na ho woh bhala mujhe kya character certificate degi?...

Dev was about to leave the room when Sona once again shot back at him

Sona : tch...tch...tch...poor Dev Dixit...ek saal tak hot chic Natasha Gujral ko date kiya aur ek baar bhi uske saath kabhi...so sad...bohot dukh hota hoga na tumhe...tabhi to main sochu, ki woh bichari har roj ek naye mard ke saath honeymoon kyun manati thi...jab uska boyfriend use woh na de sake jo woh desperately chahti hai to obviously woh to bahar jaakar hi apna muh maaregi na...actually Dev galti tumhari hai...tum na uss type ke mard ho hai nahin jise dekh kar koi bhi ladki you know flat ho sake...kabhi apni shakal dekhi hai ayine mein...just look at you...I mean you are just not the man enough...tabhi jab Natasha ne tumhe ditch kiya hoga to tumne socha hoga ki main Sona ko trap kar leta hoon...yeh badi bholi types hai...ise thoda dhamkaunga, ispe chillaunga to yeh fat se shaadi ke liye maan jayegi...tabhi meri bimaari ka bahana banake mere saath patiyon waala rishta jodna chahte the...kyunki tumhe to pata tha ki aise to main tumhe apne paas bhi nahin aane doongi...arrey main kya tumhe rokungi...tumhe himmat hi nahin hai kisi ladki ko chune ki...agar hoti to jab Natasha ne tumhe kiss karne ki jidd ki thi to tum darr ke maare khud ko kamre mein band nahi kar lete...

Dev who was now boiling with rage had turned around and pinned Sona to the wall...Sona struggled to get away from his hold but he was in a mood to teach her a lesson for her life..."Dev chodo mujhe...how dare you touch me..."...Dev could see the tables turning around..."kyun ab kyun darr rahi ho...abhi abhi to badi baatein bol rahi thi na...ki mujhme himmat nahin hai kisi ladki ko chune ki...that I'm not a man enough...ab kya hua...sab samajhta hoon main...tumhe kaise bhi karke apni jidd poori karni hai...jab tumne realize kiya ki main tumhare demands ko give in nahin karunga to tumne yeh reverse psychology apnane ki sochi mere saath...tum lagta hai ki tum mujhe uksaogi...bhadkaogi to main tumhare saamne jhuk jaunga aur tumhe apne saath kuch bhi karne ki ijjajat de dunga...par Mrs. Sonakshi Dixit...ek baat humesha yaad rakhna ki iss rishte mein humesha meri chalegi...aur agar humare beech kabhi koi physical rishta banega to bhi sirf meri marji se banega...jaise ki aaj hoga... "...Dev suddenly let go off Sona as he rolled up his sleeve and gave a dangerous look to Sona...Sona was just trying to gauge what was he up to as he opened the top two buttons of his shirt..."Dev don't even try to...kya soch kya rahe ho tum...just stay away from me ok...mere paas nahin aana...mujhe chune ki koshish bhi ki na to..."...Sona tried her best to threaten him while she herself was scared now...she cursed herself mentally for getting back at him when he was about to leave the room..."to kya sweetheart?...kya karogi tum?...maarogi mujhe...lo maaro..."...he forwarded his left cheek instigating Sona to slap him..."chillaogi...bheed ikhatta karogi...chillao...common jitni jor se chilla sako utni jor se chillao...main bhi to dekhu kaun aata hai tumhari madad karne..."...he suddenly pulled her from her place and pushed her on the bed with a jerk...she tried getting off the bed only to be caught by Dev in the nick of time..."kya kar rahi ho Sona...aakhir itni saari tayyariyan ki hai tumne...itne pyaar se yeh kamra sayaja hai...humari first night ke liye...scented candles, favorite flowers...itna kuch special kiya hai tumne mere liye...to mera bhi to kuch farj banta hai na tumhare liye kuch karne ka...chalo aaj main tumhari wish poor kar hi deta hoon...aaj Dev Dixit har mayine mein tumhara ho jayega...and I swear you will enjoy this...yeh raat tumhare life ki sabse yaadgaar raat hogi...".

Dev leaned in on her as she turned her face away to avoid his lips meeting hers...she took a while to realize that her hands had been pinned to the bed on either side of her head and Dev's body was completely pressing against hers...so much so she was even finding it difficult to breath normally...she kept pleading him to let her go as he turned a deaf ear to her and continued getting intimate with her without her consent...she gained her senses back when she felt him graze his teeth against her bare shoulder...that was when she gathered all the courage she had in her and slapped him...so hard was the slap that Dev took almost 5 minutes to come out of its effect...by then Sona had managed to push him away from over her and had locked herself securely inside the washroom...it was like the world around him had stopped emitting audible noises for him to hear...all he could hear was Sona crying her heart out behind the locked washroom door and his own heart thumping loudly...he looked around the bed to find her broken bangles scattered here and there...as he looked around closely he found few droplets of her blood on the bedspread...damn...what had he done to her...what had happened to him...what he had done a while back was not at all humane...he had turned into a beast...not even a beast something worst then a beast...which husband or rather even an educated and self-respected man does this to his wife...he had attacked her so fiercely that it had even resulted in breaking of her bangles...the blood droplets only indicated that she had a bleeding forearm to be nursed...hell how could he have done this to her...or rather any girl...sophisticated men don't let their wives bleed like this...but he had done it...to say he was ashamed of his deeds will be less...he knew he was drunk...probably he had drunk a little too much than he can hold...but alcohol can't force you to do such inhumane things...was it only alcohol which had caused the damage?...or was it his uncontrollable anger that had taken charge of his heart n soul...

Picking up the pieces of his shattered conscious he knocked on the washroom door only to hear Sona scream her lungs out at him..."chale jaao yahaan se...just go away...don't you even dare come close to me...I swear I'll kill you dammit...go just get lost...mujhe apni shakal bhi nahin dikhana warna maar daalungi main tumhe...chale jaao..."...Dev felt his world had come crashing down on him...his best friend, his Cheeku...what had he done to her...he had committed the gravest crime any human could ever commit...how could he try to dampen the modesty of a girl as nave as her...so what if she was his wife...he had no right to touch her or even think and talk intimate things to her without her permission...feeling ashamed and guilty he barged out of the room to weep at his heart's content in the corridors...it was after about half an hour he realized he had been shedding tears in public and it certainly didn't suit his businessman image...deciding to settle himself in the park for the rest of the night, he got up and turned around to leave from the place when the sound of a sultry giggle held him rooted to his spot.

This voice was not unknown to him...how could he forget the girl he had loved for the past one year with all his heart and soul...the one who had left him without even meeting him once, putting all the blame of their separation on poor Sona...who had forced him to turn into a beast just for the sake of seeking revenge...the anger which had subsided a while ago due to Sona's pain had started boiling up once again now...he realized his hatred for Sona was nothing when compared to his despise for Natasha...he had so many things to be cleared, so many questions to be answered...and today he was going to settle all his scores...as he was about to walk up to her to question her for her deeds he found himself stuck at the spot as the scene which unfolded infront of him was enough to knock him off his senses...he recognized the guy immediately to whom Natasha was clinging like a leech in the corridors of this particular hotel...Rohan...the same guy who had been summoned by Natasha in the park the last time when they had a showdown...he looked around to check if there were any cameras capturing them as they had claimed to be working for a web-series...but hell no, this was not reel... it was real.

The guy had pushed his hands inside her over top as she had her hands around his nape while they were busy smooching each other wildly...Dev's jaw dropped as he was shocked to see this uncensored version of his ex-girlfriend ...realizing their urgency to get on with each other Dev hid himself into one of the corners of the corridor as them coming across him would only lead to them acting all innocent all over again...and he would not fall into their false trap today...Rohan picked up Natasha holding her by her waist as she readily wrapped her legs around his waist...they made way into their room as Dev followed them to give it a try find the lost threads of his life...he squat down and peeped through the eye hole to see the things happening inside the locked room...he immediately realized his grave mistake as he quickly turned his head around shutting his eyes in embarrassment as the duo inside had started letting down the barriers between them one by one...the noises coming from the room were making it impossible for him to wait there any longer as he was not so naive realize what was going on behind the closed bedroom door.

He was about to move away from there all disgusted when he suddenly stopped in his tracks as he heard Rohan speak up in between his moaning session...

Rohan : OMG ...Nats...I must admit...every time I feel you can't get wilder then this...but then the next time we meet you just prove me wrong...we must have done this atleast some 20 odd times since you called off your wedding with that dumbo Dev Dixit...but let me tell you, your were..are ...and will always be amazing...

Natasha's real face was actually coming to fore for Dev...but what he heard next was enough to clear all his remaining minor doubts...

Natasha : how many times have I told you Baby...jab hum dono saath hote hai to please uss looser Dev na jikar na kiya karo...you know na jab bhi uski baat aati hai, mera mood kharab ho jaata hai...phir agar main tumhe acche se khush na kar paau toh mujhe blame mat karna...kyunki Natasha humesha amazing hi hoti hai...uss looser ko kya pata ki usne mujhe khokar kya kuch kho diya hai...bada ghoomta tha na apni bestie Cheeku ke saath...I'm sure filhaal dono ek doosre ki shakal bhi nahin dekh rahe honge...aakhir mere letter ne vaar hi aisa kiya hoga...

Rohan : par Natasha tumne yeh sab kiya kaise...I mean tumne hi to kahaan tha ki uss Dev ki maa ko tumhara sach pata chal gaya tha...aur woh apne bhanje ke saath tumse milne aayi thi...par phir aisa kya hua ki usne tumhe asaani se chod bhi diya aur itne saare paise bhi diye?.

Natasha : bhala kyun nahin deti woh mujhe paise...aakhir maine uska kaam jo kiya hai...usike kehne par to maine woh chitti likhi thi...jismein maine saara blame bichari Sona pe daal diya...waise dekha jaye to main Dev ki kuch bhi nahin lagti thi isiliye maine use dhoka diya...par uski maa, apne hi bete ke saath aisa kaun karta hai bhala...matlab jisne use sach mein dhoka diya use itni asaani se jaane diya...aur jo uski genuinely help karna chahti thi use phasa diya... I must say she is a very wicked lady...wonder Dev ne gusse mein aakar Sona ke saath kya kya kiya hoga...

Events right from the day of Dev forcing Sona into marrying him till date where tried to force her in bed and Sona slapping him flashed infront of his eyes as his vision blurred due to the tears that had now clogged his dark brown orbs...he got up from there and moved towards the park downstairs as his mind couldn't give him a solution to the damage he had caused to his and Sona's relationship...finding an empty bench he sat down putting his head against the backrest as he failed to realize when the next day dawned...he had fallen asleep right there with his baggage of pain and guilt.

A tap from the cleaner on his shoulder woke him up with a jerk...looking around he realized he was not into his room...wait where was Sona then?...the last time he had heard her weeping inside the washroom...she had cursed him and ordered him to leave the room and never show her his face again...but then he had come across the truth and got carried away in his own pain that he had forgotten the pain and hurt he had caused her last night...he had to apologize to her...yes she would be angry, probably hurl bad words and curses at him but he would listen to all of it without letting out a sigh...she had slapped him last night...no he wasn't even complaining...he deserved not just that but even more...but first he had to find out where was she...

He ran upto his room to find the door locked from outside as he panicked with the thought that she might have left the hotel without informing him...he turned around and ran to take the lift to look out for her as a thought struck his mind...it was him who had last night latched the room from outside as he sat in the corridors crying his heart out...could she still be inside?...why not give it a try...with a positive attitude he went back to the room and unlatched the door ...there she was, sitting like a corpse on the bed...she had now changed into her regular clothes but her stance was something which scared him...she was sitting on the bed cuddled up to herself starring into nothing particular...the traces of the dried up tears on her angelic face hurt him even more...what had he turned her into...the bubbly, chirpy girl that she was he had transformed her into a lifeless doll.

Closing the door behind him he hurriedly moved towards the bed and sat infront of her waiting to be hit back...but she didn't change her stance at all...she just continued her corpse like demeanor as he feared the worst...had he caused her a mental trauma so much so that she even failed to recognize him as well as react against him being sitting so close to her...'common Dev...tujhe yeh karna hi hoga...tune ise bina kisi wajah itna dard pohunchaya hai...ab tujhe isse maafi maangni hi hogi...tab tak jab tak yeh dil se tujhe maaf nahin kar deti...bhale hi ismein kitna bhi waqt kyu na lag jaye...poori jindagi bhi tujhe iske pairo pe naak ragadni pade na tab bhi tujhe isse maafi haasil karni hi padegi...kyunki tune jo iske saath kiya hai use itni asaani se bhulaya nahin jaa sata...gunaah kiya hai tune...aur ab tujhe iski sazaa bhugatni hi hogi...aur teri sazaa tay karne ka hak sirf aur sirf ek hi insaan ko hai...aur woh hai Sona...'...he thought.

Placing his hand on hers he dared to call out to her..."Cheeku, tum theek ho na baba...I'm sorry...Bunny bohot sorry hai...usne galti hi aisi ki hai...tumna mujhe maaro...gaaliyan do mujhe...baddua do, jo tumhare dil mein aaye woh karo lekin please mujhse baat karo...dekho mujhe pata hai ki maine jo kuch bhi kiya hai uske liye mujhe bohot badi sazaa milni chahiye...aur main chahta hoon ki tum mujhe woh sazaa do...tum jo sazaa dogi main bhugatne ko tayyar hoon...par please mujhse baat karna band nahi karna...I'm sorry..."...tears flowed down his cheeks and Sona failed to acknowledge him.

Quickly getting up from the bed he moved to find a first aid box in the drawer...he came back to her and pulled her hand to apply ointment on her bruises...he looked into her eyes if she screeched with pain...but to his amusement her eyes showed nothing...not even the feeling of the pain she was going through...his eyes travelled to her shoulder, the bruise there screamed of his inhuman behavior of last night...he turned her face to make her look upto him..."Cheeku...meri taraf dekho...tumhe dard ho raha hoga na bohot...yeh dekho yeh saare jo jakham haina woh maine tumhe diye hai...tumhe yaad hai na kal raat maine tumhare saath kitna bura bartaav kiya...tumhe to mujhe sazaa deni chahiye...aisa karo maaro mujhe...kal raat jaise maara tha na bilkul waise hi...slap me..."...he took her hands in his and made her slap him umpteen number of times with a hope that she would react...when even after so many attempts she didn't budge off her stance his he dejectedly put down his head on her lap and cried ..."Sona ...you can't do this to yourself...galti meri haina phir sazaa mujhe milni chahiye...tum kyun khud ko aise punish kar rahi ho...please kuch to bolo...say something na baba...your silence is killing me...kuch aur nahi to atleast jhagda hi karlo mujhse...par please kuch to bolo...".

"ghar jaana hai..."...people usually said that I love you' are supposed to be the three magical words for any person...words which can give your life a certain direction...words which can change you forever, which could take away all your pain and leave you with a feeling of everlasting happiness...if somebody could ask Dev which are the three magical words for him, he would have definitely said these three words which Sona had finally uttered after hours of persuasion...it gave him a certain charge up that she finally spoke...sprinting up on his legs he cupped her face and replied..."ghar jaana hai mere Cheeku ko...hum jaroor jayenge bacche...meri Cheeku mujhse kuch maange aur main na doon aisa to ho hi nahin sakta...hum abhi isi waqt ghar jayenge ok...tum baitho yahaan aaramse main packing karta hoon thik hai..."...anyone who would see him in this state would probably declare him insane...but he didn't bother...his Sona had finally spoken to him and that's all what mattered to him.

Quickly packing their bags he asked the room service guy to load them into his car as he held Sona by her shoulder and took her down...making her sit in the car he went back to the reception to complete the checkout formalities...there were thousands of things running in his head, but one thing certainly didn't skip his thoughts... "woh ladka kahaan milega jisne kal shaam meri wife ko outfit deliver kiya tha mere kehne par...mujhe usse milna hai urgently"...he enquired with the manager..."sir woh ladka to kal raat ko hi job chodke chala gaya...paagal sa tha bada...bina wajah koi job chodta hai kya...uska koi contact to nahin hai humare paas par haan uske bhai ka number jaroor hai...agar aap kahen to..."...Dev had very well guessed the foul play...adamant to get it from him about who had forced him to do so he told the manager..."ek kaam karo...uske bhai se kehna ki Delhi mein ek hotel hai jahaan use job mil sakti hai...woh bhi yahaan se dugni salary mein...usse kaho ki turant Delhi aa jaye...haan par use mera naam na batana...tum samajh rahe ho na main kya kehna chahta hoon..."...Dev left as the manager understood his message and noded.

Getting back to the car he drove Sona back to Delhi as his only concern right now was to get her back to her original self...then he would set the remaining things right...lot of scores had to be settled... Natasha had to be given a royal farewell from his life forever...the hotel guy had to awarded for his last night's act...Vicky had to reprimanded for staying silent despite of knowing the truth and off-course above all his mother had to be questioned about her amazing deeds...but all this would be put on backseat as right now all that mattered to him was Sona...his Cheeku...she had to be nursed back to herself.

Edited by DevakshiCrazy - 8 years ago
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Yaasss yaaasss yaaasss... Zara sa jhoom lu main arey ha re ha re ha.. Zara sa ghoom lu main arey ha re ha re ha.. Aa tujhe chum lu main.. Arey bilkul ha re baba ha... Hahaha.. Yehi gaana yaad aa rha hai... Sach samne aa gya.. Sach samne aa gya.. Yipeee... Yipeee... Aaj main upar.. Aasman neeche.. Aaj main aage... Zamana hai peeche...

Okay fine.. Now update.. Well yeh toh koi thriller movie ka climax ho gya... Matlab dard badla sab ek saath.. Achha hai.. Dev sona argument was bang on and spot on.. And uske baad dev ne jo kiya it was bad.. He forced her.. But its good he later on realised it... That he had went over overboard...


Finally nuts ka sach samne aya.. Bhagwan k puja karungi aab main... Hari om hari om... Jab se start hua yeh ff tabse minnatte kar rhi hu hey bhagwan.. Nuts ka sach le aao samne... Aa gya.. And bonus bhi diya aapne di.. Saath saath devil ish ka sach bhi aa gya samne.. Yayay... So happy...


Sona ko kya hua di??? I know uske saath dev ne bht kuch kiya hai.. Par i hope woh jaldi se thik ho jaye.. Uske dimaag pe iska asar hua hai na??? Usko jaldi thik kar dena.. And dev toh hai hi usko thik karne k liye.. Sona jaldi maaf nhi karegi.. Par u remember na i told u i want an emotional talk bet them... Woh dena pls..


Aab dev ne bhi meri baat sunli.. Finally.. Hit list taiyaar kar li.. Nuts hotel boy maata and vicky.. Vik ka sach toh mujhe bhi janna hai.. Kaha gya woh dhokebaaz...


Bhai aab toh dev ish ka rishta gya and woh jo 15 saal puraba sach hai that will add fire to the fuel..


Par Di once again.. U know how much we love dev.. Saza dena par itna nhi ki roona aa jaye.. I know u emote emotional scenes also well par fir bhi.. Dev sona ko jaldi ek kar dena...


Waiting for ur next tod phod update...
Edited by AnanyaGhosh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome, amazing, beautiful...finally truth is out...
Apni khushi pe thoda break lagate hue aate hain chapter pe...

So finally tigress Sona in action..she was superb today...the way she gave back to Dev was clap worthy infact seeti maar dialogues jo seedhe Dev ke dil pe lage and Dev ke andar ka jaanwar bahar aa gaya...he was too brutal today but I think that was required for the story to move ahead...Sona was ready to forgive him before Indore trip but after Dev's cruelty this time and Sona's present condition...it makes sense as to why you have shown this part...

If truth have been out in front of Dev before his inhumane behaviour, he would have apologised and may be the would have divorced but now Dev has to heal Sona...she is mentally broken at the moment...The person whom you trusted madly has given you unforgettable scars..its now a tough task for Dev to bring Sona back to her lively self...I knw he will do that...I trust Dev...

Ab jo line se band bajega Natasha, ish aur vo hotel boy ka...bus maja hi aa jayega...

Soch jab Dev ne Sona ke saath itna bura kiya to in sab ka kya hoga..Vo Sona jo Dev ki best friend, Dev ki jaan thi..uske saath aisa kiya to..to in teeno ka kya hoga??? I can imagine..amd by god imagine karke hi itna maja aa raha hain...

Also, ab Dev apni cheeku ko kitna pamper karega...uska kitna dhyan rakhega...usko uski life vapas karwga..usko uska dost bunny vapas milega, and uska pyar bhi...

Waiting for all this to happen...

Thank you for this chapter Gayu..I am so happy...

Tumhare FF se itna emotionally attach ho gayi hu ki aisa lag raha hain ki mere saamne ye sab ho raha hain and I want to stop this..but Gayu ne kaafi kuch theek kar diya hain...

Waiting for Sona to get well soon, then Dev and Sona's heart to haert talk...and most awaited dhulai of nats and Ish...then Devakshi falling in love and then jo main bhul gayi wo sab...Gayu, tujhe to sab pata hain na..

Running to read the chapter again...is chapter pe to second comment bhi banta hain..jo main aaj raat ko dungi...guest aa rahe hain aaj..so midnight tak you will see second comment...
Edited by Sharica - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Arey waah!
Jhappi paao di🤗
Aaj to maza hi aa gaya😃
Sari ki sari wishes poori ho gayeen...
Bada hi mast chapter tha
I loved ur surprise 😊

Indore trip ne to kamaal hi kar diya...
Ishu ne kya sochkar un dono ko bheja tha
Or kya ho gaya😆

Dev ne to bechari sona ke sath kitna bura kiya
And finally ye dev ka sona par last torture tha...
Ab to ishu or nats ki baari hai😉

Dekh liya! Dekh liya!
dev ne apni aankhon se nats rohan ko dekh liya..
Sona pe to believe nahi kiya tha.
Accha Hai is baar apne aap hi dekh liya..

Ye to aur bhi accha tha ki dev ne unki baaten sun li...
Aur usey wo letter ka golmal samajh aa gaya

Ishu ka real face bhi dev ke saamne aa gaya.

Ab dev to ishu nats ka band bajaega🥳
Aur humare wishes poori hongi
Bada irritate kr liya un dono ne hume
Ab tu unki baari aayegi

Di yaad hai na nats ka kya haal karna hai?
public demand yaad hai na😉

Aur ishu ne bhi bhut tang kar liya
Uski bhi acchi dhulai karna...
Hum sabko khush kar dena

Ab delhi jaakar...dev in sabki naak me dum karega
I think ab 15 saal purana raaz bhi khul jaayega
Akhir hume bhi to pata chale...aise kya hua tha jo ishu sona se itni nafrat karti hai..

Aur haan ab to dev ka redemption bhi shuru hone wala hai...
That will toso interesting

I m very much excited gor the upcoming track...

Jaldi jaldi update karna is baar bhi...
To kab de eahe ho next chaptet...
Kal yaa parso?😉
Edited by Anjali333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
this is superb ..loved it
dev was as cruel as he could be ..but he got to know the whole truth ...
ishwari to gayi ...
lets see how he heals back his sona
updaye soon
thanks for pm

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