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.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1011

It was Amazing...

Sach mein, ek hi part mein sab kuch badal diya...

But how can Dev try to force himself on her...??

I am glad that he knows the truth...

But poor Sona...she turned silent...

Pls cont soon

And thanks for the pm

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randomramblings

@randomramblings

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1012

waah, finally natasha and ishwari's truth is out after the much needed damage. the only way dev would feel forever remorseful is because of him trying to force himself on her. had he not gone to that extreme and got to know the truth, he would probably apologize to her and her family, divorce her and try to move out of her life. now because of his deed she is lifeless, he will be there with her forever and the guilt will consume him.

as raj said, the only person who can heel dev is sona, it will be role reversal now, the only person who can heel sona will be dev, their bond will get more stronger in due course of time.

good writing, you brought in the aggressiveness in dev, damage to sona, and the death blow of truth all within a few hrs. great going.

Edited by randomramblings - 8 years ago

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moni160282

@moni160282

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1013

U have penned down this chapter so beautifully. I cried with sonakshi and I could imagine what she must be going through. U are an amazing writer. Plz next update jaldi karna.

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1014

Gayudiii...i luv uh...i luv uhhh somuchhh...

Ithna superb update...oh goddd!!!

Finally truth is out...yaayy...m super happy dii...

Oh God!!what dev did to Sona...Thank God she slapped him on the time... bechari sona...felt very bad for her...physical and mental torture became the reason her condition..How is she going to forgive him...it is not easy to forgive dev...he realised his mistake...great...

N he heard natasha's words...finally sach samne aagaya...Now he know who r behind this n he will definitely give punishment for them...great...

How he is going to bring her back to oldself...Ishwari's time starts now...

Continue soon di...

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Sneha

@Rhy2015

Inactive

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1015

Yayyayyay!!!
Finally the truth is out...as far as I knw Dev...Natasha n Ishwari ki khair Nahi... 😕

Felt really bad for Sona...
M biting my nails with anxiety k ab kya hoga...
Sona wapis to Nahi chali jayegi apne ghar...
Jo Bhi ho jaldi jaldi batana...
Once again a beautiful chapter n wonderfully written by u 👏
Din bright kar diya!!!! 😛

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alind713

@alind713

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#1016

Awesome update
Waiting for the next part.

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Suchi_Ejf_fan

@Suchi_Ejf_fan

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#1017

Amazing amazing amazing 🤗
Finally dev ko akal aa gayi [:D/]
Yayyy
Ab ishu ki band bajegi 😆
Update soon di

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coolmeet

@coolmeet

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#1018

Awesome and beautifully written.

Finally dev ko Sach pata chal gaya.

Update soon

Thanks for the pm Gayu

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Anushka

@LoveAnushka

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1019

I had read all chapters from starting only but never commented, so will comment for 1st 3 chaps, then another set of chaps & then another...

First 3 Chapters...

When I read 1st, 2nd & 3rd chapter...

I felt like strangling Nats to Death...

Already Nats ki Ishu maiyya bhi Kam nahi.

I felt sad in contrast to that Dev didn't trusted his Cheeku, the friendship he always had with him for years... But trusted that cheepo Natasha who was busy selling herself to other men for money...

Innocence of Dev was seen here very much, specially the smooth camariedere between Cheeku, Bunny was beautiful...

I loved it Gayu Di the way you showed Sona's concern for Dev & her feelings, still burying it deep for only Dev to be happy with the person he loves...

Until everything destroyed with Dev's decison if marrying Nats & Nats marrying him for money, effectively trapping him by feigning innocence as if Rohan & he was shooting...😡

And that's where mistrust had started I guess...

Okay now I'll comment on other chapters...

Love,

Anushka