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Asalve

@Asalve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1021

Just brilliant.. Very well written, love the way the story is unfolding!

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PY18

@PY18

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1022

I love love love the update. My heart ws pounding the whole time. Finally Dev is back to being himself but he lost sona in the process. I hope he brings back her old chirpy self as she falls in love with him

Awesome update

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Kuku_92

@Kuku_92

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1023

Hello gayatri mam...

I am Tanu .I have recently become the member of this forum. Earlier I just used to read OS , TS & FF of few writers. I HV read all your works and i really appreciate your way writing...👏. They r funtabulous...

This is the first time i m commenting in this forum. Becoz after reading today's chapter i could not resist myself from commenting. It's the best chapter for me becoz u HV fulfilled our wishes of disclosing d truth of natasha n ishwari in one chapter only...😆 waaoo

Before reading this chapter i was really afraid if in anger , Dev tries to sexually abuse her...And to my big shock he tried it😲

But thank God sona slapped him hard...He deserve this...Now i m eagerly, impatiently and desperately waiting how sona' s hatred for Dev will reduce , how she forgives him & how this idiot Dev manofy his bestie...

Pls update soon...😊

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AnanyaGhosh

@AnanyaGhosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1024

Originally posted by: Kuku_92
Hello gayatri mam...
I am Tanu .I have recently become the member of this forum. Earlier I just used to read OS , TS & FF of few writers. I HV read all your works and i really appreciate your way writing...👏. They r funtabulous...

This is the first time i m commenting in this forum. Becoz after reading today's chapter i could not resist myself from commenting. It's the best chapter for me becoz u HV fulfilled our wishes of disclosing d truth of natasha n ishwari in one chapter only...😆 waaoo

Before reading this chapter i was really afraid if in anger , Dev tries to sexually abuse her...And to my big shock he tried it😲
But thank God sona slapped him hard...He deserve this...Now i m eagerly, impatiently and desperately waiting how sona' s hatred for Dev will reduce , how she forgives him & how this idiot Dev manofy his bestie...
Pls update soon...😊

Hi tanu.. Nice to meet u dear... I am Ananya.. Thought of introducing myself... Isiliye..

And yaa gayu di aka gayatri di just is a pro in writing stories.. And will i reveal a secret?? Evn i also was a silent member when joined this forum and the first stories i read was of gayu di ka and i instantly fell for them.. Haha..

Gayu di secret samne aa gya... 😆😆

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1025

Finally Dev found out..am so glad. .pls update the next part soon...eagerly waiting to see how he is going get his best friend back from her trauma..lovely update ..nd nicely written

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Ashlyn

@ashlyn12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1026

OH MY GOD! This chapter is so damn beautiful. I did have tears in my eyes seeing Sona's state. Amazing writing. And finally the truth is out but lets see how Dev heals Sonakshi's soulthat he has hurt so much. Looking forward for this ;)

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Sonali Mahajan

@Cutiepie.sona

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1027

Aa gyi main

Gaddi ki cutie is here😳

I know u missed me alot here..haina?😆😆

Isliye I'll finish both the chappies today only..

Chapter 10

Udibaba😲

What's this all?

Ishu successfully managed to create MUs b/w Devakshi!.

Poor Sona..now how'll she prove herself innocent!😲😛

*off to read the bext part*😉

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Sonali Mahajan

@Cutiepie.sona

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1028

Done reading chap 11

Wow!!👏

Chapter is amazing!😉

Finally Dev encountered with the truth

But I guess it had been too late..

My heart went out to Sona for her indifferent attitude towards Dev asking for forgiveness😭

Uff!..I can't even imagine the pain she had gone thru in the night!...others must have comitted suicide if they had been in a similar situation but Sona acted brave and fought back as much as she can!👏⭐️

Waiting to.see how's Dev gonna revive Sona's real self-the bubby, chirpy , and a sweet girl she was😳

Update soon Di😃

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ketaki narkhede

@CUTE_K2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1029

Diii I hate u why did u stop here.Tears were streaming down my cheeks while reading the chap.god Sona was soo so helpless.I can't even think of that.

Loved it ,plz update fast

~KET@K!

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Erina

@Erinasingh69

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1030

Omggg it was beyond expectation n that's y I call you awesome writter hence again you proved me right 😳

Finally vo ghari aa hi gyi jiska mai intezaar kr rhi ty. ..what a timing ek taraf khatri k show m aane se pagal ho gyi hu aur ab tmhre iss twist se kaboo khud pe rha na hasti hmari khone lgi shayad yhi h. ..😉 in previous chap I was disappointed with dev but in today's chap I'm feeling bad for him too .I guess this is only called destiny when you hate something it always come behind you but when you want that same after sometime it go very far way from you 😭 exactly what happened with dev n sona. .one song for both :-"kuch pal to thehaar jao na ya phir laut ke aaona yun kente nhi alvida. ..

one request from you please if possible then in next chap pen down their bond, their awesome time n their sweet time which they spend together before nat entry n spoiling everything as their memory aur flashback I want to remember all those moments -request from my side if possible then try to fulfil my request. ...

N thank you very veryyy much for this fabulous chap with breathtaking concept i not only liked it but thoroughly loved it from core of my heart

For this a lovely hug to awesome writter from my side 🤗

❤️ aaj to mjhe vhi feeling aa rhi h dance krne ki jaise sona nekiya thaafter dev proposed her but this eri can't dance 😆

Goshhh mai kitni happy hu I can't even express in word I wish mai bhi thora bht pen down kr pati to definitely batati 😉

Chalo now I will go to come back soon for another awesome chap till then take care n keep smiling

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