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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dharsii

Wow deep ..Nice one..
Raghav is too good..
He has taken good decision.
If he marry her without inform about problem,She won't be take easily..
It will hurt more...
Waiting for Naina reaction..
Thanks for pm..
update soon.

Thanks a lot Priyu..😳
so glad you loved it..
my pleasure
ya Naina will be hurt than if he do so ..
sure will update soon.👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ..neelanjana

Nice part Deep🤗

Veer😡 he is such a useless guy..
I specially loved the last part...dadi , Raghav and Naina's family interaction...❤️ sweetest part of whole update..
That was a short update...but koi nahi...😉🤗

Thanks a lot Niks..🤗
so glad you loved it ..😳
ya short one ..just for Pardes 100 epi celebration

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks you for the feedback.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
You were here than?😛
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Thanks a lot friends ..hope you are doing good ..🤗


here's posting part 5

I wanted to give two updates back to back but couldn't possible ..so without keep you all waiting more..i am posting it .. 😳

hope you like this too..

will be waiting for your comments and feedback ..❤️

scroll down for update in next post.😃
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Raghav was outside the room and Naina hold her hand and said,

"Kaha jaa rahe ho Mr. Raghav Mehra ..you think I am a fool!! I know

everything ..ok.."


"Naina [he was shocked for a sec..does she knows everything?]

what are you saying?"


"You are hiding something right!! avoiding me nah!!"

"Naina ..wo ..yes ..i mean no..i mean .."

"Ye kya laga rakha hai?yes ..no ..yes ..no..if you were my student na ..i

would have punished you by now ..be clear yaar..lol ..[she laughed and

added ]


"Naina ! punish me .."he said in a very cold voice without looking into her eyes ..

"Hey Raghav ! why are you behaving like this ?i was just joking ..


see I am in bridal attaire ..this is my most imp day..and rather than

care ..you are leaving ? and you didn't called me since morning ? than

tell me what I will conclude from it?


I wanted to talk to you ..to Veer also but you didn't bother na !!bas itni hi friendship thi haan!!"


She said in an lil angry tone..


Raghav felt so bad for her ..she is so lovely and that Veer !! what she will think if she came to know ?


"Naina .. i understand you ..i didn't call you ..but its for a reason ..and

now I want to tell you something .."


"Than tell me nah !! what excuse you have ?main bhi toh sunu.. "she

pointed out finger towards him and before could say anything her mom

called her ..the rituals of wedding were about to start ..


"Raghav ..jaldi bolo ..kya hai?mom is calling me .."

"Naina ..Veer hai na..woh woh.."


"Naina baby ..what are you doing here?if you want to talk with

Raghav ..than you can talk inside too ..see dulhan aise kaise ghoom sakti

hai ..go inside ..Raghav you too come ..wahi baat kar lena..ok.."


"Ji Bhabhi ..its ok..i will tell her later ..i will be back ok ..Naina you

go ..i will tell you ..pakka.."


"Pakka na ..ok you better tell me !!but what about Veer? He is ok na ?"


"Ya ya he is fine ..he is all fine ..don't worry.."


"Ok" she went.


Raghav said to himself :


"Naina ..listen ..i was about to tell you but just was waiting for you to be

alone ..couldn't say in front of all..oh damn..she went ..now have to tell

her as soon as possible before its too late.." he said to himself.

~~~~0~~~~


After sometime ..

He entered in one of the rooms which were given to Naina and her

family.. till the wedding..she was getting ready there ..doing touch up and

all..and she saw Raghav in mirror ..she turned and said..


"Raghav you here ?without knocking? Yaar main ready ho rahi hoon aur

tum aise kaise chale aaye ?"


"Naina ..i am also in so much hurry..see I am sorry but room was not

locked from inside so I came in..you should have locked it na if you

wanted ..meri hi galti nikalti ho!"


"Raghav !!you mean to say its my fault!!"


"Naina ..meri maa ..i give up..its my fault ..not yours ..maaf kardo

teacher ji.."he said bowing in front of her..


"See main Professor hoon ..teacher nahi.."she said ..raising her eyebrows.


"Uff ..how I will tell her ? she has no idea about the seriousness of

situation..yaha meri jaan nikle jaa rahi hai aur ye madam toh..[he

thought]


But said


"Accha tum teach hi toh karti ho na !! never mind ..ok professorji ..ab

theek hai ..


"Better hai!"she said with attitude..


"You were about to say something na ? bolo aur haan saath main pls meri

help bhi kardo.. tell me ..how am I looking...koi kami toh nahi rah

gayi..yours high profile guests will like me na !!"she laughed saying

this ..


Raghav for on sec just looked at her ..and forgot what he was saying..she

was looking like a fairy ..he came near her and took lil bit of kajal from

her eyes and put it as kala tika behind her ear


"Naina your mom would have done this ..but maine kar diya..you are

looking stunning ..really..nazar na lage .."



"Aww so sweet of you Raghav ..thank you ..mom plus any well wisher

can do this ..and who can be my biggest well wisher other than you ?

and you are here too na ..toh mujhe nazar kaise lag sakti hai ?


She side hugged him ..

"Naina I am always with you...accha ye sab choro ..suno.."


Naina was not getting good vibes now..what happened?


"Toh bolo na ..kya hua?waha bhi tum aise kar rahe the ..like we write few

lines in starting before coming to main point ..like in an essay ..woh hindi

main kya kahte hai ..Bhoomika !! intro!!"


"Haan toh how can I tell you just like that? Every matter is not so simple

na ? Par tum ye teacheri mat karo ab !"



"Raghav !!" she looked at him with a deadly glare and he was

scared ..what if she will know the truth ?


He gathered courage to tell and said "Woh Naina ..i didn't meant like

that yaar.."


"Main teachri kar rahi hoon!! aur tum kya kar rahe ho? Pata nahi paas

kaise hue honge tum classes main?"


"Sorry again Naina ..plss..calm down .."


"Ok fine ..sorry form my side too..accha jo kahna hai kaho..is se pahle

aur der ho jaye.."


"Naina ...pls listen to me carefully ..woh actually this marriage ..this

marriage.."he didn't knew in what way he start so that he can tell her


properly..words were not coming from his mouth ..don't know what

happened to him that he was like in frozen state ..he has written whole

matter in mobile as a text draft..and he was repeating it so that he could

tell her ..but now it wasn't looking so easy ..may be its easy for others but

really it was so difficult for him ..how can he tell her that his groom

eloped with another girl? Her mother ..what will be her reaction?he

gulped the salvia and coughed a lil and started ..


"Naina ..see ye marriage bahut complicated ho gayi hai ..you are going to

marry Veer but there is a prob too.."


and just than her mom came ..

"Raghav ..you inside ? door bhi open tha..Naina ko kuch chahiye tha

kya?i am here now ..you can go beta ..tumhe waise h itna kaam hain !

Main bas abhi ise lekar aati hoon.." Naina's mom said


"Auntyji who main..Naina ko kuch."


"Mom one min ..Raghav wants to tell something ..let him complete..kya

prob hai Raghav?"Naina wanted to listen but than Shauri came and

knocked at the door ..Raghav opened the door and Shauri was calling him

for some arrangement..Raghav had to go ..

and he also could not talk in front of her mom..so he excused and

pretending to be joking..



"Naina dar gayi kya ? OMG! Auntiji ye aapki teacher oops professor beti

itni jaldi dar jaati hai kya? Look at your face..btw ..I was joking Ms.

Naina Batra.."


"Raghav tum bhi na beta..you both are crazy friends..Zinu should see this

that Naina has found a crazy buddy here also.."



"Auntiji ..yes I am so stupid and crazy.."he said gritting his teeth but

without showing his feelings ..



He went feeling so useless that time..why its delayed so much?


On the other hand her mother said "Naina ..chal ready hai na tu?"


"Maa par Raghav ..i think I should talk to him now.."


"Naina .,this is not time for any convo ..let's go ..baahar jake dekhte

hain..Raghav is herr only na..and more over he was saying na he is

joking..tu kaha uski baton main aa rahi hai..mazak tha ..chal ab.."

His behavior ??Naina found it strange..but Mom was not listening ..may

be it's a prank..if it's a prank ..than she will see this Raghav Mehra..Ninu

chal ab ..and relax .."she said to herself.

~~~~0~~~~

In mandap..


Raghav tried before too but couldn't succeeded ..he couldn't tell her

somehow ..some or the other thing Happened and he regret that time is

going from hands..

He has to sit in Groom's attaire as there was no option but he didn't

wanted to cheat her ..the wedding has not done yet ..if nothing will work

than he will tell either bhaiya or Bhabhi ..as last option..right now ..he

don't trust them much so not telling ..he knows at least this .. that they

are greedy too ..don't know what meaning they will make out of it?

he was wearing sehra and Panditji were busy in prep. and they were

sitting In front of them and no one around them thankfully..few relatives

from Mehra's side but not much close..


Panditji said ..it will take some more time ..till than all relatives should

gather there..


He got the chance once again.. so without wasting time ..he handedover

his mobile to Naina and she too was in ghoonghat ..both of them couldn't

see each other but Naina picked up mobile from his hands and asked by

waving her hands like what is this ?



He replied hinting towards mobile .."See msg pls ..urgent .."


She found the voice diff but as he tried to change his voice ..she got

confused but still started reading msg ..reading few lines ..she opened her

ghoonghat and he saw ..her eyes widened reading every single word of

msg..poor him ..he can't even open his sehra..

Suddenly Naina got fainted and Raghav stopped her from falling ..he

also took mobile from her hands and put it into pocket ..and with on


e hand he was holding her ..he was scared too ..what if she is really

fainted ? he didn't meant that..he didn't wanted to hurt her in any

way ..oh no! what he will do now?



Naina s mom ..bro ..bhabhi ..dadi along with family members gathered


there ..panditji also stopped doing prep and was along with others


shocked to see Bride fainted ..


"Naina ..Naina ..kya hua ? utho !! wake up Naina ..what happened? "


He was so worried ..and her mom and all worried too ..


Raghav didn't show his face ..he was in sehra ..and in all noise no body

doubted that he is not Veer..


Dadi said to took her to the her [dadi's]room and may be she need some


rest..and said Panditji to do prep ..they will be back after a while ..she

need to be all right first..


All were talking that what is this happened ? and why she fainted?



Naina was lying in her room and dadi asked even to Naina's mom ..bro n


bhabhi too that she will be fine ..she called a doc so till than no one

should disturb her ..she glared at Sudha and Pam and they took Naina's


family outside ..gave her juice and all ..make her comfortable ..both Pam

and Sudha knew that


maa will kill them if they don't obey this time ..after all it all was

happening coz of Veer..

and Raghav was thinking of about the msg..



MSG content :

"Dear Naina ..pls read the full msg without speaking a word and without getting me wrong..first read it carefully ok..pls I request you ..plss


See Veer is eloped with Sanjana ..We tried a lot but no result ..he texted

us and said he will not do this marriage ..we can't cancel the marriage at

the last moment and even without let you all know .. and knowing your

mom's condition ..we [me and dadi] don't want anything wrong

happening to you and your family..so I am telling you this and I will be

in place of groom..but I am not going to marry you rather want you to act

like you are fainted and than we will say to all that you are not well and

doc said that this marriage can't be possible as of now ...so its

postponed ..Dadi is very angry with Veer ..she will handle later on about

him but now she don't want Mehra's prestige to be down ..and neither

she wants you to be suffer coz of Veer ..she wanted me to sit in mandap

but I can't cheat you ..than she agreed too ..so I am telling you

everything ..now its up to you ..i never thought that on your wedding

day..you will be facing such situation..and what ever punishment you

want to give me ..i am ready ..Veer will have to pay for this ..i will not

forgive him ..and remember we want just your happiness ..that's all.

~~~~0~~~~

In dadi's room..after sometime

"Raghav ye kya hai? You said ..everything will be allright than what is

this ?Naina got fainted!!"


She said with worry ..

"Yes dadi but acc to our plan ..i expected something else that Naina will

understand situation and act accordingly..but see what happened ..yes I

told her to do acting of get fainted if she agrees to what I am saying but

see ..ulta ho gaya ..she is fainted actually..now what should I do ? when

she will awake and when I will able to make her understand what I have planned ?

"Puttar [son]now what we will do? Let's wait for sometime ..tu koshish

kar main bahaar sambhalti hoon..kahi ye Pam aur Sudha kuch gadbad na kar de!!"


"Ok dadi ..i will try my best..you go and pls take care.."


"I will ..tu ise dekh bas..Naina ko kuch nahi hona chahiye.."

"Ji dadi.."

Just when Dadi left and Raghav closed the door ..he saw Naina coming into senses..

"Naina ..tum ..tum hosh main aa gayi !! thanks God..meri toh jaan hi

nikal gay thi..tum theek ho na Naina!!"

"Raghav!!!!..."

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Thanks Friends ❤️

Deepti😳



Edited by RM14 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Updated.😃
Naina's reaction will be in next update.😉
Edited by RM14 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sending Pms.😃
Edited by RM14 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ahahah waiting for Naina's reaction already :P
So, this was his plan :P .. .great :P ..
Naina actually fainted Raghav's plan is nice, i thought everyone kept disturbing them so he wouldn't be able to tell her .. But he did 👍🏼
That's what a friend should be like .. Things can get better this way
Great job deepti
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb idea
He don't want to cheat her and get married
Now what will happen ? Will she marry him ?
Superb update
Thanks for the pm

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