ishra Ts 'Na Tum Jano Na Hum' Epilogue(2 parts) pg 9 May 6

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Na Tum Jano Na Hum

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EPILOGUE - Page 9

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Na Tum Jano Na Hum


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"bhaiyya zara hume iss address pe pohochaonge kya?" she asked to the taxi driver showing a pice of paper..

"ji madam ji " the driver said while opening the door for her..

"Chaliye amma" she made her aged mother sat inside the and and settled herself too..she is ishita iyyer,a simple girl, her appa died in an accident some months ago and now she has only her mother with her,"madhavi iyyer"

She had a limited knowledge about the Mumbai city but she has to come today her for her sister, yes she and her mother searching for her elder sister vanditha iyyer who left house with her boyfriend some years back..she has her address which she get from one of vandithas friend at the time when her appa died..on that day she expect her elder sister to be there but she never come..why she don't know

After two days of her appa death she get to know about that her appa has give their property as a security for loan which is he took for vandithas marriage,as the marriage broke with vandithas action but appa never let know about their loss,she was helpless on that time,she don't know where to go what to do,there is no shelter for her and her mother to stay,atlast she decides to took amma to vanditha so that she can search a job,and after that she will take her amma back..for that she comes Mumbai to search her elder sister with the address which she have..

As the taxi stopped infront of a big villa she looked out and takes a deep breath then paying the driver she comes out from the taxi with her amma..

Amma:kanna hum pohoch geye kya?

"han amma hum pohoch geye,aap chalo" saying she began to get inside with her amma..

Amma: lekin kanna,ithni raath ko andar jana sahi hai kya..chalo hum kal subhah atehe hai..

"nahi amma,akka se aaj hi milna hoga hume..aap baschaliye"

Pressing the calling bell they starts to wait for someone to open the door,after about some minutes

"ji aap log kaun?" there comes a young voice

Amma: ji hum..

"amma mein poochthi hun" saying she comes infront of him and just a look his eyes got stuck with her beautiful face..

"can u please caal ms.vanditha iyyer"

"vanditha iyyer? Who?" he asked getting confused..

"ji meri beti hai" amma said

"I think you mistaken, its not vandita iyyers house its ny house,I am raman bhalla"

"lekin akka ki address tho yehi hai" she said showing the address paper which she took out from her dairy.

Raman looked at the paper and said..

"han address tho yehi ka hai,lekin ab mein yehan rehatha hun..maybe she lives her before"

Ammas face fell hearing raman..

Amma: ab hum kahan dhoondhege usse..

Raman: naam kyat ha?

Amma: ji vanditha iyyer..

Raman: unka nahi..inka..he asked pinting towards the her..

"ishita..ishita iyyer" she said stepping forward..

Raman: ishita see I think you should call her on phone..

Ishita: humare pass akka ki number nahi hai,

Raman: in that case,I don't think ki main aap logo ki koyi help kar saktha hun,sorry for that..

Ishita: oh that's ok..we should leave now..chaliye amma..

Saying she holds her amma and walks out from the house while he looked at her retreating figure with an unknown smile..

At the next day raman got ready to go college, he is living on this villa alone as his parents are in abroad and he is staying here to complete his MBA,and it's the last year of his study..

Locking the door behind he went to take his bike but suddenly his eyes got stuck with something which is on the floor, and it was a diray.Taking it in his hands he remembers the two ladies who comes to his house at the night and he understood the diary is owned by that girl..

Looking at the watch he realized the time and in a hurry he put the diary inside his bag and starts his bike then ride away to the college.

When the red signal flashed Raman stops his bike and starts to wait for the green signal..that's when he noticed a known face trying to cross the road making a worried face, and it was ishita who he met yesterday night..

"hey" he called her but she was in hurry so as the road cleared she crossed the read and runs from there, he didn't wait to flash the green signal, taking his bike to a side he too runs behind her, for what he don't know..

Following her way at last he reached at the hospital, "why she is in hospital?" he thinks and get inside to search for her, but didn't find her as the hospital was little crowded. So he thinks to wait for her out and went to sat at the waiting area.

That's when he got a call from his college gang,mihir,romi,abhi,and nidhi..

"hey where are you bhai" mihir asked

Raman: woh..mein..he thinks some lie to tell them..

"I'm busy will not come today, bye.." getting nothing to say he said what comes in his mouth and cuts the call then switched off it..The gang got very confused with his behavior but shrugged it off thinking they will ask him at the night party time..

Raman was waiting for her about more than 15 minutes, getting bore with the waiting he decides to search her one last time, that's when he listened a loud cry from a ward which in beside the waiting room..

"Hey what was that?" he asked stopping a nurse who walks out of the ward..

Nurse: there a elderly lady died, and her daughter is crying, poor girl she has no one other than her mother...saying she went from there..

The nurse words takes him to the ward only to find ishita crying bitterly hugging her mother's body..He felt very bad seeing her state..

When the compounder's takes ammas body away from her she cried aloud and that time she very badly wants a shoulder to pour her pain,

Raman was just looking at her from the door way, his eyes were moist seeing her vulnerable state, he so wants to console her but how can he do that,he is just a stranger for her..his thoughts of chain breaks when he hear an another loud voice, he see her laying on the floor unconscious..

Calling the help raman made her lay on the bed, after checking her the doctor said she fainted because of emotional stress..

"waise aap inki? The doctor asked to Raman with a question mark..

Raman: ji mein.i am her friend..

Doctor: oh that's fine, you can take her home but han she will get conscious after some hours hours..

Raman: that's ok doctor..Saying he looked at ishita

It's about 3 in the evening when ishita got discharged from the hospital, but still she was in her unconscious mode so Raman didn't have any choice and takes her to his home in that state only, because he don't want to leave her alone there in this state that too when he know there is no ne to help her in this city other than him..

Making her lay comfortably on his bed Raman went to freshen up in an another room, after getting fresh he spent some time talking with his parents and went to make coffee for both of them..

Meanwhile ishita opened her eyes and find herself in an unknown place, she thinks about the happenings which happened with her past some hours, which made her cry her heart out again and again,

"mein.mein kahna hun..she asked to herself looking around"

Suddenly her eyes got stuck with the photos of raman which is on the wall,

"you woke up" asking raman comes inside holding two cup of coffee..

"have it" he said forwarding the coffee cup to her..

She was sitting there like she is seeing a crown,she looked at him without blinking her teary eyes and leaned to back a little like a scared kid..

Raman: "kya hua?"

Ishita: what..what i..i m doing here..?

Raman: don't worry, I brought you here as you are alone in the hospital..

Ishita: amma?

Raman: the hospital done the remaining formalities,as there is no one to take ammas body..

Ishita cried again hearing ramans words and she hide her face in her palms..

Raman: hey..don't cry,I kow you are broken but please don't cry..

Saying he comes near her and placed his hand on her shoulder that's it like she is waiting for someone to console her she hugged him tight pouring her all pain..at first raman was startled with her action but later his hands automatically went to caress her back..

After getting a little bit relaxed ishita realized their state and she quickly parted herself from him, getting embarrassed with herself she looked down and said..

"Sorry"

Raman: no no...there is no need to say sorry, being comfortable here I will order the food bhook legi hogi na tumhe?

Ishita: nahi..mein..mujhe..mujhe jana hoga..

Raman: where?

Ishita: I don't know but I can't stay here...

Raman gets the point what is she going to say..

Raman: I knew it you will say this only..

Ishita looked up to him confusingly..

Raman: you don't want leave from here because I'm a stranger for you,right?but ishita just think there is no one to help you in this big city,where will you go alone..tumahri sister ke bare mein bhi tumhe patha nahi hai..

Ishita looked down hearing him..

Raman: see ishita,I know you are right but in this state its better if you stay here,atleast till you get know about your sister.sur rehi baath meri family ki ,i am living here alone so family is not a problem,

Ishita: aap meri baath samajh nahi rehe ho..

Raman: ishita I know what you want to say,you must be thinking why a stranger doing this much for you,its not out of pitty ishita but I think only I can help you with your present situation..

Ishita:but,aap..

Raman: raman,you can call me ramna..

Ishita: ji, lekin kisi ko patha chalgeya tho? Mein yehan..

Raman: don't worry about that,no one comes here in day time because I will go to the college ,that time you stay here I will lock the door from out..

Ishita nooded her head positively but little hesitantly too...

Raman: aur han kabhi kabhi mere friends bhi aja the hai,lekin koyi baath nahi mein manage karlunga..

Ishita: ji

Raman: tho teek hai tum jake freshunup hojao mein zara bahar jake atha hun..

Ishita: k..lyun?

Raman: tumhareliye kapde nahi hoge na..kuch le atha hun mein..thab thak tum freshunup hojana,mein jaldi wapas ajaunga..

Saying raman went out after locking the house while ishita sat on the bed thinking about her amma and ramans words..

"kyun amma..kyun mujhe akele chodkar chali geyi,aapko patha than a aapke alawa appki ishu ko koyi nahi hai.phir bhi aisa kia aapne..ab dekho aap,kisi anjaan ki khar mein bhoj banke khadi hun mein..kya karun mein amma..kahan jaun..mein.."

"kya mein sahi kar rehi hun?mujhe nahi patha hai ki yeh kaun hai,lekin mere pass inke help lene ke seva koyi aur chara bhi nahi hai..vandu akka ka patha bhi nahi malum mujhe,agar cyehan se geyoi tho kahan jaungi mein?

Saying she cried again and again and at last getting tired she went to washroom to make relax her mind..

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Shot 2

Soon raman went to a textiles and said the sales girls to show some some nice salwar suits as he see her in salwar..

"sir,which size?" the sales girl asked..

Raman: hmm medium size ke dikha dena..

Sales girl: ji sir..Saying the girl showed him many suits, and he selected some different color of salwars and said them to pack it..

Sales girl: sir aur kuch?

Raman: aur iske sath..give it the other things which needed..he said in a go getting little embarrassed but the sales girls didn't get anything and asked again..

"what sir"

Raman: arey jo andar ka hai who bhi de dena..he said getting irritated by the girls question.

The girls starts to giggle hearing him and asked for the size..

"beta legtha hai aaj size ke chakkar mein tera size kam ho jayega" he murmured under his breath..and looked around then said..

Raman: who jo maniqueen hai uske hisaab se dena..he said showing a slim maniqueen which is wearing a sari..

The sales girls again giggles and raman get irritated..

"ki ki kya kar rehi hai,take money and pack the things"

The girls went from there and selected the things to pack..after about 10 minutes he comes out from the shop after settling the bills..

When he sat inside his car he took a deep breath and drunk some water thinking about the situation..

"kya hogeya hai tujhe ramna,ek ledki keliye tune aaj ithna embaress hua..phir bhi tujhe koyi farak nahi pad reha..ho kya gea hai tujhe.."

Meanwhile ishita finished her baath,after that she realized she don't have anything to wear,and she can't go out like this.

"mere pass tho kapde nhai hai,what I do..wait karlethi hun.."saying she stayed inside the bathroom waiting for ramna..

After about some time she hear the sound of door opening and she peeped out through the bathroom only to find raman entering inside the room with some packets, seeing him she quickly closed the door and locked it..

Raman: ishita..he called her mane..

Ishita: mein nadir hun..

Raman: comw out and try this dresses..

Ishita: aap jao mein try karlungi..

Raman: why? Bahar avo na,I want to talk to you..

Ishita: aap jayiye mein athi hun..

Raman: ishita is any problem there ?

Ishita: na..nahi..kuch bi tho nahi..

Raman: so come out na..

Ishita: woh..i have no dress to wear..

Raman smacked his head hearing her..

"bhuddhu raman,dresses tho tamare pass hai tho obvious hai who andar hi rehegi na..bina kapdo mein dhodi na bahar ayegi.."uff he made a face on his slip of tongue..And said..

Raman: sorry.. you change in the room I am going..Saying he get out from the room and closed it behind her with an embarrassed face.

After confirming that he is not inside the room she comes out and checked the dresses, she find some under garments too with the dresses and she get embarrassed again..

After changing to a pink salwar ishita sat at the bed thinking how to go out because after seeing the packets she was feeling very awakened to face him..but he remembered his words saying he wants to talk to her,so hiding her awkwardness and embarrassment she went out of the room only to find raman waiting for her with their food..

Seeing her ge gets lost in her beauty but composed himself soon and asked..

ageyi tum,chalo have your food" raman showed her a chair which is opposite to him..

Ishita sat there silently an dstarts to have her food slowly,

Seeing this raman cleared his voice and said..

"khana aaj hi khatham karna hai,kal nai.."he said to lighten the moment..

Ishita smiled a little and starts to have her food again in the same way only..

Raman: ishita,I want to know about your sister..

Ishita looked up to him.

Raman: actually I will try to find about your sister but I want some details,did you have any photo of her..

Ishita nodded her head positively..

Raman: tum ghoongi tho nahi hai na..

Ishita agin looked at him with a confused face..

Raman: arey kuch tho bolo yaar, he said seeing her again silent..

Ishita: ji..woh mein..

Raman: accha teek hai,I think you need some time to adjust here, so first you complete your food and then we will have a talk..

Saying both starts to eat their food silently..

That's when they hear the calling bell, saying ishita to relax raman went to check and find his friends through the key hall..

"oh shit,yeh log ab yehan kya kar reha hai..i have to hide ishita "

Saying he wen to her mad said her to go inside his room and don't come out till he calls her.She nodded her head and went to inside ramans room and locked it behind her..

"arey bhai,where are you,why you don't come college" romi asked while getting inside his house..

Raman: tum log yehan kyu?

Mihir: yehan mathlab? Hum yehan nahi aa sakthe kya?

Raman: nothinglike that,I just going to sleep..

Nidhi: what? You and sleep,this time never..

Romi: romi: tell na ramna,where are you from till morning..

Raman: I went to meet one of my uncle,he is ill so that's why..

Mihir: oh,is he fine now..

Raman: yah..

Romi: raman I am really sleepy,going to sleep he said walking to ramans room..

Raman: romi stop? He said in a sudden stopping romi from getting inside

Mihir: arey what happened raman,jaise ki tune koyi bhooth dekha ho..he is just going to your room

Raman: han,tum..tum guest room mein so jao na..

Mihir: why,romi always sleeps in your room na..

Raman: yah but not today,

Midhi: why ramna,what happened is any problem there..

Raman: no..nothing,I just saying there..There han the ac is not working in my room..thats it..

Romi: oh,ok fine I will rest on guest room saying romi went to sleep sometime while Raman takes a deep breath..

Nidhi: sit na raman,you want your notes na..so sit..

Raman: yah..i..i just come..saying he went from there..

Mihir: nidhi..is he behaving something strange..

Nidhi: yah mihir I too felt..

Meanwhile raman went to his room and said ishita to open the door, she opened it very slowly and Raman get inside then closed it..

"are you ok" raman asked to her for which she nodded her head..

Raman: ok,if u are tired you can sleep here, we will talk tomorrow ok..

Ishita: ji

Raman: so close the door and sleep well.Good night saying Raman went from there while ishita closed the door and went to sleep.

After that raman went at sat with mihir and nidhi,they asked many question about his behavior but he shrugged it off, they all enjoyed some time chit chatting with each other and after some time romi comes back to them and they left biding bye to Raman and he too went for sleep..

Shot 3

The next day morning when the sun raise peeped inside the room ishita opened her eyes and prayed to her murugan without opening her eyes..After that she went to get fresh and comes out after some time wearing a light blue salwar..she was looking very pure and beautiful..she just set her hair with a small clip and left it open..

When she comes out from the room she find it empty,thinking he must be sleeping she comes to the living area and find it all messed up.at first she set the things in place and then cleaned it with wet cloth..after that she noticed a small mandir,folding her hands she prayed infront of matharani and arranged the thal to do aarthi..

Closing her eyes she starts to sing the arti..

Jai ambe gauri maiya jai shyama gauri
Tumako nishadin dhyawat hari bramha shivaji

Maiya jai ambe gauri

Mang sindur virajat tiko mrigamad ko
Ujjwal se dou naina chandrawadan niko

Maiya jai ambe gauri

Kanak saman kalevar raktambar raje
Rakt pushp gal mala kanthan par saje

Maiya jai ambe gauri

Kehari wahan rajat khadag khappar dhari
Sur-nar-munijan sewat tinake dukhahari

Maiya jai ambe gauri

Kaanan kundal shobhit nasagre moti
Kotik chandr diwakar rajat sam jyoti

Maiya jai ambe gauri

Hearing a sweet voice raman opened eyes and gets up to find the source of voice..when his eyes got stuck with her he stood there like a statue,because her beauty made him to lost his mind on her,he looked her up to down ,a smile crept on his face seeing her lost in arthi..

Shumbh-nishumbh bidare mahishasur ghati
Dhumr vilochan naina nishadin madamati

Maiya jai ambe gauri

Chand-mund sanhare shonit bij hare
Madhu-kaitabh dou mare sur bhayahin kare

Maiya jai ambe gauri

Bramhani rudranitum kamala rani
Agam nigam bakhanitum shiv patarani

Maiya jai ambe gauri

Chausath yogini mangal gawatnritya karat bhairu
Bajat tal mridangaaru baajat damaru

Maiya jai ambe gauri

Tum hi jag ki mata tum hi ho bharata
Bhaktan ki dukh harta sukh sampati karta

Maiya jai ambe gauri

Bhuja char ati shobhivaramudra dhari
Manwanchhit fal pawat sewat nar nari

Maiya jai ambe gauri

Kanchan thal virajat agar kapur bati
Shrimalaketu mein rajat koti ratan jyoti

Maiya jai ambe gauri

Shri ambeji ki arati jo koi nar gave
Kahat shivanand swami sukh-sampatti pave

Maiya jai ambe gauri

When ishita completed her arti she starts to give the arti to house thats when she see him standing at the door way, she slowly comes to him and said..

"sorry" but raman was not there to hear her words but were lost in her sweet voice..

"raman" she called him by his name..and this too didn't did any difference in his state..

At last ishita slightly shrugged his shoulder which made raman comes out from his trace.

"beautiful" that was the first word which comes out from his mouth..

Ishita looked at him confusingly..

Raman: i mean you are singing very beautifully..

Ishita: thank you,and actually i am sorry,meri wajhe se aapki neend khul geyi na..

Raman: no need to say sorry, by the way i felt very good to wake up hearing a sweet voice..

Ishita smiled at him and forwards the arthi to him,

Raman: just a minute saying he quickly went and washed his face and hands and them comes back to her...

Raman: now give..

She smiled again and gives him arti.after that raman went to get ready for the college while ishita searched something inside the kitchen to make breakfast..

When raman comes out getting ready he see ishita arranging breakfast table..he got surprised and asked to her..

Raman: arey why you made this all..he asked looking at the dishes she made for breakfast..

Raman: mein kuch order kar letha na..

Ishita: every day you eat outside food?

Raman: not every day,meri aunty pados mein hai so kabhi kabhi wahan jakar bhi kha letha hun..nahi tho college canteen se..

Ishita: have it..She said serving food to him..

After having their food together Raman bid bye to her and he left after locking the house, the whole day ishita sat alone inside the house, while Raman was only thinking about her, his friends find him lost somewhere every time..So they asked about the matter again and again but he didn't said anything..

At the evening when Raman comes back to home he find her sleeping on the sofa in a sitting position, coming near her he tried to call her, hats when he noticed the dried tears in her cheeks, he felt bad leaving her alone in the house but what can he do, he have to go to college..

"ishita" he called her by her name..

"aap ageye" asking she gets up chiming her droopy eyes..

Raman: pura din ro rehi thin a..

Ishita: na..nahi tho..mein ro nahi rehi thi..she turned to other side

Raman: mujhe dikh reha hai..

"see ishita i know you are not comfortable staying here with me,but at least you can try na..he said making her turn to him by her shoulder..

Ishita looked up to him while he continued..

"kabhi kabhi anjan logo se hi apna pan miltha hai ishita,don't think ki you are burden on me,i myself decided to make you stay here because i care for you, why don't know..but ishita you can trust me,tum mujhse dosthi karogi?"

Hearing his talk ishitas eyes got moist, here she thinks there is no one in the world that will support her but without asking a stranger helping her for everything and he himself asking for her friendship."

Ishta was overwhelmed by his words and she nodded her head anticipating that she is ready to become his friend..Raman got happy seeing this and he hugged her tight to show his happiness which made ishita startled..

Realising what he did, he quickly made her part and said sorry but ishita smiled and give a soft hug to him stating that she is really ok with his hug..

"raman puthar tu andr hai kya" there comes his auntys voice calling him from outside

Raman: ji aunty,coming" saying he quickly sent ishita inside his room and went to open the door

Aunty: puthar tune khana khaya..

Raman: nahi,main abhi abhi aya hun

Pammi:' chal koyi gal nahi,tu nay eh khale..aaj aunty ne parathe banaye the..

Raman: thank you aunty..saying he took the plate from aunty while aunty noticed his house..

Pammi: ramna puthar yeh tera hi khar hai na..

Raman: kya hua aunty,aap aise kun pooch rehi hai..he asked getting confuse with her question..

Pammi: arey kuch nahi,bas dekhke aisa leg reha hai ki koyi kudi yeha reh rehi hai..

Raman: ma..mathlab

Pammi: isse pehale kabhi bhi tera khar ithana neat nhai dekha na maine..

Raman: oh.that..kyun aunty main bhi yeh sab kar saktha hu na..sirf kudyan hi kar sakthi hai kya..

Aunty: arey nahi nahi puthar aunty mazaak kar rehi thi..chal mein jathi hun bye..

Raman: bye aunty..saying he closed the door and took a deep breath then said..

"thank god baj geya"

Days passes like this in a jiffy, in those days ishita and raman gets more comfortable with each other, and ramans growing feeling over her made him falling in love with her very soon,but he scared to confess his love thinking what if went leaving him..From outside no one got any idea about ishita living with raman...

One day ishita was preparing something special for their Sunday when raman comes to her and forwards his laptop to her..

"madrasan,fill it"

Ishita: kya hai yeh?

Raman: application of online mba course,teri degree tho complete hai tho maine socha kyun na tunhe mba join karvade..

Ishita: iski kya zaroorath hai ramna?

Raman: don't argue with me,maine keha diya na so keha diya..just fill it..

Ishita: ok boss..saying she smiled and said him to keep the laptop on the table,she will fill it after making food..

With ramans help ishta starts to do mba through online and study hard staying inside the house only,meanwhile ramans last year exam starts and he got busy with his study, but between all this his heart start to beat fast thinking when his exam complete he have to return to his parents..Till now ishita don't know about this and he didn't said this to her thinking she will get tensed..

Raman didn't want to go leaving her alone and he wants to confess his love as per,as the end of the exam raman decides to tell about ishita to his friends so that he get a support after confessing his love.

Calling his friends to a cafe raman confessed all the truth and the trio get shocked hearing him,at first they get little angry for hiding such a big thing from them..but later seeing ramans state they forgive him and supports him to confess his love..but before that they all wants to see the girl who steals their best friends heart..

Hearing their demand raman smiled and took them to his house to meet ishita with every one..when the door bell rings ishita opend the door after confirming its only raman..but when she opened the door she find romi,mihir and nidhi with him,at the moment she see them she runs inside and locked herself inside the room..

"mihir: arey bhabhi bhaag kyun geyi?

Romi: han bhai,hum ithna bura dikhthe hai kya

Raman: shut up,and come inside may be she gets shocked seeing you all here..

Mihir: tho teek hai hum hi jathe hai bhabhi ko bulane..

Saying they walks to ramans too and knocked the door,ishita stopped her breath hearing the knock and starts to fidget her dupatta tensily..

"ayyo murugan,yeh log iss waqth yeh kyun aye he,raman ne bathaa bhi nahi mujhe"

Mihir: arey bhabhi ,open the door na we will not eat you,we are come to meet you..dont worry..

Ishita:ra..raman kahan hai..

Romi: arey bhabhi aapka raman yehi hai..aap bahar avo tho sahi..

Raman was sitting on the sofa smiling seeing all this,

Ishita slowly opened the door and and peeped out to search Raman while all smiled seeing her antics, at the moment her eyes get ramans vies she quickly runs to him and hugged him..

"haye haye,athe hi hug and all" nidhi said teasing ishra..ishita quickly parted from him and stood behind him looking at his friends..

Raman introduced ishita to all and said ishita to get comfortable as they knows everything about them..after sometime ishita get comfortable with them and she maintain a good bond with them..

Ishita made them all eat food and after that they sat there to have some chit chat, between this raman got a call from his parents stating that they booked his ticket after 1 week,raman got sad with the news but more than that he gets worried thinking about ishita..

After some hour mihir romi and nidhi left from there saying raman to confess his love to ishita soon..ishita were so happy to have a nice chat with his friends, so she quickly wrapped her all kitchen works and went to have a talk with ramna..

Ishita find him sitting at the terrace garden and shee went and sat near him placing her head on his shoulder..

"kya soch rehe ho"

She asked to him..

Raman: nothing,just looking at the stars..

Ishita:accha,they why this worry lines in our forehead..

Hearing her question he looked at her and asked..

"are you really happy with me?"

Ishita: what happened raman? She asked getting worried

Raman: just tell me..

Ishita: i am more than happy with you,meri har khushi aapse hi tho hai..

Raman looked at her eyes and their eyes met with each other..

Raman:will you marry me ishita? He asked straight forward which shocked..

Ishita: ra..raman you know what you asked..

Raman:tell me ishita,will you marry me..?

Ishita:raman.what are you saying..stop joking with me..saying she gets up and tried to go..

"its not jock damit,i am serious" he said getting little angry with her action which made her to stop her steps and looked at him

"i am not joking" he whispered clear to her

Ishita: Raman..i..i.she stammered getting nothing to say..

Raman: i love you ishita..he said looking up to her,ishita widened her eyes with surprise, she feels like she gets the whole world under her feet, she was loving him from the day when he did everything for her, but didn't said fearing his reaction towards her feelings, because she is all alone in the world and he..He has everything, fearing his rejection she didn't said anything to him till date, and never give any wrong signal to stating that she loves him..But today he himself asking her for marriage, he confessed his love before her.

"i love you too" that was the first thong comes out from her mouth, hats it like waiting for this only he take her in a tight hug and pulled her more to him making her to ang on his body..both smiled like anything ..

"i love youuu" he screamed twirling her around in his arms..

Ishita laughed her heart out wrapping her hands around his neck

Hua hai aaj pehli baar
Jo aise muskuraya hoon
Tumhe dekha toh jaana ye
Ke kyun duniya mein aaya hoon (x2)

Ye jaan lekar ke jaa meri
Tumhe jeene main aaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon




Breathing heavily after the excitement raman stops and ishta slipped through his body slowly to down touching his all body parts..their eyes were still locked, she gets shy unable to meet his gaze and looked down while raman make her look at him..

He tightened his grip on her back and stats to caress her bare back,feeling goosebups al over her body she looked at raman shyly only to receive a naughty wink from him..pushing him a littile she runs from his clutch..

Baaton mein teri hain badmashiyan
Sab bewajah ki hain taarifiyaan

Main likh doon aasmaan par ye
Ke padh lega jahaan saara
Huaa na hoga ab koi
Yahan hum do sa dobara

Main duniya bhar ki taarifein
Tere sajde mein laaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon
(Rab se laaya hoon.. Rab se laaya hoon..)

Suddenly she stopped his steps feeling a tuck on her dupatta,pulling her dupatta to himself raman made ishita to come near her, hugging her from back raman gave a slight bite on her ear..

Tu hai jo rubaru mere
Bada mehfooz rehta hoon
Tere milne ka shukrana
Khuda se roz karta hoon (x2)

Humko pata hai yeh nadaniyaan hain
Aawara dil ki hai aawariyan

Yeh dil pagal bana baitha
Isey ab tu hi samjha de
Dikhe tujhme meri duniya
Meri duniya tu banja re

Hoon khushkismat jo kismat se
Tumhe aise main paaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon

Shivering with his doings ishita turned to him and hugged him tight till her breath gets normal, parting her her slowly from her he asked her permission to seal their deal..

"can I kiss you?" he asked in his husky voice tracing her lips..

Ishita smiled and looked down shyly, taking it as her approval he pressed his lips on her, they both kissed each other with the equal passion forgetting the whole world..

The end..


An epilogue is coming soon..if want it soonish give me a very good response friends..thank you..


Edited by Muskan193 - 8 years ago
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Awesome Ts
Update the epilogue soon
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome Ts

Update the epilogue soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
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very very nice shots...very happy that you completed all 3 parts @ 1 shot...one need lot of patience to do that...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg anju..
Its beautiful, fantastic, lovely ts..
Update epilogue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome story
Love it
Update epilogue soon
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lovely ts...
give the epilogue soon
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It's awesome update..
Love it as a stranger how Raman help her.
I wish real life mai aise boys hothe..
I don't have a word to say its awesome awesome,mind blowing,fantastic..give epilogue too..

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