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Archana

@Archi21

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ronshaan
Hi archana,
beautiful part 2 of the story, Nice nice romantic.
keep writing

Thanks for loving it 😃😃😃

Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago

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Archana

@Archi21

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Previous update on Page 2

Part 3

After the song he received another call. Some other girl was calling.

Girl: "Do you think she saw you?"

RJ: "I don't think so."

In between the songs, he was getting this type of calls. The listeners were asking about the girl or his feelings towards her. He didn't want to discuss her continuously as he was still lost in her intoxicating memory. Discussing her would have brought him to the reality of her absence. So any question that was starting with the girl, he was disconnecting the call.

After two minutes, he took a call in the hope of it being different.

RJ: "Don't ask me. Say your story."

Girl: "I saw him two weeks ago. His eyes were the most silent and mysterious ones. He had a husky voice. He was talking to my mom. My mom was asking him about his well being."

RJ: "You mean your mom knew him?"

Girl: "Yes, she was his teacher. According to her, he was the only student in class who knew at what time what should be done. He was the poet of the school. He never studied to score, he studied to gain knowledge. He was the tallest boy of the class."

RJ: "Then??"

Girl: "When mom met him, they were talking. But I, I was lost in his hair. His long locks were flying in the air when a gush of cool breeze touched his face. He combed his long locks using his fingers. They slipped through his fingers like silk. He can be easily identified in the crowd because of his height and personality."

RJ: "What was so special about his personality?"

Girl: "Standing straight like a pole, wearing kurta, leather watch, those long locks with a red bandana tied on his forehead. I have seen many boys wearing these things. But I think these things are not meant for anybody, they are just meant for him."

RJ: "You seem to be flattered by his looks."

Girl: "Yes, I am and any other girl would have been too if she was in my place. Not only good looking, he was down to earth too. He came to our house as there was no place on my Scooty to keep some of the shopping bags. He was riding just behind me. I was watching him in the rear-view mirror. His long locks which were not inside the helmet were flying when he was riding the bike. They would have flown better if he had not worn his helmet. But being a responsible person he was wearing it. I don't know why but he was smiling."

RJ: "Continue please."

Girl: "It was too hot at that time of the day. My face was covered with a scarf and eyes with glares. I was riding slowly in the hot temperature so that I could watch him. His smile had a miracle that the hot sunrays were now like cool breeze to me. As he was getting late, so as soon as we reached home, he left. And in this way my story ended."

RJ: "Wow... Do you want to dedicate any song to him?"

Girl : "Yes.
~Tu tu hai wahi dil ne jisse apna kaha ~"

RJ : "May I know the lucky boy's name?"

Girl: "Well you know him but I will tell you his name after this song."

The RJ played the song.

~Tu tu hai wahi dil ne jisse apna kaha
Tu hai jahan main hoon vahan
Ab to yeh jeena tere bin hai saza
O mil jaye iss tarah, do lehre jis tarah
O mil jaye iss tarah, do lehre jis tarah
Phir ho na juda haan yeh vaada raha~

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Story: Archi21😳
Editor: ⭐️Shaina_b⭐️
(Thank You for making it readable👏)

Edited by Archi21 - 6 years ago

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

IF-Stunnerz

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Poor Neil is now being asked about that girl in every phone call!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

This was bound to happen as he had narrated his love story so beautifully!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

He doesn't want to come out of her memory and come to the reality that she is not with him!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Finally a girl called who has her own story!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

So she is narrating the story of how she fell in love with a guy!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

She liked his eyes and his husky voice!!!!

He was her mom's student and she seems to be all praises about him!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

He had long hair ... now this is getting interesting!!!!😃 😃 😃 😃

She is soo impressed by his personality!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He is so helpful and sweet and had come to her house to help with the shopping bags!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

She was so awed by him and loved watching him and so drove slowly so that she can keep watching him!!!!

Her luck is just like Neil's, the girl didn't notice him and here the guy did not see her face!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

It is sad that the guy didn't see that a girl had fallen in love with him!!!!❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

She said that Neil knows that guy and I wonder how she seems so sure about it!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and perfect for the girl and her feelings!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This part was awesome!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Edited by Shaina_b - 7 years ago

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Khadeja Akter

@Khadeja

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Part 3

Superb part it is !!!! 👏

Poor RJ Neil ... 😆
He didn't want to listen about that girl that would make him more depress.

Ohk, so one girl was telling about a boy ... 😛
She liked his eyes and voice.. 😊
He was her mother's student...

He has also long hair...
She was impressed by his personality 😛

This story is getting more interesting !!!! 😃

She was awed by him.. 😉
Okk so he had come to her house for helping with bags 😊
That's sweet 😛

She was just looking at him 😳
And drove slowly to spend more time like that 😛
He didn't see her ... 😵

Awee ... she also dedicated a song for him 😛
It is lovely song ⭐️

She told him that he knew him 😛
Really !!!! And how she was so sure !!! 😛

Opps!!! this chapter is ended .

It was an engrossing chapter ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
You are awesome Archu... 😃

Hopefully you don't angry at this late reader 😵

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

I read this story with smile ... I guess bcoz I thing she will be ...T ...

Ok so Neel don't want to disclose more details ... or he don't know what to say !!!!

Bachara Neel he thinks about that girl on every call!!!!

But this time some one wants to tell her story!!!!!

I must say she is great narrator than Neel !!!!!

Kya tareef Karon uski Jisne tumhe banaya...

She is more than impressed by him ...

She is in love with this guy !!!!!

But she told he didn't notice her sad !!!!!!

Yeh Kya kyun itna Chhotu update !!!!!

Plz update soon ...,

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Archana

@Archi21

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Poor Neil is now being asked about that girl in every phone call!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛
This happened because he described her so beautifully😊

This was bound to happen as he had narrated his love story so beautifully!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏
yes😃

He doesn't want to come out of her memory and come to the reality that she is not with him!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔
yeah, poor he

Finally a girl called who has her own story!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
yes, finally😆

So she is narrating the story of how she fell in love with a guy!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
exactly!!!😊

She liked his eyes and his husky voice!!!!
yeah😊

He was her mom's student and she seems to be all praises about him!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
she had been hearing about him from her mom before meeting him and finally she met him😊

He had long hair ... now this is getting interesting!!!!😃 😃 😃 😃
yeah😉

She is soo impressed by his personality!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
She is😉

He is so helpful and sweet and had come to her house to help with the shopping bags!!!!    😊 😊 😊 😊
wish every boy is like him😊

She was so awed by him and loved watching him and so drove slowly so that she can keep watching him!!!!
she was capturing the moments😊

Her luck is just like Neil's, the girl didn't notice him and here the guy did not see her face!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔
yeah

It is sad that the guy didn't see that a girl had fallen in love with him!!!!❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
just like Neil

She said that Neil knows that guy and I wonder how she seems so sure about it!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
Check next update to know more😉😉

The song is very nice and perfect for the girl and her feelings!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
thanks😳

This part was awesome!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Thanks for loving it so much😃😃😃

Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago

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Ron

@ronshaan

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

will read when time permits.

thanks for sharing

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Ron

@ronshaan

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Nice progress in the story.. seems like she was talking about him because she ended her talk with the saying you know him. it has to be himself.

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Archana

@Archi21

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Part 3

Superb part it is !!!! 👏
I am glad you liked it 😃

Poor RJ Neil ... 😆
He didn't want to listen about that girl that would make him more depress.
yes, poor RJ 😆

Ohk, so one girl was telling about a boy ... 😛
She liked his eyes and voice.. 😊
He was her mother's student...
yes, finally someone is telling their story instead of ask his😆

He has also long hair...
She was impressed by his personality 😛
She was 😃

This story is getting more interesting !!!! 😃
It is 😃

She was awed by him.. 😉
Okk so he had come to her house for helping with bags 😊
That's sweet 😛
He is sweet 😃😉

She was just looking at him 😳
And drove slowly to spend more time like that 😛
He didn't see her ... 😵
He was busy in talking with his teacher😆

Awee ... she also dedicated a song for him 😛
It is lovely song ⭐️
Yup, she did 😃
I like that song 😃

She told him that he knew him 😛
Really !!!! And how she was so sure !!! 😛
You will come to know in next chapter 😉

Opps!!! this chapter is ended .
yes, it did 😛

It was an engrossing chapter ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
You are awesome Archu... 😃
Thanks for loving it sooo much😃

Hopefully you don't angry at this late reader 😵
I am never angry on any of the reader for being late 😃

I am glad you read this update😃😃😃

Edited by Archi21 - 6 years ago

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Archana

@Archi21

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 6 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: kumari27
I read this story with smile ... I guess bcoz I thing she will be ...T ...
You are a wise woman😃

Ok so Neel don't want to disclose more details ... or he don't know what to say !!!!
Both😉

Bachara Neel he thinks about that girl on every call!!!!
yes, bechara Neel😆😆

But this time some one wants to tell her story!!!!!
Finally someone is ready to share their story😃

I must say she is great narrator than Neel !!!!!
Lets offer her Neel's job 😉

Kya tareef Karon uski Jisne tumhe banaya...
yes 😉

She is more than impressed by him ...
She is 😃

She is in love with this guy !!!!!
She is in love 😃

But she told he didn't notice her sad !!!!!!
His attention was on something else 😊

Yeh Kya kyun itna Chhotu update !!!!!
Sorry!!!!😳

Plz update soon ...,

Thanks for reading and loving it 😃

Edited by Archi21 - 6 years ago

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