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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ronshaan
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4408650
yeh kahani kuch yun c lag rehi ha
but seems
different

So i read 1st chapter.. Nice nice.. describe yun kiya k mere akhon k samne jaise k film shuru ho gya wo tara ka chehra kaise MJ dekhta ha .. Nice job good written.. Liked.

Looking fw for next chapter.

Yes, RJ Neil is same but both stories are different😊

Don't know why, but somehow I am in love with RJ Neil😛

I am glad you liked 1st chapter 😃

I am too happy to know I was able to create the motion picture with my words😳

You have great imagination 👏👏👏

Thanks for loving it so much😃😃😃😃

Updating next part this weekend😃

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Happy Belated Valentines Day Archu !!!! 😃 🤗 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
2014 Valentine week was really special ... 😳
MriAra confession and 2nd wedding
Uff !! your pics 😳😳

2014 ka Valentine week mere liye ab tak ka most romantic romantic week tha😃
MriAra ki har ek pic hearts capture kar leti hai

And the Valentine surprise for us is new MriAra SS !!!!!!!!! 😃
The title is really sweet !!!
❤️ Ek Nazar Mein ❤️
Yes, surprise for loyal ⭐️Pankhis⭐️
Title suits MriAra😊

So the story has started with radio station and RJ Neil. 😉
I thought does this have any connection with 'First Rain'. 😛
Then had started read thoroughly. 😆😆😆
Ok.. a pure new story. 👍🏼

Some way I am in love with RJ Neil, iss liye 2nd story mein bhi le aayi😉
Yes, story is different😊

So RJ Neil has come with his attractive voice and his own love story. 😉
RJ Neil was mesmerized totally by the girl. 😉 😃
Yes, you have his voice to mesmerize while he explains by whom he was mesmerized😉😆

Hahaha .. He also had counted the seconds. 😆
OMG !!! how he had described her lips !!! ☺️
Every thing for him was going in slow motion😊
He is an observant 😃😉

😲 She was coming towards him...
Really would she do something !!! 🤓 🤓
And now he had played the song. 🥱
hahaha...cliffhanger 😆
He knows how to keep listener😉
Think what she would do...😛

But the song is beautiful like the girl. ⭐️
Archu and her songs selection are always excellent !!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder😃 and here beholder is ⭐️RJ Neil⭐️
Glad to know you enjoyed the song😃😃😃
I love this song😃

The starting of the story is really lovely !!!
You are as always marvelous at your work Archu. 👏👏👏
Thanks for loving it so much
🤗🤗🤗🤗
I hope this story keeps you entertaining throughout 😊

Thanks Shai Di for helping ... 😃
Both of you do a lot for us. 😊
A big 🤗 for Shaina for editing my crap and making it beautiful 😃
We are MriAra crazy😆

Please, continue 😛

Thanks for loving it so much
🤗🤗

Updating today😉

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Previous update on Page 1

Part 2

After the song finished, he continued.

"So as I was saying, what happened with me today evening. Where was I?" he asked trying to make people more eager to know what happened next.

He chuckled and continued, "Ok ok...listeners, don't pull your hair out or think of shooting me the next time you see me. So me and that girl, we were face to face and then... She just passed by my side."
He said still chuckling with some surprise in his voice.

"Ohh... It was me who was looking at her... It was a relief that I was not caught red-handed. She was not looking at me," he said taking a small breath of relief.

He continued slightly relaxing his body in the chair.
"Her big eyes were aiming at somewhere else. When she passed from my side I smelled her sweet fragrance. It was something like lily."
When he said lily, he was still in the moment engulfing the sweet scent of her.

"She approached a Scooty parked five steps away from my gang. Kept her bags in the Scooty. Then she collected her long hair which was playing with her cheeks and lips and tied them back. Lucky is her hair which got a chance to touch her soft cheeks!"
He shouted out the last word making them feel how he truly wanted to touch and feel them.

"Then she covered her face with a scarf. Only her two deep mysterious eyes could be seen on her face."
He stopped again, took a breath and continued, "I am telling you those eyes are the most beautiful eyes in the world."

Then coughing slightly he continued, "Then she took out her helmet and put it on. She was about to leave and my heart was about to break, when her phone rang. Ahh... Some more time to adore her."
He finished the last line in a soft happy voice and relaxed his body in the chair.

He continued with a surety in his voice, "I am sure there was some good news. Because the smile of her lips extended to her eyes, the smile lit up her eyes with sparks."

"After completing the call, she started her Scooty. It was now time to say bye to her. Hey bye you beautiful!" he said with love filled in his voice which was now a little husky.

"I shouted in my mind. Because shouting publicly would have gotten me beaten up," he said chuckling.

"One good thing happened. I saw a name written on her Scooty," he said in a way that would lead anyone listening to his talk to jump with joy.

"But I am confused whether it was her name or someone else's name," he said in a little frustrated voice.

"As I don't know whether she owned it or not. And even if she owned it, that name might be of someone she loves. Ohhh... It's so confusing," he said with more frustration in his voice.

"I wish I could have asked her," he said regretfully.

"I have read that name and I will never forget it. It was just a four letter word. The Name was as beautiful as she was," he said with pure determination in his voice.

"But I am not going to tell you." He said chuckling.

"Okay listeners, that was my five minute long love story. The end."
He said rubbing his hands and adjusting himself in his chair again.

RJ Neil was doing a night show in which listeners can call, talk to him and request songs.

"So listeners, that was my story. If you too have a story like this, share with me," he said returning his voice to normal.

He received the first call.

Girl: "It was too romantic. Is there any possibility of you meeting her again?"

RJ: "1% possibility. Now girl you tell us your story."

Girl: "Hey RJ Neil what was her name?"

RJ: "You guess a four letter name."

Girl: "Give me a hint, I will guess."

RJ: "T. Now guess the other letters."

He disconnected the call to keep from revealing any further information about that girl.

This call happened when he was playing a song for the other listeners. The song he had played suited him very well.

~ Pakhi pakhi pardesi.. Pakhi pakhi pardesi
Aye ajnabi tu bhi kabhi awaaz de kahi se
Main yahan tukdon mein ji raha hoon
Tu kahi tukdon mein ji rahi hai ~

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Story: Archi21😳
Editor: ⭐️Shaina_b⭐️
(Thank You for making it readable👏)

Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Neil knows everyone is eager to hear what happened next!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

He is teasing them knowing their reactions!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆

So Neil was not caught red-handed staring at her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

But that girl also missed out that someone was falling in love with her!!!!

Agar pakda gaya hota then he would have to describe her anger as well!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Of course he would notice her fragrance as he doesn't seem to miss much!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Neil wants to touch her cheeks and even finds her hair lucky!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Pehli baar dekha aur itni betabi!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆

Ab bichadne ka waqt bhi aa gaya and bechara had to say bye in his mind!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

So he saw a name on her Scooty but doesn't know if it is hers or not!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

What a description of his five minute love story!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Neil ki baatein sunke girls seem to have gone crazy!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I think from his hints we can guess the girl's name!!!!😃 😃 😃 😃

Neil doesn't seem to want to reveal too much information about the girl!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and seems to say the words of Neil's heart!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This part was fantastic!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Edited by Shaina_b - 8 years ago

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Neil knows everyone is eager to hear what happened next!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes, he ended conversation at very crucial point ( The way I did😉 )

He is teasing them knowing their reactions!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆
hehhe, I loved it😆

So Neil was not caught red-handed staring at her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛
By god's grace he was saved😊

But that girl also missed out that someone was falling in love with her!!!!
yes, poor girl she might never know what she missed😭

Agar pakda gaya hota then he would have to describe her anger as well!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
yes, but I think after getting beaten up his voice would be a little different😆

Of course he would notice her fragrance as he doesn't seem to miss much!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
His full attention was on that girl, he is quiet a good observant 😊😊

Neil wants to touch her cheeks and even finds her hair lucky!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
yes, naught Neil 😉

Pehli baar dekha aur itni betabi!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆
Ek nazar mein bhi pyaar hota hai 😉😉

Ab bichadne ka waqt bhi aa gaya and bechara had to say bye in his mind!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔
He can't go in front of her and say her bye warna kya bolta😛

So he saw a name on her Scooty but doesn't know if it is hers or not!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕
yes, its sort of confusing

What a description of his five minute love story!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏
see even 5 minute is enough to fall in love😊

Neil ki baatein sunke girls seem to have gone crazy!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
hahaha, yes, all are going crazy 😆

I think from his hints we can guess the girl's name!!!!😃 😃 😃 😃
We know cause we are smart😛😉

Neil doesn't seem to want to reveal too much information about the girl!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
He is gentle man😊

The song is very nice and seems to say the words of Neil's heart!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
yes, it is😊

This part was fantastic!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Thanks for loving it😃😃

Thanks for such a long comment😊

Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago

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Khadeja Akter

@Khadeja

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Sorry Archu for late reply

Part - 2

This part is lovely ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

So Neil's continuation after the song..
Neil also knew everyone was very eager like us... 😛

So she just didn't notice...
Pheew... 😆😆😆
Neil was not caught in red handed 😛
Of course Neil and his observation...
He noticed her fragrance 😉

She was looking for her scooty..
Ohoo.. Neil wanted to touch her cheeks 😳
He also loved her eyes

He was sad as she was about to go..
But then became happy when her call came 😉
Okk the girl got a good news 😛

And then she went from there.
Awee... Neil was sad again...

Neil saw a name on scooty 😛
So we can guess the girl's name 😃
He was confused either it was hers or not.

So RJ Neil's 5 minutes little love story came to an end 💔

Now, listeners were guessing the girl's name..
We too 😉
Ohk .. he gave a hint, it started with 'T' 😃
So Neil didn't want to reveal more information 😛

Yes, the song suited with his situation very well 👍🏼

Great update 👏 👏 👏
Want to know more about the girl 😃

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Another great chapter 👏

Neel ki betabi ke Kya Kahne kuchh kaha Bhi nai or kah Bhi Gaye 😃

So she missed out that someone falling in love with her 😉

Kya describe kiya hai ...apne 5 minute ke pyaar ko ...

Jo pakada Gaya hota toh gusse ko Bhi describe karna pasta ...

Betabi toh dekho pehli baar me hi cheeks ko ...that's too fast ...

Chalo ab bichhadne ka Samay Bhi aa Gaya...

Neel ki baatien sun or Bhi ladke Dewane ho Gaye honge!!!

Girl is looking more smart ...

Thanks for sharing interesting chapter 👏 👏
Sorry for late reply 😊

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Sorry Archu for late reply
You are never late my dear 😃

Part - 2

This part is lovely ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Thanks😳😳

So Neil's continuation after the song..
Neil also knew everyone was very eager like us... 😛
yeah😉

So she just didn't notice...
Pheew... 😆😆😆
Neil was not caught in red handed 😛
Of course Neil and his observation...
He noticed her fragrance 😉
yeah, he was not caught red handed and yes he is very good observant 😉

She was looking for her scooty..
Ohoo.. Neil wanted to touch her cheeks 😳
He also loved her eyes
yeah, he did😊

He was sad as she was about to go..
But then became happy when her call came 😉
Okk the girl got a good news 😛
yes, he was sad but seeing her happy lighted him as well😊

And then she went from there.
Awee... Neil was sad again...
yeah, poor Neil

Neil saw a name on scooty 😛
So we can guess the girl's name 😃
He was confused either it was hers or not.
yes, you ca n guess her name😊 and I am sure u will guess her name correctly😉

So RJ Neil's 5 minutes little love story came to an end 💔
yes, 5 min long love story ended

Now, listeners were guessing the girl's name..
We too 😉
Ohk .. he gave a hint, it started with 'T' 😃
So Neil didn't want to reveal more information 😛
Go ahead and guess girl's name😉
He knows how to keep listeners on their toes😉

Yes, the song suited with his situation very well 👍🏼
yes, it suited well😊

Great update 👏 👏 👏
Want to know more about the girl 😃
To know what happened next read next part😉

Thanks for reading it and commenting 😃

Thanks for loving it😃

Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago

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Ron

@ronshaan

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Hi archana,

beautiful part 2 of the story, Nice nice romantic.

keep writing

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: kumari27
Another great chapter 👏
Thanks

Neel ki betabi ke Kya Kahne kuchh kaha Bhi nai or kah Bhi Gaye 😃
yehi too kamal hai Neil ka 😉😉

So she missed out that someone falling in love with her 😉
yeah, she missed it

Kya describe kiya hai ...apne 5 minute ke pyaar ko ...
yes, that's RJ Neil 😃

Jo pakada Gaya hota toh gusse ko Bhi describe karna pasta ...
haan, aur kitne sandal pade wo bhi 😆😆😆

Betabi toh dekho pehli baar me hi cheeks ko ...that's too fast ...
fast forward- 4G world hai😉

Chalo ab bichhadne ka Samay Bhi aa Gaya...
yes

Neel ki baatien sun or Bhi ladke Dewane ho Gaye honge!!!
yes, uski baato mein jadu hai😃

Girl is looking more smart ...
yes, she is😉

Thanks for sharing interesting chapter 👏 👏
Sorry for late reply 😊