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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Happy Valentine's Day to All Pankhis😃

Yaad hai ⭐️2014⭐️ ka Valentine's week

Full-on MriAra tha

Proposal 😳 se leke

marriage 🥳 tak

February full-on romance

We cannot bring those days back😭

But we can enjoy them by remembering our beloved MriAra😃

Too issi baat par ek chhoti si story😉

~Ek Nazar Mein~

I hope you will enjoy it 😊

Leave your comments😉

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Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Ek Nazar Mein

Part 1

At a Radio station.

~Ek nazar mein bhi pyaar hota hai, maine suna hai ...~

"Hello friends. This is RJ NEIL on your own night show. For the next thirty minutes I am yours."

"So you must be wondering why I was humming a song at the start of the show? So the story is..." He rubbed his hands and continued.

"Today when I was with my friends spending my precious evening time, she came..." He paused for a second and then continued.

"Yes , a girl ... Her large deep eyes where analyzing the traffic to cross the road, moving from left to right and right to left with the fast moving traffic. She was wearing a salwar kameez, the colour of her dress was violet with shades of grey and white. Her long hair was touching her cheeks and eyes. It was like they were kissing her soft pink cheeks and those mysteries eyes."

He stopped and closed his eyes to remember the pleasant moment.

Keeping his hand on his chest over his heart he said, "Aha...To me it was a pleasant moment."

"But she seemed frustrated," he continued chuckling and said, "She was pulling them back again and again. But her hair seemed to be naughty. She was trying harder to keep them back but somehow one or two strands kept rubbing her soft cheeks again and again."

He then stopped, cleared his throat and said, "Then finally after thirty seconds of continuous traffic she was able to cross the road."

And he took a deep breath.

He then continued, "She was looking more and more beautiful as she was coming nearer to my side. Oh...I forgot to mention her petal soft lips."
He said with guilt in his voice for forgetting something so important as describing her lips.

"They were the softest lips I have ever seen. They were pink," he said softly.

"No... No... No artificial colour. There was no lipstick. They were naturally pink," he said in a very confident voice.

"So she crossed the road and what next?" he paused for a second and continued in his voice filled with anxiety.

"She was coming towards me. Yes she was walking in my direction. Now the only thing in my mind was did she see me adoring her?? And what will be her next move?? Is she going to slap me?? Or smile? Or stop? And talk?"
He was throwing all types of questions that were possible in his situation.

"In one second my mind was full of questions. And she was approaching me. Nearer and nearer she got to me." He made a heartbeat sound(dhak-dhak) to make the listeners aware of his anxiety.

"She was face to face with me. And then..." He stopped and said, "I will tell you what happened next, but after this song," and played:

~Ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa laga
Jaise Khilta gulaab
Jaise shayar ka khwaab
Jaise ujli kiran
Jaise ban mein hiran
Jaise chandni raat
Jaise narmi ki baat
Jaise mandir mein ho ek jalta diya... ~

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Story: Archi21😳
Editor: ⭐️Shaina_b⭐️
(Thank You for making it readable👏)

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 8 years ago

Happy Valentine's Day to you too Archu!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

The Valentine Week of 2014 was really very special!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Mrityunjay professed his love for Tara, followed by their second and third wedding!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

February was full of romance!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Thank you for this wonderful gift on Valentine's Day!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

The pics you used are beautiful and sooo romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The banner is beautiful!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

The starting song is very nice and sets the mood of the story!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The title is sweet and perfect!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

So RJ Neil in his wonderful voice tells his story!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Neil was totally mesmerized by the girl!!!!

The way he described her in detail so lovingly is just fantastic!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Someone clearly is in love with her lips and I am sure he finds them kissable!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

She was coming towards him and I wonder if she has noticed him!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Would she really do something now??😛 😛 😛 😛

Neil stopped at a cliffhanger keeping his audience on the edge!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

The song is very nice and perfect for Neil and his situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This part was awesome!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

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Ron

@ronshaan

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Posted: 8 years ago

hI Archana, thanks for PM. Happy valentines week ka beautiful full on romance story padhne k liye I am always ready... Will read and comment 😊😉

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Ron

@ronshaan

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

yeh RJ neil kuch jana pehchana sa laga..

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Ron

@ronshaan

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4408650

yeh kahani kuch yun c lag rehi ha

but seems

different

So i read 1st chapter.. Nice nice.. describe yun kiya k mere akhon k samne jaise k film shuru ho gya wo tara ka chehra kaise MJ dekhta ha .. Nice job good written.. Liked.

Looking fw for next chapter.

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Khadeja Akter

@Khadeja

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Happy Belated Valentines Day Archu !!!! 😃 🤗 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
2014 Valentine week was really special ... 😳
MriAra confession and 2nd wedding
Uff !! your pics 😳😳

And the Valentine surprise for us is new MriAra SS !!!!!!!!! 😃
The title is really sweet !!!
❤️ Ek Nazar Mein ❤️

So the story has started with radio station and RJ Neil. 😉
I thought does this have any connection with 'First Rain'. 😛
Then had started read thoroughly. 😆😆😆
Ok.. a pure new story. 👍🏼

So RJ Neil has come with his attractive voice and his own love story. 😉
RJ Neil was mesmerized totally by the girl. 😉 😃

Hahaha .. He also had counted the seconds. 😆
OMG !!! how he had described her lips !!! ☺️

😲 She was coming towards him...
Really would she do something !!! 🤓 🤓
And now he had played the song. 🥱

But the song is beautiful like the girl. ⭐️
Archu and her songs selection are always excellent !!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

The starting of the story is really lovely !!!
You are as always marvelous at your work Archu. 👏👏👏

Thanks Shai Di for helping ... 😃
Both of you do a lot for us. 😊

Please, continue 😛

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Happy Valentine's Day to you too Archu!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Thanks😃

The Valentine Week of 2014 was really very special!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Yes, it was 😃

Mrityunjay professed his love for Tara, followed by their second and third wedding!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes, we were in cloud 9 😃

February was full of romance!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Romance was in air😃

Thank you for this wonderful gift on Valentine's Day!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
Welcome 😃 well this Valentine's week made me accidental writer😛

The pics you used are beautiful and sooo romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Yes, Put MriAra in one frame and that pic will show you romance😃

The banner is beautiful!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏
Thanks😳

The starting song is very nice and sets the mood of the story!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Agree😉

The title is sweet and perfect!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏
Thanks😃😃😃

So RJ Neil in his wonderful voice tells his story!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Yes, I imagine VPP on radio 😃😃

Neil was totally mesmerized by the girl!!!!
Yes, he was😊😊

The way he described her in detail so lovingly is just fantastic!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏
Thanks😊. I think he is great observer😉

Someone clearly is in love with her lips and I am sure he finds them kissable!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
hahaha😆 I too feel same😉

She was coming towards him and I wonder if she has noticed him!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
Read next part to know what happened next😉

Would she really do something now??😛 😛 😛 😛
Who knows😛😛 He might get beaten up for looking at girl 😛😛😛

Neil stopped at a cliffhanger keeping his audience on the edge!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
He knows how to keep listeners engaged😆😉

The song is very nice and perfect for Neil and his situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes, it is😊 He is RJ and knows what to play when😊

This part was awesome!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Thanks for loving it so much 😃😃

Your comments are always so long👏👏👏

You write about everything you read here👏👏

Thanks 😃😃

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ronshaan
hI Archana, thanks for PM. Happy valentines week ka beautiful full on romance story padhne k liye I am always ready... Will read and comment 😊😉

I hope this story gives you the joy that you are expecting from this 😊

You readers encourage me to write😃

Thanks for taking time to read it 😃