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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello everyone!!
Hope you all are fine.
Thanks to all those who appreciated my work!!
This part is for all the lovely readers!!
So here is part 11.
Hope you all will like it.

ASYA FF:
"MOHABBAT ZINDAGI HAI!!"
Banner Credits to IMMORTAL LOVE.

Chapter #11

Asad directly went to washroom and splashed water on his face. "Take Zoe from here!! Plz!!" Again the words ranged in his ears. A building set on fire and an injured boy kept flashing in front of his eyes. He held his head as it would burst into pieces. He again began to splash water on his face and this time Zoya's face and her convo. with doctor began to flash in front of his eyes. He stumbled a few steps back in shock as a heart tearing scene flashed in front of his eyes.

"Plz don't beat me!!!" Zoya said. "ASAD!!!" Zoya screamed. Hearing Zoya's scream Asad came running. He pushed the man with all his power the man fell due to the sudden push. Asad came running to Zoya. "R u ok Zoe??" Asad asked coming closer to her. Zoya hugged Asad as she was shivering. A sudden pain in Asad's back and he fell with Zoya. "How dare u kid push me??" The man screamed. With that he raised his hand again to hit Asad with the hunter. "HOW DARE U BEAT ZOE?? I TOLD U I AM DOING HER WORK AS SHE IS HAVING FEVER!!! IF U RAISED ANOTHER HAND ON ZOE I SWEAR I WILL MURDER YOU!!!" Asad yelled with his back towards the man. This enraged the man more and he hitted Asad's back thrice with hunter at which Asad closed his eyes in pain. Zoya fainted while hugging Asad. Asad noticed it when the man went after hitting him. "Zoe?? Zoe?? Zoe wake up!!Plz!!" Asad said. He placed her on the floor and brought water. After sometime Zoya was conscious and seeing this Asad hugged her. As soon Zoya placed her hand on Asad's back Asad flinched in pain. Zoya broke the hug immediately and looked at Asad. "They again beat you because of me. Did not they??" Zoya asked. "No they did not beat me!!" Asad said looking everywhere but not at Zoya. Zoya chuckled at his attempt to hide the truth. "Lying again?? If not then look at my eyes and repeat the sentence.." She said. Asad did not replied that made everything clear to Zoya. "Come with me!!" Zoya said while trying to stand up. "Zoe don't stand.. U r not well.. I will apply the medicine myself.." Zoya stopped as she knew Asad won't let her move.

At night after applying medicine Asad came back and laid with Zoya. "Tomorrow is your 10th birthday Asad!!" Zoya said while looking at the roof. "And our third year away from home..." Asad said sadly. "I miss them!!" Zoya said after sometime. "I also miss them. Ammi, Abbu, Bari Ammi, Bare Abbu.." "I don't miss him!!" Zoya said cutting in between. "Zoe may be Bare Abbu is not at .." "He is the only culprit of Appi's death. If he had listened to me, you and Bha.. I mean Zain nothing would have happened. Nor Aapi and bha.. Zain would have died nor we both would have landed over here in this hell orphanage." Zoya said. "Good Night Zoe!! U need rest!! Sleep now!!" Asad said after sometime. "U should also sleep. U also need rest don't u?? Good Night!!" Replied Zoya giving him a dimpled smile. They both slept not knowing that tomorrow's morning will bring a new change in their life. A change which will change their whole life.


He splashed more water on his face to overcome the pain he was feeling in his head. After calming himself he moved towards Zoya's room. When he entered he saw an unconscious Zoya and doctor treating her. He moved towards her and his unasked question was answered by the doctor. "She was asking for you but you were nowhere to be find so we injected her so that she may rest. Mr. Khan I want to talk to you regarding your wife. Can I have few minutes??" Asad nodded and moved with the doctor. "Mr. Khan as I told earlier that her shoulder is wounded badly. She is not taking proper care of her wounds right now so I can't expect that she will take care of her wounds. I think it is not suitable for her to be discharged. The way she is behaving is not helping either. In hospital it self she removed the bandages many time that her wounds are getting worse. One more thing she is injured badly..." "I know I heard you talking to her a while ago. N you will discharge her tomorrow only." "But Mr.Khan who.." "I will take care of her!! She will at least listen to me!!" He whispered the last part. "Fine. But plz we are telling that she needs complete rest she is disturbed. I guess.." "That is what I want to know!!" Asad said in daze. "Sorry?? What did you said?" "Nothing!! Thankyou!!" He replied."Take care of ur wife Mr. Khan!" Doc. said. "She is not my wife.. But someone who is more closer to my heart! I guess that!" Asad decided to tell him the truth though he did not wanted to. Doctor smiled and left.

Asad called home and informed that he will stay with Zoya at night. Asad came back in the room and looked at Zoya's pale figure. "Khadus kahi ki!! Kitna gussa aata hai isse. Chalti phirti bomb hai... Jab sai aaye hai koi na koi musibat daali hoi hai iss Ms. New york nai. Name Zoya Si.. mean Zoya Farooqi nahi MUSIBAT MAGNET hona chahiye tha... She is driving me CRAZY!!!" Asad thought. He sat near Zoya and looked at Zoya. He again recalled her convo. with the doctor, her behaviour with Gafoor and the flashbacks. "What is their that is disturbing her?? Why she behaves like that with B. Abbu? Kyun mujhe aisa laga kai..." He stopped. "Kai...Yeh meri ZOE!!! Same hatred for B. Abbu, Same dimpled smile, Same pain and Same care..." He said looking at sleeping Zoya. (Imagine this scene yaar!! I imagined Asad saying it with emotions in his eyes and voice and I was like ..." After sometime he continued "Mai kaise pata lagao kai mera iskay sath relation kaisa tha?? Kyunke mujhe toh kuch yaad bhi nahi... Arghhh!!! Mera dimaag bohat hi dash type ka hai jab tak kharab nahi hoga mujhe sahi sai jeene nahi daiga!!" Asad pressed his forehead (his trademark).

Next morning Zoya woke up to see a sleeping Asad with his head on her hand. She smiled and began to move her hands in Asad's hairs. "Kyun bhool gaye tum mujhe Asad?? Sirf mujhe hi kyun?? Lekin NP mai bhi pata laga kar hi raho gi kai how much you remember me. U promised on airport that you won't see my pic or will not contact so that those criminals won't trace my location and I am not in danger but... who asked you to put your life in danger and to forget me?? If that day I would have not returned to call the security I would have never known that you had a memory loss. I miss my old Asad, Asad. The mischievous and happy one not this Mr. Body Builder type who did not even talked to me since I came over here... But how will I know that how much you know about me??" Saying so her eyes fell on Asad's neck where was the locket she gifted to him. "Ok.. now I understand he had not opened the locket.. Allah Miya what's wrong with this Akdu?? Ek bet hi toh thi in which he said he will prove that he is not anxious to open this locket. Ya Allah yeh nahi sudhrega!!! Agar iss Akdu nai locket khula hota na toh isko mera naam or hum dono ki pic nazar ajati lekin nahi!! Why will he do that?? He is the great ASAD AHMAD KHAN!! He won't let himself to lose. I hate you!!" After sometime she said " But I love you more!! After all u r my Bestie and my biggest rival who always lets me win." She chuckled at the end of her sentence. She noticed Asad scrunching his nose. She immediately closed her eyes and acted as if she is asleep (such a big dramebaaz). Asad opened his eyes to notice the white walls of the hospital. Suddenly it triggered to him that Zoya is asleep he quickly got up and looked at a sleeping Zoya. He took a sigh of relief. "Thank God! She is on her bed... Fine." He said after looking at her wounds. Zoya felt happy and satisfied.


After sometime he did not found any movement in Zoya which worried him. He slowly went a little close and kept his hand under her nose. "I am alive not need to check like this!" Came Zoya's voice which made Asad jump backward. "I was not checking whether you are alive or not!!" He lied. "Then what were you doing??" Zoya asked raising her brow. "I was waking you up!!" Asad came up with an excuse. "By checking my breath?" Zoya asked. "How are you??" He changed the topic. Zoya smiled a little. "As I was before!!" She replied. "Means not fine!!" Asad said. "No! I am fine, absolutely!" Zoya replied. "You can't say absolutely!! So plz avoid using that word!!" Asad replied. "When will I be discharged??" Zoya asked after sometime. Asad smirked and decided to play. "After a month." He replied with damn seriousness. "What??" Zoya shouted. Asad tried to stop his laugh on her reaction. "What what??" He replied. "I will be discharged after a month??" Zoya asked with an unbelieveable look on her face. Asad nodded as he knew if he spoke he will fall on the floor laughing. "Don't say that!!" Zoya said with a puppy face. "It is the truth!! Well you can be discharged today only if you promise something?" He said. Zoya nodded telling him to continue. "If you promise me that YOU WILL TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF IN TRUE MEANS!!" He said while looking his eyes with her. Zoya nodded.

"Good girl!! I never knew that you will obey me." Asad said. "Excuse me?? Did I heard obey you?? Are you in your senses??" Zoya replied. "What a weird question?? Of course I am IN my senses." Asad said as if a matter of fact. "I am not obeying you." Zoya said. "How can I forget that?? U don't even obey your mother then to whom do you even obey??" Asad said unconsciously and then regretted as he saw Zoya's face which showed hurt but he was surprised. Zoya was hurt with what Asad said she did not expected that but she then saw Asad's eyes which made her realise that he said that mistakenly and he regrets. She did not showed her hurt and masked her emotions, which surprised Asad. "Zoya..." Asad said. "It is ok..As... Mr. Khan. I understand after all..u...don't...kn..ow me! I understand." It took all her control to not say his name and tell him the truth. Asad looked at her shocked when she addressed him as Mr. KHAN. He expected her to call him Asad like other Family members call him. "What did you call me??" Asad asked not able to understand why she addressed him as MR. KHAN. "What?" Zoya asked. "U called me to Mr. Khan!! I mean I expected.." He stopped. He was not knowing why he wanted to hear his name from her. "It makes me remember someone." Zoya said looking at Asad. Asad looked in Zoya's eyes and saw something different but was unable to identify. Silence prevailed between them. No one wanted to break that silence.

After sometime the nurse entered to change Zoya's dressing. Asad left to home as soon Dilshad and Razia came but returned after changing his clothes. By the evening Zoya was discharged. Zoya stood but was extremely weak and was unable to walk. Asad without any hesitation came and picked her up. He did not looked at anyone not at Zoya even and moved towards the car. Everyone followed them till the car.

Precap:

The teasers!!
In next update Pakka!!!

So how was it??
Hope you liked??
Kindly inform me about your reviews...

Till the next time,
GOOD BYE!!
Edited by Minahil_Hanjra - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res for all lovely readers but special res for special people!!
Though I am angry with you Aanchal but still you are special, Shweta and Soumya!! (Sorry I was just playing with you both!! But not making you april fool!!)

Aanchal come back soon!!
Edited by Minahil_Hanjra - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Minahil_Hanjra


I don't make people april fool!! 😈 I have bad experience with that!!😭
I can't be a good girl and I tried to be that but I was not able to do so!!
I AM NOT UPDATING!!
GOOD NIGHT!!😉


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Posted: 8 years ago

Updated!!😉 on previous page.
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Posted: 8 years ago
It is Asad here!!
Nice part!!
Loved it!!
Asad's talking!!
Zoya's talking!!
So Asad thinks that Zoya and his Zoe are the same!!
Nice!!
Cont. soon!

It is Nayab here!
Lovely part!!
But I was expecting that the teaser would be included in this update!!
But NP!!
Next mai included hai!!
Updt. soon!!😊
Edited by DN_Asya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
UnRes
It was mind blowing
Hope so asad remember her soon
That scene when asad was talking to her while she was asleep and vice versa was emotional
Loved it
Asad joking around about the discharge and Zoya's reaction was funny
Continue soon
Edited by taurean95 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice
A full asyalicous update
The fb was horrific
How did the kids end up in an orphanage
And zoya appi and bro zain die so she had another sis too
Alot of things need to be clear in this story
Asya relation the locket secret
Cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Pretty Amazing Update
I enjoyed reading it

Continue Soon Though :-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update
Asad trying to remember his past.
Asad had a feeling that his Zoe nd zoya are same person.
Flashblack scene was very painful.
So Zoya had a sister too nd she blame gaffur for her death.
Why she call Zain by his name instead of bhai????
Hw Asya end up in an orphanage????
Asya's conversation on their sleeping state was so cute.
Asad teasing Zoya was superb.
So both their pics nd name r embedded in the locket.but he nvr opened it .
But I don't think it's due to the bet .maybe he don't know abt it 😕
Nice update.
Loved it .
Continue soon
Thanks for pm . 🤗
Edited by LuvurselF - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sooo emotional update
The way asad was sayings his thoughts to zoya and zoya talking to asad
Hope when they go home.they have some asyalacious moments
Continue soon

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