Baji and Friends Made Captives

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Baji and Friends Made Captives

Parshu, Ishu, Gotya, and I
were made captives by Dandak the sly eye

He beat and enslaved us
And made us stack logs while he cussed

There were times I feared
He would split one of us into two like a stave
I prayed to God for strength
And loudly cried, 'Har har Mahadev'

I told myself I would starve
before I took the food he threw at me
but I did not starve
For my mother stealthily followed him to our cave
And overcame Dandak the knave
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Is it ur style to write in poem. Nice one again. I think I should come here regularly to read ur poems. It's nice😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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this is nice...👏👏👏

you should write more...😳

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