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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MH2002



Just Okay??😭😭😭
I am giving you an update right??😕😕😕
N just a simple OKAY.😭😭
Ahh you broke my heart!!!🤢
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Just irritating you soumya!!!😆😆😆
Will update soon.😊
For you and Aanchal.😉
Hope that she also gets independence from those boring and irritating EXAMS.😛

🤗 .will be waiting for ur update.now ur exams are also over .so update soon.
nd How were ur exams???
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -loving_life-


I'm eagerly waiting
What yaar! after such an intriguing teaser! How can you expect us to have patience!!!
Update soon my dear santa is updating today right!! 😃😃


HAhahahahaha Sabar ka phal meetha hota hai.
Ur Santa is trying to fulfill your wish.😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvurselF

🤗 .will be waiting for ur update.now ur exams are also over .so update soon.
nd How were ur exams???



Update will be here till midnight!!!
Yup I finally got independence.
All were nice except one and that is PHYSICS🤢
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello everyone!!
Hope you all are fine.
Sorry for the late update but there were some reasons due to which I was unable to update.
Special sorry Anchal, Soumya and Shweta!! Maaf kardo yaar!!
Thanks to all those who liked and complimented on my work.
This part is specially for Anchal, Soumya and Shweta.
Bara wait karaya tum logo ku.
Some changes I made are that when Zoya came back home injured she said to Asad that they are back. Not that he is alive and search my bro. She said nothing regarding her brother. She just kept on saying that they are back.
Bold and Italic parts are flashbacks.
So enough of my blabbering.
So here is part 10.
HAPPY READING.

ASYA FF:
"MOHABBAT ZINDAGI HAI!!"
Banner Credits to Immortal Love.

Chapter #10

After everyone left the room Asad entered the room. "It has been 3 hours since she slept Asad and no one was leaving her alone. Ab sab gaye hai jaldi sai bracelet rakh aur dur (run) yaha sai." He silently went near Zoya and was about to put the bracelet aside but stopped. "Wait Asad agar bracelet yaha rakhi tu when she will wake up she will try to wear it. And still far I know she will wear it at any cost either it hurts her. What should I do?? Bracelet wapis na karo kya?? Nahi I can't break my promise. I should make her wear by myself. But.. But what?? I will make her wear this by myself." With that he took her hand in his and carefully began make her wear the bracelet. "Isn't it weird?? We both are attached to simple piece of jewellery!! You are attached to a bracelet and I am attached with this, My locket and the most surprising thing is that that I don't even who gave this to me.." Asad said. He was caressing his locket with one hand. "So done! Jaldi sai theek ho jao bohat sai questions ka answer lena hai!! Get well soon!!" With that he left. "I will surely get well soon, Asad. Because you said so!!" Zoya said while opening her eyes. She was having a little smile on her face.

"Zoya tum uth gaye?" Dilshad asked as soon she entered the room. Whereas Zoya who was lost in thinking somethinf did not responded. "Zoya??" Dilshad said. Again she did not responded. "Zoya???" This time Dilshad shook her. "Huh!! Ji phophi!!" Zoya asked coming out of her thoughts. "Kya hua Zoya?? Kya soch rahi hu?" Dilshad asked while sitting on a chair near her. Zoya holded her hands and said "Phophi agar ap sai kuch pucho (Ask) tu ab sach sach batai gi??" Zoya asked while looking at her hand. "Zoya batao kya baat hai??" Dilshad asked. Zoya remained silent for 5 minutes and then asked suddenly "Asad sirf mujhe hi kyu bhoola??" She asked. Dilshad looked at her and said "Zoya you need rest!! Abhi aisi koi baat na karo jise tumhe dard or takleef hu!!" "Phophi yeh baat ap bol rahi hai?? Mai itni kamzoor nahi hu!! So tell me.. Or waise bhi mai dard kai sath khelti hu or dard mere sath." Zoya replied. "Zoya take rest abhi tumhe nahi bata sakti. Plz samjho na!!" Dilshad said. "Phophi ap saaf saaf kyu nahi kehti kai Asad mujhe bhool chuka hai." Zoya said. "Zoya tum aisa sooch bhi kaise sakti hu? Asad kai dimaag ku tum yaad nahi hu lekin uske dil ku tum ache sai yaad hu.. Balke ab tu Asad ka dimaag bhi tumhe yaad karne laga hai." "Phophi tell me na?? Aisa kaise hu sakta hai kai Asad ku ap sab tu yaad hu lekin mai nahi?? Jabke bachpan sai bachpan sai mai uske sath rahi hu. Us..us factory ki aag mai, Us ... orphanage mai... Wapis aane pe... har jaga. Tu aisa kaise hu sakta hai kai woh mujhe bhool gaya hu??" She shivered when she talked about the factory and orphanage and Dilshad felt it. "Zoya u know tumhare aane sai pehle Asad nai kaha tha kai uski Zoe ku help chahiye.. He said kai Zoe is in pain.. Asad ku tum yaad hu Zoya lekin.." "Sirf behoshi mai!! Hosh mai nahi!! I got my answer!!!" Zoya said. "Zoya tumhe chako kisne mara??" Dilshad asked after sometime. Dilshad felt Zoya body stiffened. "Ammi kaha hai phophi??" Zoya asked looking here and there ignoring Dilshad's question. Dilshad sighed as she understood that Zoya is not going to discuss anything right now. "Pata nahi!! Thori dair pehle tu yahi thi. I guess doctor kai pass hai." She replied.

The door opened and Razia along with Asad entered. Zoya smiled a bit and saw Asad feeling awkward. "Asad tum office nahi gaye??" Dilshad asked as she noticed. "Woh ammi actually... woh.. office ... Ammi ap logo ku kisi cheez ki zaroorat par sakti hai and I don't trust Ayaan regarding that so mai office nahi gaya." Asad came up with the best excuse he can. Dilshad smiled at him and turned towards Zoya. "Fruits??" Zoya nodded. Razia who was silently watching Zoya, who was lying with closed eyes, noticed the bracelet. She smiled after looking at Asad who was pouring water for himself. "Zoya tumhari bracelet??" Razia asked making Asad cough. Zoya did not replied. "Zoya?" She again did not replied. "Zoya??" This time Dilshad said. Razia came near her and shook her.

"Zoya??" She patted her face. Zoya's hand slipped and fell on the side of the bed. "Doctor!!" Razia shouted. Asad came near Zoya and said softly "Zoya??" She was not responding Asad saw her pulse going abnormal. "DOCTOR!!" This time Asad shouted this much high that the whole hospital could hear.

Asad was moving here and there out of the room. The doctor asked all of them to leave the room so that is why they were outside. "I can't take this anymore!!" Asad said. "I told you that don't stress yourself. Because of you I lied to your family by not telling them that how much wounds you are having. Your were semi conscious when you asked me to not inform your family. I did it as I understood that it is a serious matter. There is a cut on your head as if someone hitted you. Your shoulder is injured so badly. The knife was stabbed so powerfully. And at last your hands there were tiny glass pieces. Look Ms. Farooqi I know you don't want to give your family tension but don't stress yourself. And let me tell you if there will be a problem in future then you can't stop me from calling police because it is a POLICE CASE." This is what Asad heard from doctor when he entered the room. He was not able to react. He was angry, in pain, sad and confused. "Doctor!! Will you kindly discharge me or not?? I will take care of myself." Zoya said unaware of the fact that Asad is listening to her. "Ms. Farooqi right now I said that there are.." "Allah Miya what's wrong with you doctor?? I will recover better in MY MOTHER'S HOUSE than in hospital." Zoya said. Asad was not shocked this time when he heard Zoya saying her mother's house rather than saying HER HOME. "You will be discharged tomorrow." Doctor said. The doctor was impressed by this girl. He kept his hand on her head and said "Not as a doctor but being a father I can say that you are the best daughter a father can get." A sudden pain in Zoya eyes was seen by Asad but Zoya masked it hurriedly and replied "MY FATHER IS NO MORE.. for me" She said the last part in a whisper.Asad looked at Zoya with widened eyes. He knew that there is some tension between her and Gaffur but never knew that Zoya considered him to be dead. The doctor was about to turn when Zoya said "Calling yourself a father is not enough you have to become a father which is so hard. And FATHER itself is a very big word. These six words are proof of a very big responsibility." The doctor turned towards Zoya and she gave him a tiny smile. Asad left the room and within a second the doctor also came out. He informed everyone that she is fine just a little weakness. Asad gave the doctor a look of "IS IT THE TRUTH??".
After sometime when everyone went inside Asad left the hospital.

Police Case!!!!
Stabbed!!!!
Father!!!
My father is no more!!
My mother's house!!
Lie's
Who stabbed you appi??

The words kept ringing in Asad's mind. "Why she wants to hide all this from her parents? Who stabbed her?? Why she said that her father is no more?? It is a white lie isn't it? Why she said my MOTHER's HOUSE? Why didn't she referred that house as hers? Allah should I try to know the whole truth??" Asad pressed his forehead. He parked the car and went inside. He was about to enter when he turned around as he felt someone watching him. He looked here and there but there was no one. He shook his head sighing and went inside. A person came out from behind and said "Sorry boss but we were wrong that girl is someone else not Zoya Siddiqi. Yes boss!! Boss us larki ku maine chaku mara tha because I thought she heard my conversation with you. But boss iska matlab yeh hai kai Zoya Siddiqi wapis hi nahi aaye. Boss us larki ka naam ZOYA FAROOQI hai. Ji boss!! Nahi boss Asad kai sath ab tak koi larki nazar aye. Theek hai boss. Mujhe jaise hi Zoya Siddiqi mili mai usse utha loonga. Rakhta hu boss!!" With that the person left thinking that no one saw him but alas he was wrong.

Humeira who was walking in the garden came back when she saw Asad coming and she heard the man's conversation. She was having tears in her eyes. "Koi Aapi ke peeche para hai!! Lekin kyun?? Aapi ku batana hai. Hospital!!" She thought. She left for hospital.

Zoya was lying in a half sitting position. Her eyes were closed. She was remembering something it seemed. "Kyu hua aisa?? Kyu??" She said with eyes still closed.

Everything was set on fire. A girl who might be of 6 years was crying while holding a boy of 10 years in her lap. "Ap ka khoon nikal raha hai. BHAI plz ap apna blood band karo na. Ap ku dard horaha hai. Plz Bhai.." Zoya cried. "Zoe..(hiccup) tu meri strong behan hai na...(hiccup) tu Asad kai sath nikal (hiccup) yaha sai.. Aur rona.. (hiccup) band kar...(hiccup) mujhe tumhari aankho mai aansoo (hiccup) ache nahi lagte..(hiccup) Baat sun (hiccup) wada..(hiccup) kar ke tu..(hiccup) kabhi nahi roye (hiccup) gi.. (hiccup) tu roye gi na..(hiccup) tu mujhe dard..(hiccup) hoga. Aik aur waada kar...(hiccup) tu AAPI kai murderers ku...(hiccup) punishment.. (hiccup) zaroor.." "Bhai chup kar jao na hum sath mai punishment dainge.. Ap ku dard hu raha hai.. plz."

"Zoe.." Zoya heard Asad saying. "Asad dekho na bhaijaan ku pain ho raha hai. Kuch karo na plzz..Aapi ku.. ku.. Aapi ku.. unho.. nai.. mard..aala.." Zoya said while crying. "Asad Zoe ku lu...(hiccup) aur bhaag jao. Plz... (hiccup) dekho tumne promise (hiccup) kiya tha meri...(hiccup) birthday par kai ..(hiccup) tum meri aik wish puri..(hiccup) karoge. Tu meri wish (hiccup) yeh hai kai tum Zoe (hiccup) ku safe and secure rakho...(hiccup) gai. Jao plz. Zoe plz... (hiccup) Apne bhai ki aik...(hiccup) baat tumaan ley." Zain said. "Har tarf aag lagi hai..." Asad said with tears rolling down his cheeks. "Asad.. us taraf..." Zain said pointing towards the direction. Asad grabbed Zoya's hand and ran towards the direction. Zoya was still crying and Asad was dragging her.

"Aapi!!" Humeira voice brought Zoya out of her thoughts. Zoya opened her eyes and saw a scared and crying Humeira. "Humi? Kya hua??" Zoya was hugged fiercely by Humeira. "Humi.. bache rona band karna.. Kya hua hai? Humi?" Zoya tried to calm her. She kept on saying sweet words in her ears to calm her. Zoya felt wetness on her shoulder and saw blood. Humeira was holding Zoya so tight that she began to bleed. After a while she felt Humeira becoming calm. Humeira broke the hug. "Aapi he wants to kill you!!" She cried. She felt Zoya retrieving her hands and looked up. She could see shock apparent on Zoya's face. "Who Humi??" Zoya asked to confirm. Humeira told everything while crying. "Aapi woh kun..." Before Humeira could continue she saw Zoya red. "Ammi ku bulao or ab.. apne abbu ku." She said. "Aapi ap rest kariye baad.." Humeira stopped as Zoya removed her drip in full anger and got down from the bed. She moved towards the door that is when Humeira noticed blood on her shoulder. "Aapi.. aapi stop you are bleeding!! Khuda ka wasta aapi!! Stop!!" Humeira shouted.

Zoya went out of the room with a frantic Humeira following her. Zoya was still moving paying no heed to Humeira's plead. She was a little far from the room when ASAD grabbed her arm and pulled her towards him. "Where are you going?" He asked.

Asad came out to take his phone from the car when he saw Humeira going somewhere. He called her but all went to deaf ears. He followed her and here he was in the hospital. "That is none of your problem. Leave me." Zoya said. She did not wanted Asad to know anything as it could affect his health. She tried to free herself from his grip but his grip was strong and she was already weak. She was in air the next second. Asad knew that talking with Zoya is not all beneficial so he just picked her up. "Allah Miya what's wrong with you?? Leave me!!" "NEVER!!" Asad said while looking at her. Their eyelock (Mitwa Moment.) "Humeira call the doctor!!" He told Humeira. "Put me down this instant!!" Zoya said. Asad gave her an unbelievable look. "Ok fine. But call ammi, phuphi and.. Mr. Gaffur." Zoya looked away as she saw Asad staring at her. "How could you.. FINE. I will call them." Asad was still not able to understand Zoya.

Asad putted her on bed. He was not able to see her blood. "Take her Asad.. Zoe Jao na.. plz... Dekho tumne promise kiya tha meri birthday par... Asad bhaijaan ka khoon nikal raha hai kuch karo na plz." He stumbled a few steps back. He shook his head. He looked at Zoya's blood and again the same thing happened. He quickly took his napkin and tied it on her hand. He again saw the same thing when he saw Zoya's shoulder bleeding. Asad's view began to blur he held his head in between his hand but the again and again he saw the same scene. Zoya who was watching Asad became tensed. "Are you ok?" She asked in concern. Asad did not responded as he could not hear anything else other than those voices. Zoya went near Asad but before she could do anything Asad left.

For precap move to the next page!!
Edited by MH2002 - 8 years ago
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So here is the
Precap:

"How dare you take it?? That too without my permission??" Asad said to Zoya.

"I just took it because it was lying on the floor. Why are you over reacting??" Zoya said.

"Who gave you permission to take it??" Asad asked calmly yet anger could be easily identified in his voice. He said while coming closer to Zoya. Zoya was moving back towards the wall. "Allah Miya yeh tu plan ulta (opposite) par raha hai.. Asad seriously does not remember who gave it to him??" Zoya thought.

"Oh plz!!! I did not took your life. That you are reacting this way." Zoya replied finding her voice. She was nervous by seeing in Asad's eyes. She knew that Asad anger was a really dangerous thing.

"RETURN. IT. BACK. RIGHT. NOW." Asad asked in a low voice.

"I am not going to. Do whatever you want.." Zoya said. Her back touched the wall. She tried to go from there but Asad kept his hand on the wall and blocked her way. She tried to move to other side but Asad did the same.

"DON'T MESS WITH ME." Asad said.

"I am not going to return it. I found it so it is mine. You can buy a new one." Zoya said.

"I SAID GIVE IT BACK TO ME. THIS INSTANT." He said again calming himself.

"Ok. You want it. Fine." "Asad mujhe maaf kardena for doing this. But I have to do this. Otherwise I will not be able to help you." With that thought she threw the locket on the floor. "Now you can it."

Asad immediately picked the locket and turned towards Zoya. He glared at her angrily. "HOW DARE YOU DO THAT??" He asked.

"Stop it! It is just a lock.." She was stopped by Asad's shout.

"IT IS NOT A SIMPLE LOCKET. YEH MERI ZOE KA DIYA HUA GIFT HAI. AUR HAA YEH MERI ZINDAGI HAI. DON'T. YOU. EVEN. DARE. TO. TOUCH. IT. AGAIN." With that he left angrily while wearing the locket.

Zoya instead on being sad began to scream in happiness. "Yippeee!!!!! Mission successful!! He remembers me!!! Yippeee!!! YOHOOO!!"
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Special Res. for Anchal, Soumya and Shweta.
Till the next time GOOD BYE.
Edited by MH2002 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res for Appu , Shwetu di , Dillu di ,Anchal nd for all readers 😳
Edited by LuvurselF - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
😳
Unres
Lovely banner so beautiful!!!
Finally an update from u
Superb maina
Loved it
I'm liking this confused Asad nd brave Zoya.
Bracelet scene was so nice .
Zoya was awake at that time nd touched by asad's concern.
Dilshad - Zoya convo was nice
Can't understand why they are hiding it (ML ) from her .now she too know the truth.
Zoya's conversation with doctor was very confusing
She's admitted in a very serious condition nd he support her nd hide it from her family.
Asad overhear their conversation
Why did Zoya hate gaffur this much ??
Someone is following asad nd humeira saw it.
Flashback is beautifully described
So as expected zain is zoya's brother
He died in the fire accident .
Asad got some glimpse of his nd zain convo
What abt orphanage??? Is zain nd Zoya r orphans n ??
So much suspense in one story 😕
I can't handle this much mysteries so try to reveal few from it.
Continue soon .
Can't wait to read more.
Thanks for pm.
And a big hug for the res nd no need for sorry 🤗
Next update jaldi dena nahi toh US akar marungi. 😉
Edited by LuvurselF - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
unresed
Finally got an update🥳

I'm soo happy!!!😃🤗

awesome update mania⭐️

asad gave her bracelet back, god! when he will realize that they are attached to that jewellery because they gifted it to each other😭

her conversation with dilshad was very heart breaking poor zoya shes soo sad that asad doesnt remember her but also very strong hats off to her👏

What an excuse to stay in hospital...but he was partially right leaving it in ayaan head would have been foolish😆
asad choking water after hearing about braclet was hilarious 👏

Zoya's coversation with doctor very overwhelming actually fathers like gaffur should understand that they are not needed in their childs life just for middle name but they should stand by them as an savior, as an guardian, as an friend

asad is confused now but ssly why is she hidding her injuries?😲

i think zain is alive?I would be the happiest if he is alive😃

Humi is so worried for zoya i just loved their bond, i so wished that in show also they show their bond just like asad and ayaan😭😭

loved the way he lifted her hayee hayyee☺️

he is sort of remembering things the flasback of zains word to him is a hope!!

and as i said earlier precap is just a wow!!!⭐️

eagerly waiting for that scene issliye plsss update soon

as it was an emergency don't be soo sorry and thank you so much for the special res it was worth a wait

loved it so much update soon I'm so desperate for next chapter

Thank you Somu for the res🤗
Edited by -loving_life- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -loving_life-

Well I won't get rid of it so easily
But I'm happy you're free and will be updating by midnight
I will read it in my late night study break 😃


Still Santa always fulfill others wish.😆😆
So Santa will pray for you.😆
Yup I am FREE!!!😃😃
I am so HAPPY!!🥳
So that is why I am updating today.😊
Yup you can read it!!!😊
As a spoiler or as a treat.😉😉
Ur wish.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

teaser so funny...

she made him angry


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