FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 16

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Banner credit to my dearest darling Kalgi. Darling.. it takes me 10k words to convey my mind but it takes you just one picture to say it all! Love you for matching my craziness, for fitting my imagination into one frame!!


Avika.. How blessed am I to receive this kind of reciprocation!! Thank you so much dear... 🤗


And here comes one more from pagal-est PBD lover! Payalia... you rock girl...!!🤗




Hemakeerti OSes - Compiled


PBD INDEX


Prologue

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

Chapter 9

Chapter 10

Chapter 11

Chapter 12

Chapter 13

Chapter 14

Chapter 15


Chapter 35

Chapter 36 - part1

Chapter 36 - part 2


Chapter 37

Chapter 38

Chapter 39

Chapter 40


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Chapter 41 Teaser

~~~~Whooosh (uprush of wave)~~~~

ee velalo neevu ... a ha ha hmmm mmm

~~~~ (silent backwash)~~~~

"Each time a wave backwashes ..." His girl suddenly spoke, glancing at the vast expanse ahead and anchoring toes into the skittering sand. "I feel the slipping sand wants me too to join its sojourn to sea..."

Buzz... Buzz...


"In that case," he turned her to him, held her by waist and docked her onto his toes.

~~~~Whooosh (uprush of wave)~~~~

"With this..." she smiled at their bracing bodies, "...what are you trying to convey mister?"

~~~~ (silent backwash)~~~~

"I'm trying to say the Sea ..." His toes curled, firmly rooting into slipping sand. "...that I won't let him have you."


Buzz... Buzz...

"Uh huh?" she quirked a teasing brow. "How long can you hold me this way?"

"As long as I've feet."

"Very heroic!!" Chuckling, she ruffled his hair but slowly her smiles waned. "What if the sea got angry with my denial and sends a gigantic wave for me?"

"Then..." He answered without second thought. "... it gets both of us."

She smiled again... a heart filled smile and stepped out of his holding. Her smiles turning mysterious, she folded arms on her back and began retreating. "And you think I'll let you do so." She cheerfully nodded in no, pointing a finger to something behind her. "Its for me... only for me. I'll not let it have you."

Mystified, he walked ahead to get hold of his girl and when he realized he was going nowhere, he looked down startled - the pit of sand engulfed HIS FEET.

Edited by hemakeerti - 8 years ago
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Congratulation for the new thread :)
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Hi Jahnu... 🤗...good to see u back..
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😲

🥳
My dearest author🤗
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Heeeyyy!!!!🥳CONGRATS JHANU...
LONG LIVE JHANU AND HER APPETITE FOR WRITING...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Chapter 41 Teaser


~~~~Whooosh (uprush of wave)~~~~

ee velalo neevu ... a ha ha hmmm mmm

~~~~ (silent backwash)~~~~

"Each time a wave backwashes ..." His girl suddenly spoke, glancing at the vast expanse ahead and anchoring toes into the skittering sand. "I feel the slipping sand wants me too to join its sojourn to sea..."

Buzz... Buzz...

"In that case," he turned her to him, held her by waist and docked her onto his toes.

~~~~Whooosh (uprush of wave)~~~~

"With this..." she smiled at their bracing bodies, "...what are you trying to convey mister?"

~~~~ (silent backwash)~~~~

"I'm trying to say the Sea ..." His toes curled, firmly rooting into slipping sand. "...that I won't let him have you."

Buzz... Buzz...

"Uh huh?" she quirked a teasing brow. "How long can you hold me this way?"

"As long as I've feet."

"Very heroic!!" Chuckling, she ruffled his hair but slowly her smiles waned. "What if the sea got angry with my denial and sends a gigantic wave for me?"

"Then..." He answered without second thought. "... it gets both of us."

She smiled again... a heart filled smile and stepped out of his holding. Her smiles turning mysterious, she folded arms on her back and began retreating. "And you think I'll let you do so." She cheerfully nodded in no, pointing a finger to something behind her. "Its for me... only for me. I'll not let it have you."

Mystified, he walked ahead to get hold of his girl and when he realized he was going nowhere, he looked down startled - the pit of sand engulfed his feet.



what is it?? a night out before Jalal's birthday like Jo wants , or Jo's dream of losing one more beloved person on day of his birthday??😕

update soon, Jahnu...its rather difficult to wait for more time after reading such tzr...😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hola Girls...

IF is giving me hard time to type. Am I the only one facing it?

I typed multiple times to say hello to u all and as soon as I press backspsace to correct some typo window keeps going back... 🤔
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Hola Girls...

IF is giving me hard time to type. Am I the only one facing it?

I typed multiple times to say hello to u all and as soon as I press backspsace to correct some typo window keeps going back... 🤔



no...it happens sometimes...log in again...it may help
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Shifted to different browser and things seem to be working fine... phew!!
Hello futus...😊

Payalia... 🤗 Are you still single or did I miss your wedding invitation in this hibernation period? 😆

Hola Deeks... 🤗Hope you now believe I truly resumed writing 😉

Selvi... 🤗 Oh, you too got the news of my LOST APPETITE? Of course, didn't I just announce it at BBC of IF (HBAS thread). 😉

Harshu... 🤗 ever active girl... I'm secretly checking out your retro threads on and off 😉

Hello others... and thanks for not giving up the hope of seeing a new thread... welcome home 🤗


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