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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
My first reaction on seeing a new thread...

Second reaction

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Chapter 41 Teaser

~~~~Whooosh (uprush of wave)~~~~

ee velalo neevu ... a ha ha hmmm mmm

(The longest mystery 😲!!! It's going to be solved?)

~~~~ (silent backwash)~~~~

"Each time a wave backwashes ..." His girl suddenly spoke, glancing at the vast expanse ahead and anchoring toes into the skittering sand. "I feel the slipping sand wants me too to join its sojourn to sea..."

Buzz... Buzz...

What is the buzz buzz? 🤔His mobile phone?

"In that case," he turned her to him, held her by waist and docked her onto his toes.

☺️

~~~~Whooosh (uprush of wave)~~~~

"With this..." she smiled at their bracing bodies, "...what are you trying to convey mister?"

☺️

~~~~ (silent backwash)~~~~

"I'm trying to say the Sea ..." His toes curled, firmly rooting into slipping sand. "...that I won't let him have you."


Buzz... Buzz...

(Wait this buzz buzz is an alarm... Jo is dreaming... or Ja is... that he's firmly stuck in one place, while he's helpless to stop the sea from taking Jo)

"How long can you hold me this way? What if the sea got angry with my denial and sends a gigantic wave for me?"

"Then..." He answered without second thought. "... it gets both of us."

"And you think I'll let you do so." She cheerfully nodded in no, pointing a finger to something behind her. "Its for me... only for me. I'll not let it have you."

Mystified, he walked ahead to get hold of his girl and when he realized he was going nowhere, he looked down startled - the pit of sand engulfed HIS FEET.

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha



what is it?? a night out before Jalal's birthday like Jo wants , or Jo's dream of loving one more beloved person on day of his birthday??😕

update soon, Jahnu...its rather difficult to wait for more time after reading such tzr...😉


What is it??? You asking me? Wasn't it obvious as to what it is 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lashy... stop giving reactions here. Go and write Chapter 28... The Nation wants to know Heera's REACTION 😆
Edited by hemakeerti - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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omg! when will you update sissy?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Special message to Muskan... Thanks for your continuous update morcha darling... I love you for that but I'll love you more if you update SAGA quicker 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Lashy... stop giving reactions here. Go and write Chapter 28... The Nation wants to know Heera's REACTION 😆

🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: savindi.db

omg! when will you update sissy?

Hi beautiful penguin.. give me 10 days time 🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Shifted to different browser and things seem to be working fine... phew!!

Hello futus...😊

Payalia... 🤗 Are you still single or did I miss your wedding invitation in this hibernation period? 😆

>>😲...🤣
Yes yes I am still single, by god's grace😆



Hello others... and thanks for not giving up the hope of seeing a new thread... welcome home 🤗
>> Welcome home Gives that soothing feeling that I felt when I read,"welcome home, jo"

I didn't post update soon requests on thread but that doesn't mean I was not waiting for update. I was missing PBD but I understand sometimes we just don't feel like writing. And now when you're here, I am super happy🤗


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Posted: 8 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Hi beautiful penguin.. give me 10 days time🤗


aww how can i deny such a sweetness...okay we'll wait sissy🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Lashy... stop giving reactions here. Go and write Chapter 28... The Nation wants to know Heera's REACTION 😆


Mere Do Anmol Ratan!❤️
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