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Posted: 8 years ago
~ The Undoing~
Chapter-6


And i saw a girl, same age as mine. she has blond hair, piercing on her eyebrows and lips. Some tattoos on her arms. The lady singled her daughter towards us. The lady introduced her to us. She said her daughter's name is Emma. Means i heard the name correct. Anyways the girl seemed total bad ass type. You know "I take no bullshit type". She smiled seeing us. But from her expression i know , Me and her never gonna work. She said Hi to me and i replied. Oh god!! this is gonna be awkward.

I saw my mother very excited with my interaction. I smiled again at her awkwardly. My mother and hers laughed at our interaction. She said that now days children are worst in inter-personal skill. I saw Emma's mother nodding at my mother's remark. My mother further suggested us to shake our hand and hug. Oh God!! Now it's getting more and more awkward. I faced her and saw her in the same dilemma as I was. I forwarded my hand for a formal handshake. She saw me towards my hand and hesitantly moved her in order to meet mine for a formal hand shake. Truly, I want to get over with it. I saw her hand nearing mine. Our Hand's touched. Suddenly I felt a sudden gush of power. I saw towards her . Oh god!! She is feeling that too. Suddenly something hit us both. Everything around us suddenly became black. No more I see my and her mother. I started feeling my head heavy. What's happening. Argh.

Oh god!! My head. Its paining a lot. What has happened I am not able to understand. I tried to move my hand towards my head. But I was not able to. Where is Emma. I Tired to move my head but alas again all my attempt failed. I was not able to move my head also. Suddenly tears started coming out of my eyes. I was scared. What was happening I am not able to understand. Why my hold body felt paralysed . Where is my Mom. My heartbeat started increasing. I moved my eyes to my left trying to evaluate my surrounding. I saw i was standing somewhere. There was some type of glass in front of me. Beside me was total darkness. Nothing was there. I moved my eyes towards my right I saw Emma. I tired calling her. But her body was totally rigid. There was no moment in her body. Tears were continuously following from my eyes. I can see her trapped in some type of glass wall. Same way like I was. I moved my eyes to see what's in front of me and I was shocked to see..

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Edited by angelwords - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update geet was feeling awkward meeting her neighbors daughter Emma even she wasn't interested but thanks to their mom they were literally forced to shake and when they did they saw a vision BV a really scary one where both are trapped in a glass cage seeing ppl laughing but all of a sudden the woman are crying running in dark woods seems it's a part of the past did something bad happened in the village both having same vision
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab intriguing update! well written! Geet n Emma have a vision! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update..
Wht happening to Geet after touching Emma...why those glasses around them
Waiting for next update

Thnx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
scary update
curious about to know further
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Posted: 8 years ago


I read the update but at the end I became upset as you stated that you have added another paragraph in your website...

what is this confusion yaar...
either you update here or there...it will be easier to read at one place...
something here something here makes me confuse...

my suggestion is either you update here full update or in your blog...
then I will read it...

thanx,...
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Posted: 8 years ago
That was awkward :|
Both were forced to handshake lol
But what was that!!! :O
Both of them were seeing this!! I mean feeling this!! :/
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Posted: 8 years ago
just read ur story

awesome

very different!

cont soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting update..oh what happened to geet as soon as both emma and geet shake hands geet in different zone..some wried vision even emma felt something
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Posted: 8 years ago
Scary update..
Geet after touching Emma
Feeling glasses around them..
Waiting for next update..

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