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Sowmiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Nice update dear

Liked it!!

Geet was self confused with the happenings around her

She could not think straight and mist was filled in her mind regarding the turn of events and the place's ambience too were weird

Geet thought to call an end to her thoughts and gave thyself a stop !!

Geet made her way to cosy sleep inorder to stop her thoughts travelling in various unpleasant dimensions

Loved the way Geet narrated her mother's trait and indeed she is a good host to raise a toast and to threw a warm welcome to the neighborhood with her arms open

Geet's mom as expected by geet wants her to share a friendly camaraderie with the new found neighbors daughter !!

😊

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Thanks for the pm dear

Will be waiting for the next update😊

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

hi thanks 4 da pm n splendid update! well written! Geet in a new place! her mom goes 2 meet the neighbours n Geet uninterested! update soon

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CRAZYCUTEE

@CRAZYCUTEE

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

superb updates

geet is not happy shifting new place

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

So geet decided to shrug it off :v

Geets mother is so enthusiastic about everything

N geet the total opposite :P

New neighbor

Any chance of maan? ;)

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fantesy

@fantesy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#156

superb update ... geet is feeling something strange in village ... geet mother took her to meet new neighbours and so excited about it ..

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 8 years ago

#157

WOW!! interesting update...So , Geet was forced by her mom to accompany their neighbour's house and now she was about to meet Emma , the neighbour's daughter...What would be her equation with Emma? Will they be friends or something unpredictable waiting for us...???

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 8 years ago

#158

very intersting...

par abhi bhi Maan nahi aaya...

new neighbors came in next house and Geet with her mother went there to meet them and they have same age daughter as Geet named Emma...

Geet is behaving same as children now a days ...they complain in anything their parents do as they think that they know and understand and matured more than their parents...they get bored if they don't find environment according to their choice...they repell...

thanx for pm...

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CrazyMaaneetFan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#159

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