Inseprable Soul's - shraman os

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I am back with an angsty and emotional piece and this time i advise you to sit with a tissue box please it contains some stuff that can emotionally disturb you

This starts after their marriage when suman leaves the malhotra mansion and Ramnath tells the truth to shravan about his mother

"Sumo bhaiya kahi mil nahi rahe h yar" she heard a baffled pushkar on phone

"Kyu achanak kya hua?"

"Vo. ...sumo vo..."

"Saf saf bol pushkar" a worried sumo asked

"Bade papa ka sach bhaiya k saamne a gya h or vo achanak se ghar se bina kisi ko kuch bole chale gaye h"

"Tu chinta mat kar pushkar mujhe pata h vo kaha hoga...me usko le k ati hu"

She frantically drives towards the hill she knew he will be on

"Shravan. ..mujhe pata tha tum yahi hoge " she saw a shravansitting there in a completely devastated state

"Kitne ache se jaanti ho na tum mujhe sumo...to batao esa kyu hua mere saath" he said in a completely broken voice

"Shravan. ...hosh me aao. ...shravan come back to your senses please" she shaked him vigorously holding him from his shoulder

"Tum a gyi sumo mujhe pata tha tum zaroor aogi...marne se pehle ek akhri baar tumko dekhna chahta tha"

"Faltu baat mat karo" and she slapped him hard

"Sumo papa...papa did this sumo...esa kese kar sakte h vo...vo to jaante the na ki main ma se kitna pyaar karta hu...unhe kitna miss karta hu...unke bina kuch nahi kar pata fir bhi unhone esa kiya itne saal tak maa ko or to or tumhe bhi mujhse door rakha ye jante hue ki tumhare bina me pal pal mar raha hu...ma k pyaar ke liye tadap raha hu...kya unhe mujh pe bilkul bhi daya nahi ayi sumo?...kya itna bura hu me?"

"Sshh shh shravan tum bilkul bure nahi ho...tum to itne ache ho ki har maa-baap tumhaare jesa beta chahte h or har ek ladki tumhaare jesa pyaar karne vala life partner" she said pulling him close

"Huh! Tabhi to sab mujhe chod k chale jaate h"

"Koi kahi nahi gaya shravan"

"Acha...pehle maa chali gayi or fir tum ...pata h tumhe kitna tadpa hu me pyaar k liye...pehle maa k or fir tumhaare...pata h tumko jab me kisi maa ko apne bete k liye kuch karte dekhta tha ya kisi couple ko sath me dekhta tha ya kisi family ko saath me dekhta tha na mera dil toot jata tha...khud ko sawal karta tha ki esa kya gunah ho gaya mujhse...esa kya kar diya mene jo mera pariwar mujh se cheen liya"

"Shravan meri baat suno dekho tumhaara parivaar to yahi h tumhaare paas lekin mera to socho kon tha mere pas sirf nanu ma papa ko bhagwaan ne cheen liya or tumko mene apni nadaaniyo ki vajah se kho diya...tumhe pata h jab bhi me dosto ko saath me dekhti thi na tumhe itna yaad karti h apne room me jake tumhaari photo se baat karti h or tumhe miss karke itna roti thi...lekin mujhe pura vishwas the ki tum ek din zaroor vapis aoge or us din sab theek ho jaega...hum vapis pehle ki tarah ho jaenge"

"Kese thik hoga sabkuch sumo sabkuch itna bigad gaya h...humari rishto me itni darare aa gayi h jise bharte bharte ab shayad puri zindagi nikal jaegi"

"Shravan mene itne saal akele nikal diye kyuki mere paas zinda rehne ki ek wajeh thi or vo the tum or ek ummeed thi ki ek din tum vapis a jaoge or sab thik ho jaega"

"Mere zinda rehne ka bhi to yehi karan tha na sumo...kitni koshish ki tumse nafrat karne ki par har baar tumse pyaar karne ka koi karan mil jata tha"

"To aj agar tum haar gaye na shravan to hum dono mar jaenge kyuki apne shravan k bina ye sumo kya karegi...i promise me sab kuch thik kar dungi...hum dono mil k sab thik kar denge na shravan"

"Par sumo mere pas ek toote hue dil k alawa ab kuch nahi h...aansu bhi nahi...ye dekho ab to ye aankhein bhi nahi rooti "

"Mere pas bhi sirf ek toota hua dil hi to h na shravan do toote hue dil ek doosre ka sahara ban sakte h or ek doosre ki jeene ki vajah bhi shravan...tumhaari zindagi tumhaare liye na sahi mere liye bohot zaroori h...please mujhse mere jeene ki vajah mat cheeno...or agar jaana hi h to mujhe bhi sath le chalo me nahi jee paungi tumhaare bina"

Mere yaara tere hum agar paenge
Humein Teri h kasam hum sawar jaengeX2
Do ye saugaat tumto zamaane ki humX2har khushi se mukar jaengeHum mar jaengeHooo
Hum mar jaenge

"Itna yakeen kyu h sumo ki sab kuch thik ho jaega ...hum thik ho jaenge"

"Kyuki humaare beech pyaar h...or jaha pyaar hota h na shravan vahan ummeed bhi hoti h"

Tere kaandhe se hi lag kar yara beete umar saari
Socho kesi hogi kismat hua yun to fir humari
Saare aansu to ho tere
or aankhein ho humari
Tere dard humein
Jo mile pyaar meX2
Hum khushi se yun bhar jaenge
Hum mar jaenge
Hooo
hum mar jaenge

"Abhi bhi pyaar karti ho mujhse...mene itna bura kiya h tumhaare saath sumo"

"Pehli baat jab tak is jism me jaan rahegi is dil me tumhaare liye pyaar rahega or dusri galti to mene bhi ki thi na bachpan me...kya tumne mujhse pyaar karna band kar diya tha shravan"

"Vo to meri zindagi k akhri din tak nahi hoga sumo"

"To fir jab pyaar h to kya dikkat h shravan"

"Dikkat ye h ki mujhme ab or dard sehne ki taqaat nahi bachi h sumo...ab agar or kuch bura hua to mein nahi jee paunga or vo isse me zyaada dardnaak maut hogi usse acha to me abhi..."

"Shh iske aage kuch nahi bolna...marna h na tumhe to chalo ...Are chalo na saath me marte h ye zindagi ka kissa hi khatam kar dete h"

"Nahi...nahi sumo me tumhe marte hue. ...nahi bilkul nahi"

"Kyu kya hua...hua na dard? Laga na bura?...to kya din sirf tumhaare paas h zara ye socho tum mere saamne itne der se marne ki baatein kar rahe ho mere upper kya beet rahi hogi"

He pulls her for a tight hug

"Sorry sumo ...i am really sorry...chalo jeete h...dikha dete h is duniya ko ki 2 toote hue dil bhi khushi se jee sakte h ek doosre ki zindagi me khushiya bhar sakte h"

Chaahe dukh ho chaahe sukh ho
Dil ne tujhko hi pukaara
Tune hum ko h banaya
Tune humko h sawara
Jaahaan ko to rab ka h
Humein tera h sahara

"Sumo i love you...kya tum zindaagi bhar is toote hue shravan k saath reh paogi?" He asks getting on his knees

"Or koi option h kya mere paas ab is pyaare se shravan se pyaar hua h to rehna hi padega" she says pulling him down and hugging him...he sat down and pulled her in his lap

"Ab jab pyaar kiya h to bhugto" he says coming close and leaning towards her lips"

"SHRAVAN..."

"Please sumo" he said with so much pain and longing on his voice that she could not even think of stopping him

And their lips met they poured all their longing and love in it

Bas tera saath ho
chaahe jo baat ho
Tere kehne se kar jaenge
Hum mar jaenge

"Ab to mein mar bhi jau to koi gum nahi"

"Abhi mana kiya tha na shravan..."

"Acha sorry baba...chalo ghar chalo" he says getting up and picking her up in bridal form

"Kya kar rahe ho...bachi thodi hu...dil toota tha..per nahi..i can walk"

And he crashed his lips on her once again and biting her lower lip slightly and then sucked it to reduce pain

"Aj k baad esa bola na to dekh lena or zor se kaatunga"

"Sorry baba" she says blushing a little

They started driving towards their home

"Shravan road p dekho na"

"Ab tumse ye nazar kabhi nahi hategi"

THUDD CRASH an overloaded truck crashed into their car

"Shravan shravan...tum ..."

"Me thik hu sumo"

"Jhoo. ..jhoot mat bolo"

"Bohot dard ho raha h...?"

"Nahi tum ho na saath me"

"Sumo hum hamesha saath rahenge"

"Chahe vo marne k baad hi kyu na ho"

"Jee to saath me nahii payee lekin..."

"Marenge saath me" she completed him

"I love u sumo"

"I love you too shravan"

And they took their last breath together holding hands and died in each other's embrace

Some souls are meant to be together...even death can not separate them

P.s:- sorry sorry sorry all the tomatoes and chappals are welcomed
Edited by Namiksfan - 8 years ago

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Safire thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Arey yaar, ye thumne kya kar daala😭
Ithni raath Ko ye padke I am sure I am not going to get my sleep tonight...
But nicely penned...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😭. You brought them together...
And then you killed them..

Although I do appreciate the story and its beautiful melancholy emotions... But sorry I cannot deal with Shramans death not one of them...Not both of them.😭. Dolly tissues lag hi gaye
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dolly. ..Beta...agar drabble likh kar thak gayi thi. ..toh movie dekh leti. ..tumne Shraman ko hi maar daala. ..
Aur agar maarna hi tha...toh unko itna heavy duty dialogues kyun diye😆


But on a serious note,a very good OS..very well written..
Since they didn't meet in this life. ..let's get optimistic and wait for the next life.
Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg...
Wat a touching story...💔
For a moment I was couldn't believe wat am reading...ShraMan death...oh no can't see them dieing...😭😭
But u wrote it amazingly...hope next birth they ll lead a happy life together...😭
LavSriya

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Safire

Arey yaar, ye thumne kya kar daala😭

Ithni raath Ko ye padke I am sure I am not going to get my sleep tonight...
But nicely penned...


Owiee so sorry for making you sleepless ...thanks though
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deltadawn

😭. You brought them together...

And then you killed them..

Although I do appreciate the story and its beautiful melancholy emotions... But sorry I cannot deal with Shramans death not one of them...Not both of them.😭. Dolly tissues lag hi gaye


No prob dips I completely understand...thanks though and yes advice to mene pehle hi di thi😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh what a os dolly
Marvellous in emotion
But so sad ...at the end they died 😭
But its so beautifully penned
But now we want an extreeme romantic drabble to cover up the sadness
Greedy me 😉
But again a very beautiful emotional os 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Dolly. ..Beta...agar drabble likh kar thak gayi thi. ..toh movie dekh leti. ..tumne Shraman ko hi maar daala. ..

Aur agar maarna hi tha...toh unko itna heavy duty dialogues kyun diye😆


But on a serious note,a very good OS..very well written..
Since they didn't meet in this life. ..let's get optimistic and wait for the next life.

🤣kya karu yar fluff likh likh k thak gayi thi socha ek dark piece ho jaye
And thank you so much reshma
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: amlavs

Omg...

Wat a touching story...💔
For a moment I was couldn't believe wat am reading...ShraMan death...oh no can't see them dieing...😭😭
But u wrote it amazingly...hope next birth they ll lead a happy life together...😭
LavSriya

Definately they will...thank you so much girl

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