Inseprable Soul's - shraman os

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Do do PMs bheje tune...😆
Loved it yaar...u know this is the type I loved the most...😃
Heart touching and aching story💔
Dying in each other's embrance...Chal vaha jaate hai type ke feel aaya...
Loved the dialogues yaar dolly...Amazing as they were..👏
Do bring up more baby...👍🏼
Love,
ANU😳

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: anukulgr8
Do do PMs bheje tune...😆
Loved it yaar...u know this is the type I loved the most...😃
Heart touching and aching story💔
Dying in each other's embrance...Chal vaha jaate hai type ke feel aaya...
Loved the dialogues yaar dolly...Amazing as they were..👏
Do bring up more baby...👍🏼
Love,
ANU😳

Sorry for 2 p.m actually pehle vale me link attach karna bhul gayi thi😛 and thank you so much anu baby🤗

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Arpi1234

@Arpi1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Oh NO 😭
Ye kya hogaya...

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crazyparrot

@crazyparrot

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Emotional one! You penned it so beautfully👏

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Arpi1234
Oh NO 😭
Ye kya hogaya...

Sorry to make you emotional

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: crazyparrot
Emotional one! You penned it so beautfully👏

Thanks

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saraswatirawat

@saraswatirawat

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Maari tamatar or chhappal .sab bahut aacha tha Yaar end Maine maar kyon diya .

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phoenix_edkv

@phoenix_edkv

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Dolly, yeh kya kar diya tune???

10 days mein meri final exams hai aur tum aise heart attack de Rahi ho ????

Shraman Ko maarne ke liye tumhara dil maana kaise???

Starting it was good like Shravan was broken and Sumo tried to console him. And then he was talking about his suicide and still it was fine as Sumo tried to persuade him.

And then they confessed their feeling for each other.

"Sorry sumo ...i am really sorry...chalo jeete h...dikha dete h is duniya ko ki 2 toote hue dil bhi khushi se jee sakte h ek doosre ki zindagi me khushiya bhar sakte h"

I actually chuckled at this line. It's cute but still I dunno why.

then their kiss and Shravan's cute punishment

Then that ACCIDENT.

I thought that it would be a minor one but SHRAMAN died😭

But as long as it's SHRAMAN I love anything.

It's good yaar.

Sad hai phir bhi it's a good piece.

Actually mujhe Bajirao Mastani ki ending yaad aa gayi thi

Keep writing more . sad ones are ok but no deaths please.

Hope you are not offended.

Loads of love

Madhu

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humaira

@humairayousaf78

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

awww my poor shravu...

bechary ka kitna dil dhuka😭

love shraman conversation

they both can't live without each other

actuall i was thinking k dolly ne tissue paper box apne pass rakhne ko ku bola jab k ending to happy ho rahi ha

but i was wrong

they have died 😭

no it can't possible...😲

i am literally crying now😭😭

ye scene tum ne kese likh dala...

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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

It was beautiful & heart wrenching .. why did u have to do this .. 😭

U brought the truth out .. Made peace .. Gave hope .. They confessed .. Poured their heart out .. became each other's medicine for pain .. mended their broken heart .. went ahead to deal with the world .. they hugged .. they kissed .. & then U crashed them .. Why ?? 😭😭

true role play of "chal wahan jate hain"

Sure some souls are meant to be together for always , even death can't separate them .. ShraMan are such ..

but it is a very awesome piece 👏