Haq ||Thread 9||Part 50-Page 133||Teaser Page 150|| 24th Aug 2016 - Page 72

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Posted: 8 years ago
wow lovely emotional beautiful update dear..te way my maan ki anger was expression of his love and fear which burst like tis but geet dont have any answer for his questions was lovely emotional..te way my maan claiming his geet his fear made him to mark his geet thinking she will again leave him and geet too didt stop him as she too need him his love which she carving for..te way my maaneet became one one every sense was lovely beautiful..no other morning was blissfuyl than tis for my maaneet family..te way my maan and mitu ki morning scenes was blissful and geet was pouting seeing they team up was lovely..i love te update so much dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
edite

First of all, Am so sorry for being so late... I have nothing to say about my sudden disappearance...
Its just my personal life is a little bit tough n busy these days ... Hope you don't mind !!!

This part seriously surprised me... I mean, I was not expecting SR
But that what u do best...SURPRISE US WITH YOR UNEXPECTED TWIST !!

Let's start with Geet

Goshh this girl Geet thinks somethingelse and says something else, She keeps
something else in her heart and expresses something else... Altogether she has became
a very confused complicated personality husshh ... she messed up.. AGAIN!!
Anddd They both screwed up!! AGAIN!! ... And Maan's emotional outbursts make her speechless,
she was quiet his pain leaving her shuddering with his anger and the amount of realities he was
hitting her with and these two lines " Let me, repeat again, Do we have any relation Mrs Geet??"
And "Ohh... I am sorry... Mujhse tu Ms. Geet khana chaiye... Haina bang on
He said in a way as if making his own fun !! Perfect time to think for all negative things again..
She knew she has crossed the line this time and had triggered him to high extend!!
You know Mohi I could actually pictorically imagine Maan going bonkers, pulling his head and
shaking the life out of Geet...

Maan
The most amazing personality , and the most desirable lover n husband and father!!
He will never ever gonna give on them at any cost ( am engaged last month still am in love with my maan hehehe ROFL) !!

Finally maan's volcano erupted he is hurt angry frustrated and disappointed because of her!!
But I think he more then her he is angry on himself coz
he think he failed her and that's why she still don't trust him
that's why he taken that step I think so!! Maan wanted to show others side of their relationship
And he was confident she won't regret anything ...
Well to be very honest I did not even expected him to do DDLJ way n say jao Geet jao jee lo apni zindagii??" He
Will soon to be Devdas LOL !!! actually Maan wanted Himself to come first for her and then anyone else
(Es geet ko sarri dunya k paddi h bas ek maan ko chodd k )...

And the point is Geet still living in her past and in a serious denial phase that's creates mess in her life and
She is still holding back hope now she need to let it go and accepts her new life with maan after all
perfect relationship is not the one in which you don't fight, or bad things don't happen. Relationships
are part of life and life happens to the people in those relationships...
Perfect relationships are those where you fight, you argue, you love, you get hurt, you forgive but through
it all you never give up on each other Just like Maan !!!!

I don't know why still something is missing can't pin point exactly , but update looks bit messy !!
Its completely my POV and didn't want to offended you anyways , hope you don't mind !!



Edited by ArchanaRoy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg what was that??? isn't I commented like crazy ???

sometimes its happen with me .. me and my nonsense blabbering lol ..
sorry Mohi if I bored you with my bakwas comment ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
interesting teaser hmm Maan in his full glorious Msk mode...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ArchanaRoy

edite

First of all, Am so sorry for being so late... I have nothing to say about my sudden disappearance...
Its just my personal life is a little bit tough n busy these days ... Hope you don't mind !!!

This part seriously surprised me... I mean, I was not expecting SR
But that what u do best...SURPRISE US WITH YOR UNEXPECTED TWIST !!

Let's start with Geet

Goshh this girl Geet thinks somethingelse and says something else, She keeps
something else in her heart and expresses something else... Altogether she has became
a very confused complicated personality husshh ... she messed up.. AGAIN!!
Anddd They both screwed up!! AGAIN!! ... And Maan's emotional outbursts make her speechless,
she was quiet his pain leaving her shuddering with his anger and the amount of realities he was
hitting her with and these two lines " Let me, repeat again, Do we have any relation Mrs Geet??"
And "Ohh... I am sorry... Mujhse tu Ms. Geet khana chaiye... Haina bang on
He said in a way as if making his own fun !! Perfect time to think for all negative things again..
She knew she has crossed the line this time and had triggered him to high extend!!
You know Mohi I could actually pictorically imagine Maan going bonkers, pulling his head and
shaking the life out of Geet...

Maan
The most amazing personality , and the most desirable lover n husband and father!!
He will never ever gonna give on them at any cost ( am engaged last month still am in love with my maan hehehe ROFL) !!

Finally maan's volcano erupted he is hurt angry frustrated and disappointed because of her!!
But I think he more then her he is angry on himself coz
he think he failed her and that's why she still don't trust him
that's why he taken that step I think so!! Maan wanted to show others side of their relationship
And he was confident she won't regret anything ...
Well to be very honest I did not even expected him to do DDLJ way n say jao Geet jao jee lo apni zindagii??" He
Will soon to be Devdas LOL !!! actually Maan wanted Himself to come first for her and then anyone else
(Es geet ko sarri dunya k paddi h bas ek maan ko chodd k )...

And the point is Geet still living in her past and in a serious denial phase that's creates mess in her life and
She is still holding back hope now she need to let it go and accepts her new life with maan after all
perfect relationship is not the one in which you don't fight, or bad things don't happen. Relationships
are part of life and life happens to the people in those relationships...
Perfect relationships are those where you fight, you argue, you love, you get hurt, you forgive but through
it all you never give up on each other Just like Maan !!!!

I don't know why still something is missing can't pin point exactly , but update looks bit messy !!
Its completely my POV and didn't want to offended you anyways , hope you don't mind !!





Thanks for your beautiful comment n I wait for it...
Yes even I felt ... life is missing from update ...
Infact i tried many times to correct it before posting but still the life is missing from update
And it's happened when I didn't get feelings from inside and words...
Whenever I write... I felt like someone is detecting words to me from my soul and I am writing them
But when it does not happened .. than results comes out like this updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome story read one go...
Maan n geet relationship is so complicated
geet 19 yrs mai shaadi n widow child
how geet is suffering in widow life
Maan love geet but dadimaa assure Maan he will fight for love
maaneet married life r so difficult but Maan always save geet suhaani bua se
Maan love geet he always with geet
cutie pie mitu is biggest role in this story
mitu n Maan relationship r awesome blood relation in not sure to love
mitu love Maan
Maan family support geet n mitu
Raman n Krishna is always support geet after prithvi dead
Krishna is possessive about mitu
geet n Krishna reunion
Maan possessive about mitu
best story
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Posted: 8 years ago
Reading again hope for update one day
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Posted: 8 years ago
waiting




waiting






waiting







waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read all parts...amazing...I loved it...
Mitu very naughty..so cute
Mana luv Geet so much...
Waiting for next part
Update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Di update haq ff also..plz...


Waiting waiting...

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