Dil ka Rishta-A father's message to his daughter

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Forum peeps!
I'm back with my poetry!😉
This time it is dedicated to our Dev-Soha's newly formed bond!😳
We all were so emotional seeing them!😭
And so I couldn't stop myself from penning down something
And here it is a poetry on behalf of Dev. Those unsaid words that his heart wanted to convey too his li'l princess!😳
Here I go!😉

Yeh dil ki baatein Dil hi jaane!
Na jaane par phir bhi dil usko apna maane!"❤️


Tujhko dekha toh dil zor se dhadka!
Bht waqt baad mne khud ko muskuratw hue dekha!
Na jaane yeh tera ksa asar hua
Ki badal gayi mere zindagi ki rekha!⭐️

Teri hasi ne hi kar diya mujh par jaadu!
Man karta h us ek hasi k liye hi tujhe chaand-sitare laadu!😃

Tera-mera rishta kitna anokha hai!
Ki tune mujhe khud se dur jaane se roka hai!"😳


Ab nahi jaana tujhse aur duur!
Chahe mera bhagwan krle mujhd kitna bhi majboor!"😉


Yeh kismat ka khel hai
Ya meri khata!
Ki tu jo dil se kareeb hai
Uska mujh na ab tak hai pata


Paas hokar bhi humare beech ke faisle bade hai
Jane ksi deewar ke aar-paar hum khade hai!🥱

Apne man ke darwaaz kholkar
Dekh mujhe ek baar!
Ki tere liye mera dil ka har ek hissa
Roya zaar-zaar!😭

Tere aane se lgta h mujhko saari khushiyan mil gayi
Jse mere sune se bagiche m ek pyaari si kali khil gayi!🤗

Tere liye toh meri
Har khushi ; har sukh kurbaan
Meri zindagi se bhi badhkar hai
Tu meri jaan!❤️

Tujh par Maine apna Sara waqt hai wara,
Aisa khoobsurat hai yeh Dil ka Rishta humara! ❤️🤗

P.S - I too wrote this on Mishti Di's post...but that was a part of it..
This one is extended version!
Waiting for all our views on it!😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful lines... Perfect for Dev...😭😳👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur

Beautiful lines... Perfect for Dev...😭😳👏


Thanks Jo Di😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Forum peeps!
I'm back with my poetry!😉
This time it is dedicated to our Dev-Soha's newly formed bond!😳
We all were so emotional seeing them!😭
And so I couldn't stop myself from penning down something
And here it is a poetry on behalf of Dev. Those unsaid words that his heart wanted to convey too his li'l princess!😳
Here I go!😉

Yeh dil ki baatein Dil hi jaane!
Na jaane par phir bhi dil usko apna maane!"❤️


Tujhko dekha toh dil zor se dhadka!
Bht waqt baad mne khud ko muskuratw hue dekha!
Na jaane yeh tera ksa asar hua
Ki badal gayi mere zindagi ki rekha!⭐️

Teri hasi ne hi kar diya mujh par jaadu!
Man karta h us ek hasi k liye hi tujhe chaand-sitare laadu!😃

Tera-mera rishta kitna anokha hai!
Ki tune mujhe khud se dur jaane se roka hai!"😳


Ab nahi jaana tujhse aur duur!
Chahe mera bhagwan krle mujhd kitna bhi majboor!"😉


Yeh kismat ka khel hai
Ya meri khata!
Ki tu jo dil se kareeb hai
Uska mujh na ab tak hai pata


Paas hokar bhi humare beech ke faisle bade hai
Jane ksi deewar ke aar-paar hum khade hai!🥱

Apne man ke darwaaz kholkar
Dekh mujhe ek baar!
Ki tere liye mera dil ka har ek hissa
Roya zaar-zaar!😭

Tere aane se lgta h mujhko saari khushiyan mil gayi
Jse mere sune se bagiche m ek pyaari si kali khil gayi!🤗

Tere liye toh meri
Har khushi ; har sukh kurbaan
Meri zindagi se bhi badhkar hai
Tu meri jaan!❤️

Tujh par Maine apna Sara waqt hai wara,
Aisa khoobsurat hai yeh Dil ka Rishta humara! ❤️🤗

P.S - I too wrote this on Mishti Di's post...but that was a part of it..
This one is extended version!
Waiting for all our views on it!😉

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It was soo emotional shona.. While reading ur poem i was missing n remembering my popsi.. It was soo emotional.. Also remembering d dev soha scene.. Was crying reading dis..
U again nailed it shona..
Luv u
God bless u..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome lines⭐️
Edited by Nonie12345 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dancer.kavya


Thanks Dear Kavya😳
Ohh!..u should call it Dad now...he too must be missing u😉
Love u too dear❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks dear😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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this is just sooo beaitiful ...
apt for dev
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks Nonie😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashlyn12

Beautifully written!


Thanks dear😃

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