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Posted: 8 years ago
Well geet anger justified what maan behave in past
Geet is not able to love back maaan she afraid if he again enyer in lefe he again broken her heart which cant tolerte well maan deserve that n8ce continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice part
manu is so cute
he is also did his mamma's file
geet want to go
maan do something for her so she again trust you
continue soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 10...
Awesome... Interesting..

Thanks for update...

Thanks for pm...

Continue soon..


Maan in is insecurities pushed geet away...

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Opppsss where is update ? 😒
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Originally posted by: MGMahika

Opppsss where is update ? 😒


updating give me few minutes😳
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PART 11

Hi guys thanks for liking and comments..if any grammatical mistakes in this part plz ignore it..

Mahika dear,

I wrote today part fully maaneet past life because of u.i think today ur not disappointed me.one more thing don't say itni jaldi katham hogiya in this part also yaar...😡😡


part continues

Geet mind thought: Maanji whenever I need u never behind me.u running behind money ur business.u forgot u have wife in ur home.waiting for ur single care.

Flashback start

Annie delivery time.she gave birth to girl child.everyone went to UK.

Geet: Arjun bhai ur lucky Annie give beautiful daughter for u.

Arjun: Ha geet same like her bua..u only select her name.

Geet: My pyaari niece ki naam..miyra..how is it bhai

Annie: Very beautiful name Bhabhi

Dadi, ram and priya stay with Annie and Arjun.others returned back to india

Devil NT stay in khurana mansion because her father went aboard for business purpose in three months.sunitha bua and devil NT joined their hand against Geet.what devils will do with geet.

Sunithabua: Annie is younger than u but she give child but until ur not single good news for us with taunting tone

Geet eyes moist but she keep silent.

Maan room

Maan checking file and nt enter maan room

NT: Maan iam boring u come with me outing today.

Maan: U think iam ur boyfriend..roaming around u...ur my friend and ur my business partner daughter that it.be ur limit with harsh tone.

NT noticed geet come to room but maan not see geet.

NT:I know maan u live with geet insake of family only.u not love her...she not deserve u maan.she is orphan

Maan: Yes iam not love her

Geet little heart hurt nt words even maan said he not love her..she runs out that place.immediately

Maan: Yes ,iam not her.it not means she have no one.she is my wife..u got it she is my wife with angry voice.

NT: Sry maan ..i worried about u..with sugar coated voice

*****

Sunitha: NT I want throw that orphan to km.mom, priya Bhabhi and ram even Vicky also not protect with her.we have golden opportunity separate maan from geet.

NT: But maan bua..he not tolerate anyword against geet but how he allow throw out house.

Sunitha: Dont worry about maan I will handle him

*****

Sunitabua: Geet , maan asking cofee, u give to him...( give cofee tray to geet)

Geet: Ji bua

Geet enter room and give coffee to maan.


Maan sipped it and split out cofee..maan angry glare to Geet and geet innocent look to maan

Maan: U don't know how to make coffee

Geet: Ji

Maan: Sugar instead of u used salt..

Geet: Oh bua..

Maan: Shut up geet everytime u blamed others...went out with angry face.


Geet: Why maanji u never hear my word.

****

Nakul: Geet beta u have cold and headache.what r doing in kitchenn.i will take care everything.u go take rest beta.

Geet: Nahi kaka I will help u..

Nakul: U never changed beta .i go to groceries shop .u need anything tell me..i will buy..

Geet: No kaka..i don't need anything.

****

Nakul went out and geet went to room and NT opened gas cylinder and gas leaked full kitchen..

Geet returned back to kitchen and geet have cold so she not sense any gas smell .she tried to lighting gas stove through lighter. maan pulled geet forcefully

Maan angry face: U have any common sense .why behaved like uneducated Geet.

Geet: Maanji. Iam not understand

Maan: ..gas leaking but u switch on stove.u want burn whole house

Geet shocked : Oh I don't ji...gas leaking..

Maan pulled his hairs back: Oh god what will i do with u..

NT mind: Geet u escaped because of maan ..with angry face

****

Three months nt and sunitha tortured and taunting her but she not say anything dadi and no one..even she not shared to Vicky..she told Vicky if he disconnected his study and come back to India.if she said to dadi...relationship will break with sunitha bua..and maan even not hear any her word what is use if tell him or not...

Maan company organised party for important client...party arranged in km..

This party really important for maan business.. every business client also invited.

Geet mind: If I will go down to party or I will stay with room..what will do...

Vicky call to geet and geet smiled seeing her saviour call.

Geet: Hello Vicky, how r u .i miss u so much


Vicky: Tell me what ur problem

Geet: How u found out

Vicky: If u miss me then really u have problem.i know very well u hided many thing from me.u not trust ur buddy.ok no problem now what is ur problem

Geet sad face: Sry...maanji arranged party for his client.if I will attend or not.

Vicky:obviously u will attend party..every clients know very well.maan bhai already marriage but they didn't know whose is his wife.u have full right Stand next to bhai.

Geet: Hmm if maanji angry with me..

Vicky:geet plz attend party..I send one parcel yesterday u saw it or not..

Geet: No

Vicky : Hey I sent dress for u...i think u wear that dress today party.u wear it that it...no more argument..

Geet: Ok I wear ur dress

Vicky: Good girl

Geet: Hey iam ur Bhabhi.not. Girl for u

Vicky: Ok bhabhjj...aap ka devarji ko maaf karoge..

Geet smiled: I miss u yaar...

Vicky: I miss u too I will come back soon

Outside party

Client: Mr khurana u will not introduce ur wife

Maan: Oh..


Geet: Iam here sir...

Every eyes look to stairs..she look like angel..in her avator..

Maan eyes not removing from her ..obviously every men eyes look to geet.she wore black dress.that black dress give more attractive colour to her milky body.she is simple..she not wore any precious ornament except her mangulsutra..natural beauty do not need any extra ornaments

Every men jealous for maan..he have beautiful wife.

Geet holded her hand in front of client : Namasteji..

Client: Mr khurana..now we understood why not introduced wife before...u very lucky...u married apsaras

Maan angry but he not show anything to client because he openly flirting with geet.geet nervous more.

Maan possessively hold geet waist and Geet look to maan

Maan: Mr robert this is my wife..Mrs geet maan Singh khurana.


Geet stunned first time he introduced her to his wife to his client

NT not liked geet and everyone praising geet beauty.

NT want geet embraced infront of everyone.nt pushed geet and geet going to fall down to ground but one strong arms protected her fallen to ground.

Maan eyes become red seeing geet in some other arm

Dev protectively hold geet waist and geet uneasy become hold..geet stand in herself.


( jasmine dear u like it dev picture😆😆)

Dev: Hello geet how r u..iam sry..i run out our marriage that time i don't know ur value.will u marry me geet.

Geet shocked and maan angry raised hearing dev marriage purposal to geet.

Maan hold geet waist tightly: She already married with me..she is geet maan Singh khurana..

Dev: Oh sry Mr khurana..i missed her otherwise she became my wife...with flirty tone

Maan: Lets go geet...

Dance starts


Every couple come to dance hall.dev asking Geet hand to dance.geet deined for his request.

NT: Geet he asking for dance only..go dance with him.nt give geet hand to dev

Dev hold her waist and geet uneasy with his every dance move..

Maan seeing geet in dance floor with dev.he already drinked more alcohol.now he possessive and jealously raised .

Maan come to dance floor and pulled geet in his arms.


Dev step back to dance floor and geet also going away from floor.maan pulled her forcefully.she fallen to his chest..maan hold her hand and her waist tightly.maan eyes show his anger..maan tight hold hurt her soft body.

Maan angry move changed to passionate dance both r forgot their surroundings and maaneet eyes show their hidden with love each other...

Everyone clapped sound and maaneet come back to real world.maan leave geet in dance floor and went to bar side..he take hard drinks so much.

Geet went to washroom and one hand stopped her.

Man: Hey beauty , maan not deserve ur beauty..he don't know how satisfied u.i will satisfy ur every need with lusty eyes fallen her whole body

Geet: Mr don't say anything about my maanji otherwise..

Man: Otherwise what u will do with me and hugged her tightly

Geet shout: Leave me..leave me..maanji maanji..

Maan hearing geet voice and maan come to see geet struggled in man grip.

Maan punched his man stomach.man fallen and hold his own stomach.maan beating him vigrously.he became dead body condition.

Geet stopped maan and otherwise he kill him with his own hand

Maan bring geet to his room and his legs struggle because of drink effect..

Maan laid geet in bed but tears flow in her eyes.

Maan kissed her tear .maaneet starring with each other..maan ka alcohol lose his hardness and ego to geet.

Maan kisses her forehead and geet close her eyes..and geet sensed his single kiss...her bodyheat up.


Geet wake up in sleep and maan above sleep her.geet kissed maan forehead ...remembered passionate night...now geet changed to complete woman..geet placed maan in bed...yeah it is really tough one but geet did it...

Geet standing but her body have more pain and enter in washroom...she saw her love mark in her body..she cheeks become red.. looking her maanji ka love marks.she take hot shower to reduce her pain

Maan wake up in sleep with hold his forehead..he have headache like someone beat in hammer.maan seeing sleeping posture ..he sleep in bare body..

Maan wear his vest (mind) why I slept in bare body...yesterday night what happened..he only remembered dance with geet ..after that everything forgot in sake of alcohol.

Geet come out washroom and looking maan ..she face become red ..maan looking geet weirdly why she blushing so much today.

Maan: yesterday what happened in party

Geet not hear anything .she in dreamland

Maan pushed his hairs: geet with shout voice

Geet: ji maanji

Maan: yesterday what happened in party..i am not remembered anything


Geet heart burst..(mind): ur not remember our wonderful night maanji..tears flow in her eyes..

Maan: I am asking u but why u crying ...u know only crying geet with harsh voice

Geet (mind): u only make me cry maanji...

Maan phone ringed and pickup went out...leave geet alone..poor soul shattered her husband not remember yesterday night.

Maan: hello

Employee: sir bad news,mr robert cancelled our everydeals

Maan: what ...why with shocked expression.

NT : I will tell maan

Maan cut the call and look at NT face

NT: deal cancelled because of ur wife maan

Maan: what relation between deal and geet.why u blamed geet

NT: in her sake only u beated robert s son.so robert cancelled our every deal.

Maan: why I beated robot son

NT undersand maan forgot night incident : robert son friendly talk with geet but geet misunderstanding his friendly talk.so shout he misbehaved with her.u already drunk state..u beated robert son like punching bag..poor boy he so innocent..he admitted in hospital..

Maan enter room and geet cleaning room

Maan grabbed her arms tightly: yesterday what happened geet..

Geet: nothing maanji..with straight face

Maan : I asking dammit what happened yesterday night

Geet : nothing

Maan: NT said is correct

Geet looking maan mind: what that devil said to him..everytime NT...now geet anger raised

Geet: NT...u heared her word blindly .why maanji u married me..u marry with NT..u will become happy

Maan angry : what iam asking but what u saying

Geet: iam saying right maanji..if u marry NT u become happy.


Maan pushed his hair: ha if I marry with her.iam happy..she understand me more than u..even she love me ,take care me..but u..in ur sake I lost everything today..ur my obstacle to achieve my goal.ur my weakness..ur nothing to me..

Maan went out quickly...and geet broken down fully.

Almost one months maan not come back home..geet scared maan not return back home even she don't know where is he..

Geet called maan: maanji

NT: why u asking about maan..he stay with me ..

Geet: naintara ,u telling lie..

NT: if u doubt come to XYZ hotel.he stay with me..he don't want u in his life.u want his happiness.go away from him.leave him alone..give him little bit peace geet and cut the call.

Nakul : geet beta what happened why u crying beta with worried tone

Geet: iam going outside .i will come back few hours..u take care of home

Nakul: beta iam also coming with u

Geet: I will go myself kaka

Geet went out mansion to maan staying hotel.

Sunitha bua already informed NT ,geet coming for hotel.

Geet enter maan staying hotel room..poor shattered once again..his husband stay with other lady..maan sleeping in bare chest , lipsticks marks in his body and NT come out washroom in bath rope..

NT: I already told geet.he love me not u..u will get ur divorice papers soon.stay away from him.dont enter come back ur life.

Geet running in road with lifeless body with crying face.if anyone seeing her state..their eyes also moist..she really horrible state..

THUD...sound

Car hitted geet...

Geet come back to flashback

Geet kissed manu forehead and went outside ...

Maan wake up seeing geet move out their room...

Maan remembers Flashback

After passionate night,maan straightly went to hotel room.he lost everything in his business. NT come to see maan..NT friendly with maan but maan never cross his limit with her.even she tried seduce him but maan slapped NT and warning her... be ur limit.

geet accident,after 2 weeks

Maan enter mansion shout : geet with happy face

Dadi,ram,priya ,annie,arjun and Vicky standing in front of maan.


Maan happy seeing everyone but his eyes searching geet

Maan: when u people come back to india.

Everyone angry glare to maan and maan confused everyone behavior.

Maan: where is geet

Dadi slapped maan cheeks hardly...

Maan shout: dadi why u slapped me

Dadi: don't say once again in ur mouth to my child name Mr maan singh Khurana

Maan: dadi why u angry with me..where is geet with worried tone

Dadi grabbed maan collar: what type of husband u r..ur wife missing almost 2 weeks..but u don't know anything..my child is gone with crying face

Maan: geet missing with shocked face.

Sunitha: maa ...with stammering voice

Dadi next slap to sunitha and sunitha caring her cheeks.

Dadi: sunitha shut ur mouth ,u both how much tortured my child absence of mine

Maan: dadi iam not understand anything..tell me where is geet

Dadi: nakul ...

Nakul: ji maaji...

Dadi: tell him what tortured my geet tolerated in her own house.my child not said to me single words against u ..

Nakul narrated everything to maan and maan disgusting look to sunitha bua( NT so clever ..sunitha only taunting geet and tortured in front of nakul .but NT tortured geet lonely time).

Maan: bua I trust u but why u did with geet

Priya: u responsibities to geet not her maan ..i shamed myself.iam only gave birth to u..

Maan: Vicky where is geet

Vicky: why u want geet..u already kill her heart that enough..i will find my geet ...with harsh tone

Arjun: I hate u MSK...u broke my sister ..i don't know where she went...I never forgive u..annie lets go our home..i am not stay in this place anymore with angry voice

Annie: ha arjun..if geet bhabhi not in this home ..what we will do in this place.with taunting tone

Annie and arjun went out with their little baby.

Everyone leaving alone to maan and maan enter room.today he sensed geet aroma in his room.

Maan: where r u geet..

Before two weeks ,Maan went to Chennai..that time heavy flood.maan strucked in hotel room.everyone tried to save their life.maan realized money not giving everything but love is everything..in these two weeks maan life totally changed ,maan realized geet love for him.how much she scarificed everything for him.he hate himself..he did it everything to her..he want give every happiness to geet..

Maan: where r u geet ...where r u jaan..

Flashback end

Maan moist eyes and placed manu in bed and placed more pillow around him and behind to geet.

Geet sitting in bench...and Vicky touchd her shoulders..

Vicky sit next to geet and geet placed her head to shoulder

Maan looking Vicky and geet behind him

PART END

next part - PART 12

Precap: past continues😉

Anyone want my cutiepie ( maaneet child) ka real name I clearly said manu is pet name not his real name.i already choosed special name for my cutie pie..😳😃😳

I think I confusing guys through past life..i will clear ur every doubt in next part..but u will wait for next weeks 😆😆

Because..this weeks no more update..u will wait for next week...😉


if u likes this part plz press like button and comment me also..😳😃😳


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thanks for liking and comments deariie and sry iam not replied for ur comments really sry..thank u so much everyone give wonderful,beautiful comments..ur comments only encourage write to next part.plz always with me and comment me...😳😳😳

my lovely silent reader plz atleast press like button and if u not liked my story .plz inform me through pm

monday i will update hope part so pm monday..

NOTE FOR MY SWEET READERS:

i have doubt plz clear my doubt but dont confusing more.

if u any problem in my long update guys .u have problem plz tell me i will give short update in next part because ur wish my wish.

i got less response compare to my thread 1 page.why because of exam time or my update not in interesting track.tell me then only i will change my way of writing ..i know very well iam not good writer.give me ur suggestion ,i will improve myself...

NOTE FOR MY awesome WRITERS

this week end or next week i will read ur everyone stories and then comment u...sry for late plz forgive ur sweet buddy ok..

sj001,turbulance,priya_21,arisha,evilangel,jasmine rahul ,duha,soru,hanisa ,akristi ,sharda_123 ,rijrim...hmm one more think iam not mention i missed one or two pm update ok because i read it today or tomorrow😃.guys if u send me pm.but i am not comment ur story.or in list i missed ur name plz inform me...i forgot everything soon.. yaar 😕 sry...i read soon dearie...


whose waiting for my update this is for u guys...







Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago
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Nice upsate dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update will be waiting for maaneet baby name update soon

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