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Posted: 8 years ago
part 7
poor geet..
just for annie marriage to complete properly. didnt told anybody about her parents and lost them..
everyone darling hide so much pain in her heart.. and only vicky seems to understand her ...

maan did had feeling for geet in the past but never wanted to express it..

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Posted: 8 years ago
hi guys thanks for liking and comments..sry i did not reply ur comment..some buddies have doubt..

why geet not asking anything about maan?

in past life geet tried many time but maan ka careless charater with geet..he did not hear any word from her.but present she did not want him in her life..so till now she did not ask anything but she will ask everything to maan ...coming soon😉..i chosed right time..

yes geet is mahan in past life but not in present.. everyone seeing geet ka sherni avator in present life soon😉

yes, maan not mistake fully but he is responsability of his wife right.he is careless character in sake only everything happened right..he also deserve punishment but not so long..he will manoify his wife angry soon😉

yes, geet become silent because she is nave and scaring character,she is matured more than her age..she become silent because she dont want to bua relationship split with anyone.and NT really criminal brain..taunting geet but geet tried many time say about maan but maan trust NT word only..because.of jealous and angry with geet..maan family showing love geet more than him.

iam sry Robot really my mistake ..i mistakely written Robot instead of Robert.😆 yeah its really weird name😆.
in past life maan happy entry in mansion because he realised geet love through chennai flood ..he understand what is love and money..then only he happy entry in mansion unfortunately geet went away from everyone..😭


After geet accident i will tell in next part dearies..ok guys..i add new entries..and how NT separated geet from maan..i will tell u next part..why geet is more angry with maan..😉

hmm why maan family not ask maan not in one month in mansion

maan is business maan this is not new for his family..he went away from home before also for business purpose even he did not contact with them...yeah geet not said anything about maaneet fight to family memebers ..this also another reason ..maan family not raise their question😊

@ jayeeta why u not like vicky and geet pair.but i know 😆😆😉

i hope i cleared everyone doubt..u did not understand plz inform i will try to clear..


Thank u sweethearts..😳😳😳






Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago


Hope part 12


Hi guys thanks for liking and comments plz ignore grammatical and spelling error in this part..iam sry guys..


geet sitting in bench ..

Maan seeing Vicky and geet together..he stand behind them but little distance away from them

Vicky sit next to geet and she placed her head to Vicky shoulder..

Vicky: why u not sleep ..with consensus voice.

Geet: long back Vicky ,my sleep went away from my eyes...

Vicky: geet .plz forgot everything..move on ur life..i know it is tough for u..but u think about my champ

Geet: I lost everything Vicky,first I lost my parents,next I lost hope of my love ...now I live only for my baby..he is everything to me..he is my angel.he only brought back my smile .

Vicky: ha..my champ really angel for everyone..u know first time I hold him in my arms..he look cute,like pink cotton bundle..that time how much iam happy..even though I didn'texpress that moment.i never forgot that happiest moments in my life.

Geet smiled : ha..in our family ur one first hold my manu in ur arms eventhough iam also second with pout face.

Vicky: that only iam saying he is my champ.

One poor soul hearing their talk ..maan thought: in my stupidity I lost my beautiful moments..but Vicky got it..yeah he deserved it..he only stand with her everytime

Geet:till now I didn't ask that..how u found out iam in Mumbai..

Flash back starts.

After geet missing..nakul bothering geet not come back home..he did nt know dadi and Vicky number..maan family in uk and Vicky studying in London college.

Almost 2 days..nakul worried about geet and maan..sunitha bua said don't. Worry about her. .go doing ur work with angry tone.

Vicky called mansion phone number and nakul attended Vicky call.

Vicky: Kaka where is geet..she didn't call me two days..she is alright..she have any health problems with with one breathe..

Nakul: Vicky baba..geet baby not in mansion...with crying voice..

Vicky: What happened why u voice like ur crying..plz tell me quickly where is my geet..kaka

Nakul: Oh...vicky baba..sunitha snatched phone from nakul.

Sunitha: Vicky beta..how r u..with sugar coated voice.

Vicky: Bua..iam good where is geet.

Sunitha: She went to maan.maan have meeting in outside station..so geet also go with him


Vicky: Really bua..with doubt face

Sunitha: Ha..why iam saying lie to u.

Vicky: Ok but why she didn't call me

Sunitha: Hey bhagwan why u didn't understand both married couples.they need lonely time..

Vicky: Ok... but not satisfied fully bua word..and cut the call.

Sunitha: Nakul dont say anyone about geet ..with warning tone..

Almost two weeks..geet not come back to mansion..dadi worried about maan and geet not call them..even she called her but sunitha only attend call..same answer said to dadi that geet went to maan.

Everyone decided come back to India and Vicky also informed dadi and his family .he come back to India.

Dadi,ram,priya, Arjun,Annie with baby..enter the km.

Time god sunitha devil went away from mansion.

Nakul told everything to dadi..everyone eyes moist thinking their angel faced more problem in her own house..

Vicky also come to mansion and hearing everything..

Sunitha entry in mansion and shocked seeing everyone..

Sunitha: Maa.when everyone come back with sugar coated and innocent face

Thud...

Dadi slapped sunitha hardly..( for my sanju di wish)

Thud...one more slap..( for my wish)

Sunitha hold both cheeeks in her palms: Maa..

Dadi shout to sunitha but maan entry in km..


Maan happily shouting: Geet...

Every glare shift to maan..poor maan don't know anything about geet..everyone showing their angry to maan( last part I already explained)..

Dadi: Nakul..

Nakul: Ji maaji.

Dadi: Throw out her in my mansion.I don't want once again see her face..with angry tone..

Nakul: Ji maaji..

Nakul told guard throw out sunitha bua outside to mansion..

Time passing..everyone searching geet but noone got any detail about geet..

After 7 months.

Annie come to km sometime but not talk with maan..she only speak with others.

Annie:Vicky bhai..u got any information about geet bhabhi..

Vicky: No Annie..

Annie:: Tomorrow u and geet Bhabhi ka birthday..if geet Bhabhi with us..everyone become happy.

Vicky: What u said..tomorrow my birthday..with excited voice.

Annie:ha bhai..tomorrow ur birthday..

Vicky: Hmmm I am going now..kissed her forehead. And thank u annie with happy face and went outside..

Airport

Vicky flight landed in Mumbai..and Vicky remembered geet moments with him

Geet: Happy birthday Vicky

Vicky: Happy birthday too.buddy.

Both feeding cake with each other..both sharing their gifts..

Geet: Next year we will celebrate our birthday to Mumbai beach..

Vicky: As u wish mam..

He come back to reality..and I know geet u come to Mumbai beach this year..

Next day...Vicky went to beach and searching geet everywhere..but he didn't see her .

Vicky eyes clashed geet face and he seeing here and there..he seeing geet crossing road side..

Vicky shout geet..and geet turned face to Vicky..one car come clash to geet..and she closed her eyes tightly.Vicky pulled her in his arms..geet fainted in vicky arms..

Vicky patted her cheeks lightly: plz Geet wake up with crying tone

Lady: Poor girl, she is pregnant but fainted because of fear..

Vicky now only noticed geet stomach..she have big bump..

Vicky mind voice: My geet is pregnant now iam chachu..he became happy... after sec he realized she fainted in his arm..

Vicky joined hospital to Geet and geet unconcious state.

Doctor: Mr..ur lady's husband..

Vicky:no doctor , Iam her brother in law

Doctor: I think she have depressed condition.if she will delivery baby otherwise both baby and her will not safe..

Vicky: Plz don't say any thing doctor.plz save my geet.

Doctor: I will give her injection.after injection she will have laborpain..she and her child will become safe..otherwise we will do operation

Vicky: first give injection doctor with moist eyes.

Vicky tears flowing in his eyes: Pls god save my geet..i never ask anything from u..

Geet got labor pain shout..vigrously and outside Vicky not tolerate her pain..finally baby crying sound

Nurse come out with cotton bundle and give to Vicky arms

Vicky hold baby protectively and kiss baby forehead softly..

Vicky: My champ..with teary eyes..

Vicky enter Geet room and geet in unconscious state..vicky placed baby next to geet.

Vicky carrying geet hairs softly..and geet got conscious

Geet look her baby first and tried to sit but her abodmen have pain

Vicky shout: Geet what r doing

Geet smiled: Baby..Vicky

Vicky helped geet to sit and give baby in her hand..

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Geet kissed baby forehead and tears flowing in her eyes..

Geet: Manu..see ur mummaa...

Baby open his eyes lightly and baby face smiled appeared in his cute cheek

Vicky:my champ smiling geet.

Geet: Happy birthday Vicky

Vicky: Happy birthday geet..u give me wonderful birthday gift today..this yr gift I never forgot in my life time.

Geet: Hmm god give wonderful birthday to us..but till now u not give me gift with pout face

Vicky:what gift u want ,tell me I didn't denied ur any wish

Geet: Dont say anyone about me and my baby with straight face

Vicky: if they know about u and baby..they become happy ..everyone live like lifeless body with out u .today happiest moment of khurana.we got heir of khurana family.

Geet: no Vicky.u not say anyone about me..he is not heir of khurana..he is only my child..

Vicky:maan bhai have right know about his baby..

Geet: no Vicky..he have no right to my baby..sirf he is mine..with angry tone

Vicky understood she angry with maan..so decided talk with later..

Vicky: ok what about dadi..u know her health condition..everyday she worried about u..

Geet eyes tears flowing in her cheeks : how is dadi..i missed her so much..

Vicky: in her sake only I will inform everyone about u and baby

Geet: no u said dadi..she will bring me to mansion..i don't want see his face..

Vicky: ok ...cool..today onwards we will celebrate our birthday three of us not two.our champ also join our birthday list..

Geet nods her head and kissed his baby forehead: welcome manu..ur my life..

Flashback end

Vicky: but u stubborn like ur hubby..how many times I tried convinced u bring back to our mansion but ur denied everytime..

Geet: I don't want my heart break once again..oh..its too late I am going to sleep..tomorrow I amgoing to office..

Vicky: kya..u r going office tomorrow..no way..u need rest..

Geet: few hours only..plz...with puppy face

Vicky: ok but iam also come with u..

Geet: obviously u also come with me because iam going khurana office not mine

Maan went inside with teary eyes..maan placed manu in his chest and hug protectively

Maan: iam sry sunshine..i am ur bad papa..i missed most cherished moments in my life..iam sry..

Maan closed his eyes and geet come back to room..

Geet kissed manu and maan forehead: I don't know maanji why my heart not allow forgive even not forgot u..but I scared once again u hurt me..i will die..and placed head in maan arms and slept

Maan open his eyes mind: no geet I don't hurt u anymore..i will gain ur trust ..maan hug geet waist possessively..three soul slept peacefully..

Next day

Geet ready formal dress to office and maan also ready going office because geet going office right.

Manu: mummaa..where r u going

Geet: office manu

Manu: offizzz ..me too

Geet:no baby u stay with ur dadi,badi dadi...

Manu face fell down and maan scooped manu in his arms..

Maan: my sunshine come with me.maan tickled manu stomach..baby laughing so much..

Geet (mind): I am happy my baby got father love but this happiness not so long.if I will go to Australia after three months then manu will miss his papa..i don't want it..very soon I will decide manu stay away from everyone..it is good for my baby..i know that I am snatching everyone happiness.but I have no one without my baby..he is my life..

Maan ( mind): today I understand u r mind thought, u want go away from me,I don't allow u and my sunshine away from me..till my last breathe u both stay with me..Maan singh Khurana never lose his chance..i have 3 months time..in these 3 months once again I get ur trust and u fallen love with me ...

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Khurana office

Geet and Vicky enter khurana office.every staff confused why geet come with Vicky car.both behaved like they know with each other very well.

Maan car enter Khurana office.( guys maan entry nonone forgot right in geet serial,it is dazzing entry,how many time I watched that video..i fallen love with him and stunning entry.)

Maan enter khurana office with bodyguard protecting him and obviously our little manu also same attitude like maan..he is junior MSK..every staff Guessed he is future owner of Khurana empire..Manu baby attitude dido like his boss MSK but also confused when he got baby..


Staffs Fallen love with cutiepie..he is single smile everyone flatted ..geet drooling seeing maan entry..

Manu roaming every place. freely .noone dare to touch him.everyone want pinch his cute cheeks and hold in their arms.but scared for MSK..

Maan come next to geet : Mrs GMSK ...lets go our meeting with slow voice..noone hear Mrs GMSK word..with smirked tone

Geet come back to real world: sure Mr khurana..but manu

Maan: don't worry about My sunshine. My bodyguard protect our baby.

Geet (mind): our baby..with taunting tone.

Maanet and Vicky enter conference room ..manu baby enjoying his papa office..

Devil NT enter Khurana Office..and she don't know anything about geet baby.

NT enter her cabin and her cabin really horrible state..her laptop broke down into two pieces..every files shattered in every place..floor full of papers

NT shocked seeing everything and her angry raised..

Nt shout: whose that hell did it everything.

Manu sitting in NT chair facing at wall and turned look at NT face...

NT : what r doing in my room.u did it everything with shocked and shout face.

Manu : I m work ( iam working) with innocent face.

NT grabbed manu arms and dragged outside her room and manu baby struggled in her grip..his arms hurts so much..

Manu: mummaa.. with high pitch voice ...crying

Geet heared manu baby went out immediately and seeing NT grabbed manu arms tightly and manu crying face.

NT look at staff: how dare bring this devil in office..who's this devil parents.

Geet released NT hand from manu and scooped manu in his arms protectively and manu placed his head in her shoulder and crying loudly..

Manu: mummaa..it is paining show his arm to geet

Geet angry glared to NT and NT shocked baby saying geet to mummaa

NT: oh..this devil ur child..then whose father of ur devil child.

Geet: it is none of ur business Naintara with warning tone.

NT:so I confirmed he is illegal child right...

THUD..THUD..

Geet slapped NT cheeks hardly : how dare u said my baby is illegal ..u don't anything about pure love..my pure love ka gift my manu..

NT touched her cheeks: U bitch ..u slapped me...raise her hand to slap...but one hand hold NT hand tightly.

NT: Maan..

Maan leave her hand : How dare u said my baby is illegal child and my jaan ko bitch..with angry tone..

NT: maan...with stammering tone..

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Maan: get lost my office..otherwise I will kill u in my own hand..

NT jerked facing MSK angry tone ..and went out office immediately..

Staff murmuring...

Maan hold geet waist protectively and pick up manu in his other arm and look at his employes : Dear Staff,Meet my wife Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana and Heir of My Khurana Empire..

with proudly introduced everyone to his family.

( i hope everyone like my cutie pie name and anu /sowmiya dear i did it name ceremony...get well soon dear..😃😃😃)

Geet eyes also moist and manu baby back to normal...

Vicky happy heared maan introduced geet and champ to employess.

Vicky remembered hospital incident and flashback start

Vicky: geet ,u select baby name.

Geet: ha , I already selected baby name

Vicky:what name with eagerly tone

Geet: Vismeet

Vicky: name is different ..

Geet: yes,it is very different and special name

VISMEET meaning

First two letter from ur name, Vicky

VI- in my life u played two role perfectly..my friend and brother in law..so first two letter from ur name

S- important person in my life savitri devi- dadi...S letter from savitri @ my darling name

M- my jaan or life..Maan - M letter from my love, Maan

EET- last three word from my name..Geet- because..i need above three people till my last breathe in sake only i take last three letter from my name..

Totally 7 letters..rainbow have 7 colours.how rainbow give colors to sky after rain...like in my dark life he give color like rainbow...he is my angel..vismeet not only name..he is hope of my life..

Vicky shaking her hand: geet what r thinking..iam asking what is meaning of vismeet..

Geet: vismeet means Charming ,attractive and intelligent

Vicky : oh really with teasing tone..vicky caught her lie..

Flash end

Vicky:geet, I hope u forgive maan bhai soon

Part End

Next PART -part 13

Precap: New entry, Maaneet and manu more scenes and my cutie pie naughtiness...and in past after geet accident...how she change innocent to brave why she more angry with maan..

Opps I forgot my cutiepie in danger...😭😭😭


if u likes this part plz press like button and comment me..

iam waiting for urs sweet comment dearies..😳😳😳


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photos uploading..

Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
i hope everyone like my cutie pie name ...

important note dearies: i have more pending writer stories in my in box..i will read every stories soon dear..sry for late.

Thank u so much for wonderful responsed to my new stories...specially mera maasoom patidev..two days u all crossed 10 pages for comments and 120 likes...i never imagine but u all did it..i overwhemled ur love dearies..thank u so much...love u sweethearts..







Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
NT deserve this
Geet is scared to accept him
But now Maan want both Geet and his baby in his life
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update.
Quite a unique name of Manu n what a thought behind it.
Maan missed memorable moments of his life but won't wish to miss any other moment now.
Manu did right to NT and she deserved slaps by Geet.
Maan introduced Geet n Vismeet to world.
Waiting for next.


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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
Geet heart still doesn't want to trust maan😭
Haawww that naintara😡 how dare she hurt manu baby?😡😡😡
Yaayyy geet slapped her
Maan announced that geet is his wife and mani his son!
I liked the name that u chose for manu😊
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice name...happy k maan introduced with everyone...

lovelyupdate...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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