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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Edkvforever

Hi Lara,

Wish U Happy new year
Awasome update
Shravan is very much angry on her after knowing whole kidnapping drama. but she know how to clam down him... really like their whole conversation ...last part... most await scene after marriage... hot..hot... hot...
Thanks for pm


Thanks a lot, dear!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update.. Vikas Khanna's connection is really interesting..
Shraman moments are adorable..
Excited to see more of possessive shravan😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
I loved it,nice progression in the relationship and also the friendship is intact,possibility she can get pregnant,master chefs cool..! Khanna S son eh?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res 😊
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Hey Lara... 🤗
Awesome update buddy... 👏

ShraMan's morning romance... 😳
Vikas Khanna...woah..!!!
I owe you my two eyes.. It cracked me up..!!
Soon, he had his eyes closed,mouth however moving-speaking incoherent things... 🤣
ShraMan in romantic mood...in guestroom in front of Vivek... 😆
Just make sure to take that introduction out of this room, I dont want to end up dreaming about anyone else's sexual encounters other than mine......ROFL..!!
J Shravan... 😳
You sell yourself too short Sumo......Loved it..!!

Vivek hugged Sumo... 😲
I hope he doesnt create any prob in ShraMan's life...!!

Loved how Sumo welcomed Shravan at the door... 😳
It had always been because of her , for her... ❤️

All in all it was an awesome update Buddy... 👏
Thanks for the pm n update next soonish...!!

Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Lara,
I want to thank u again for dedicating this chapter to me...but I wud love it if u update d next chapter n dedicate it also to me 😉 😆 ...just joking...but plz update fast..

Rgds

Anuradha
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update Lara 😊
More problems coming up 😲

OMG..

But please dont make her Prego... pretty please...

Let them enjoy their lives for some more time.. After years of wait finally they are together.. Let them be in the world of their own.. Only the two of them enjoying every bit of it... And then obviously i would love to see them expecting a child..

I bet Shravan will be the most amazing , loving and caring Husband ever.. not that he is not already.. But that can wait na 😉

Waiting eagerly for the next update...

P.S. Unres on Pg 59 as well. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its been much long. Waiting for the update.
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Posted: 8 years ago


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Dedicating this chapter to - evaviego 🤗





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So, how's the new twist? Which will weave another major twist ahead.😈 Preethi's pregnancy drama will reveal something unexpected to us all, in the meanwhile don't forget about how hateful Shravan used to be towards Suman during the beginning of the story. 💔

Also, I'm feeling so happy and yet so sad at the same time to say this 😭 - the story is coming to an end soon. It's time I work on wrapping it up. But thankfully,😃 even that wrapping up can take some ten chapters or so...

So, keep liking, keep commenting!😳 Tell me what you felt about this chapter, what was your favorite part in it? Show me your love and encouragement that will help me so much to write!

Thanks all of you lovely people for your likes and comments! You guys are the best. I've read your reviews about the story and they've left this huge grin on my face, that much you all have made me happy with your response... though I didn't find the time to reply your comments. Kan pakgadke... sorry!

Love you all,
Tight hugs,
Lara.

P.S. People who've liked and commented will get PMs.

P.S. I hope you're excited about Pushkar's impending transformation into a human pulp next chapter, are you?



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Posted: 8 years ago
Ressi res!
OMG...Finally me first😃🥳
Its just like a dream come true

Hii Sunshine!
Have so much reading to do...will unress after reading all pending parts in one go😳

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Sunshine!!!🤗
Pehchana kon..??...😛
Firstly m deadly sorry from disappering like this..had many reasons..khair churo..Now m back on track😳
Haah...well i have last four chaps to read so will unress from chap 39 n onwards⭐️



CHAPTER 39:

Sunshine!!!🤗
Terrific one!...Indeed!⭐️
Woah...i so...so loved it!❤️

Suman helping Sakshi rescuing her brother..woah...Sumo mood totally on😆..therez no way shez letting Sakshi fight this battle of hers all alone...thts really sweet of Sumo but at the same time planning to hide this from Shravan..sounds unpleasent😕
I hope Shravan doznt turn to be mad at her knowing the truth.

Ohh Sakshi turned out to be smart enough😛...Traped tht jerk in his own valley of creepy deeds😈...all coz shez damn eager to free her Brother her only family.


OMG!!!⭐️
The Date...uufff...Breath-taking one!!
Suman's imapatience is quite natural...i guess all women nah infact every one has such a reaction towards their surprises...hell curious and never stop eating ones mind till thy get to knw a slightest clue of their surprise..coz i do the same unless n until m threatened to loose tht surprise if i not giveup bugging thm😛😆

The bestest Part...which i turly loved...

"More adoring is when we women peel off that skin of confidence and reveal that real man with fears and flaws underneath"
"And you have alreay succeeded in doing so"

This moment was a Killer one! 👏
There convo thy had as the reached the roof was Aamazing plus funny😆!...When he said he wud jump if he failed to impress her was ❤️
Sunshine ur imaginary Shravan is beyond a gem...u are just making me fall more n more for him..omg...like hez sooo romantic...haay☺️
His date was❤️...n so was Shraman n their moments..loved it!😳
Whole terrace scene and convo was so Beautifully Penned!👏

"Your Nerd"...

"Fate waited for the right time"...so true!😳

And the most loveliest part was when he tells her that he wants all goods and bads and the worsts of her!...it literally stole my heart..their convo their sweet romance everything was hell enchanting!
Ohh..That masala wala seems an intresting character😆
Suman actually hired a Goon cum Masalay wala😆...hope he cud be of some good use😛

The wait for the "right time" is eating both of them equally this really shows how much thy crave for one another how much thy arre into one amother how much thy want to be one anothers...love eachother to the square of infinity for sure

Royal execution of their wedding night...hmm..Intresting😳😆



CHAPTER 40

Happy New Year to you to Sunshine🥳

Tbh when i read its finally going to be the right time...i was literally at cloud nine n as soon as i read an eventful day i was like😕...ab kya blast honay wala hai😛😆

Throughout this chapter either u had me high on my Scary mood coz of his furious being or completly Awe-strucken by all the adoration he was showering his wife with😳

I have heard tht men are really weak at expressing their emotions and have noticed too cant really tell its true or not or just my imagination but our Shravan is totally different...so well at expressing his emotions be it positive or negative...Plus point😉

Sumo being a tublelight sounds damn cute😳
Awwh their kiss was lovely n whn thy got caught...damn cute and at the same time hillarious too😆
Awwwhh.....he arranged a swing for her at terrce..so sweet...😳...n so was the Resturant naughtiness😆

"The devil's on his way out the city.Now,Suman!"...eventful day han😕...it sounded so scary😕

Rescuing mission was a fun one...but landed our dear sumo in trouble as well...33 missed call!!!😲...so many texts...was hell worried for her
From the very begining i was like hiding from Shravan wud be a bad idea n Yes i definitly turned out to be one!
oohh...Shravan's outburst was so justified...she made him do so...n the moment he heard the word kidnapping,my instant reflex action was i literally hid my face with my palms n said Sumo is doomed!...n few secs later burst into laughter at my silliness🤪😆

So Thank God!...mission got accomplished..but wait whoz the other guy🤓

Oh Shravan thunderous look made me scared n all i cud think of was ab Sumo ka kya hoga...he was hell furious at her folly n most importantly of her keeping a secret.

"I brought you Khurana's wife and her brother,freshly rescued,"bold one got me🤣🤣...it sounded more like she was presenting a freshly baked cake or something to him🤣...n tht unexpected bonus still holds by curiosity😳

OUCH!!!...Shravan tu gussay say laal peela hoa tha...🤢
N vaga standing for his honor was something i appreciate.

I so loved this hell angry furious Bear😳...jo bhi ho hez always the best
her idea of shoving the dinner down his throat was an amazing one😉😆

when he emerged just in towel..for me it was a moment to watch😳...Sumo's blasted gutter brain was on retard mode and so was mine🤣☺️

Sunshine...u made me cry😭😭...
"But it's saddening how you hid it all from me.It's humilating how i was blissfully when my wife was loitering right in the center of danger and i was nowhere near to protect her!"😭😭

"Didn't you promise to give me all of you just a few days ago?"...this n onwards was an emotional one😭😭...was hell Brilliantly penned!👏..i just loved it!

"Just dont try to send me to a early grave with your adventures in the future.Always remember that there's nothing that scares me more than the fear of losing you."...❤️❤️❤️😭😭

His all restriction on her was sp adorable..i just kept on adoring their love
Love hormones...😆...😳...so cute!

So true tht Khurana is not going to leave it so easily..he'll surely take his revenge😕...so not gives positive vibes😕...But Shravan hai na...tu all is well...haina😉

Their kiss was lovely...OMG!!!...he had planned their wedding nite this very day😲
N got all ruined...but there was no way Suman wud let this chance go away and wait for another century as life is always unpredictable.

Their love making moment was hell Beautifully Penned!...was an engaging on...damn hot damn amazing!...loved it to core!❤️
Awwh it was damn cute and funny too as he didnt let her sleep peacefully n kept on poking her to ask his silly questions😆😆

"We did not used protection!"...OMG!!🤣🤣...this seemed like when a kid broke a glas n timidly tells his mom about his deed😆😆
Damn hillarous...ab Sumo kya karay gi😆

Special mention of the quote u used..it was really really a Beautiful one👍🏼

Sunshine..all in all it was hell Stupendously penned!...i loved n enjoyed it to core!...indeed!⭐️
The dialouges were outstanding!!
This was my most Favorite part uptill now n wud say ur bestest too😉⭐️
Hats off bro for being such an Incredible writer👏👏
My all time favourite😳
Love you soo much🤗




Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 41:

It was a chotu sa update but was damn cute and hell hillarious!😆😳
Thank God i have one more chap to read warna tu my curiosity wud have had its share by now😛😆

The start was super duper cute..their romantic moments were Enchanting!...Beautifully Penned!👏👏

Oh u asked wether her calculation is correct or not so lemme tell u if u see it biologically or through science POV thn its obviously posssible tht she cud get pregnent coz all it needs is an egg to get fertilized..or bhi buhat story hai but i think mein apni Biology class shuru karnay say phlay hi khatam kar doon🤪...han so if its in the writers hand thn cant be really sure...she can be or cant be...woh bas Lara baba janti hai😛😆...so the chances are 50-50😳

Vivek khanna...hmm intresting entry...Shravan k kan say achay say jealousy k dhoain nikalay ga ya..for sure🤪😆

hoo...tht eyes threat was..🤢

OMG!!!...their romance their chemistry their magnetic bond just spellbinds me...it was so so beautiful...dazzling one!😳

"If you keep staring at me like this...i'll have to intriduce you to more of my brutish ways."...this made me blush hard..☺️

"I'll take the risk then...and get familiar with those ways you are talking about."...bold Sumo is just Bindass👍🏼😉

Their moment was so damn lovely and the point it got disturbed by tht Vivek i was all 🤣🤣...It must have been hell embarssing for sumo😛😆...n imagining Shravan being hell irritated by tht silly interuption was even more fun😆

OMG!!!!🤣🤣..."Are you guys trying voyeurism?"...i cud help myself...🤣🤣
Sunshine...you are Mindblowwing Bro...literally wanna hug u tightly for being such an Incredible writer yar..lag ja gale behna...🤗🤗

Shravan actually had a point...he was merely trying to kiss his own wife in his own house😆...but guest room mein guest k samnay...naah..manners..Shravan surely needs to control his uncontrolablly increasing hormones... 🤪

Shravan's jealously and possessiveness was soo adorable
Oye..😆...Shravan hota tu paka Vivek is duniya mein baki nhi rahata after tht hug😆

Its was actually very lovely to see tht as he entered his home and the moment his eyes landed on is lady love all his tensions worries tiredness vanished away.

"I can go to any lenghts and make all impossibles possible,to make sure you're safe."......❤️

so true the evil might be defeated but is still alive😡...hah...wht he'll do nxt...so exciting 😃

Sunshine...u are a Stupendous Writer!...m so so into ur FF...loved it to core!⭐️




CHAPTER 42:

Wont really hide...you astonished me to the core...literally this indeed was a mind blasting one!

Shravan's jealousy makes him more appealing and adorable😳...his antics are just dame cutoo❤️
The way he hovered over Vivek fuming like an angry hawk was really cute😆😆...its also annoying too sometimes😳

Oiy...Shravan's inner animal disarder is soo cute...specially for Suman his version is super sexy😳😉...haay i so want him for myself☺️

Khurana finally behind the bars...but i also feel something itcy...how come this ferocious creep has been so calm and literally not planning a counterattack🤓...i can sense him being busy into his evil planning ploting...hope it really dosent effect Shraman.

so true life is full of surprises hurdles and adventures all we need to learn is how to tackle them so we can survive the hurricane.

Ohh tht night cuddly romance was soo lovely...❤️❤️❤️...hell Beautifully Penned!...Sumo kept on trying to reach her phone and he kept on caging her to himself...Awwh
Love definintly has connnection to lust...who denies it!
Ohh n their dirty convo was hell hillarious😆...i so badly wanted to quote it here but restrained myself from doing so🤪...Sunshine u r beyond Amazing!⭐️
damn hillarious part was whn he fell on the floor😆😆

What The Hell!!!...Preetii Prego😲😲...Pushkar dosent want his own Child😲
This fact literally made me gasp is shock.
This was the same thing i thought...Pushkar is oh so dead...200% sure😳...i didnt expected such immaturity from him.
Hope Preekar issues doznt creat a rift between Shraman😕

Preeti and Suman had same situation...dekha...Preeti proved my sciency point i mentioned before😳😆...ab Suman ki kissmat tumharay hath mein hai😆😉...I wud suggest let thm enjoy...abhi abhi tu asal honeymoon period start hoa hai en ka😳

Oh dont tell me preeti's pregnency has something to do with khurana...hope not so😕...plus why wud we remember the old bitter memories...Hope Shraman are not going to end up fighting like maniacs...n hurt eachother badly😕

so many querries and the key of all my answer is with you...plz plz plz do update soonish this time...as m hell curious to knw wht Dhamaka's are linned up ahead for us😃...super excited😉

Sunshine!..Sunshine!..Sunshine!...i must say ur story is hitting the heights and making me fall more and more for it⭐️
Big beary huggies for you🤗🤗...love you dear!
plz do update soon..will be eagerly waiting for ur pm😉


Tadaa🥳
finally mission acomplished😳


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Wht did you actually said????😲😲...You...My very own Sunshine planing to wrap up this story!!!...NO WAYSS!!!...like seriously...how can you do this to us...this was the very day and very statement i was dreading to hear and to read,since the moment i fall for ur story😭😭...n now u actually turned my fear into reality😭😭...Plz dont do this...I want more...atleast 3,4 thread aur...3,4 zaiyada hain tu 2 bhi chalein gay...plz plz plz i really dont want this story to end too soon..n u r telling 10 chaps...no ways!!!...aisa lagta hai kal hi khatam ho jaay ga🥺
Mere happy happy mood ko shadu shadu kar dea😭😭
Plz hum becharon ki extention day do...Plz...sony tv ki tarha dhoka mat do na😕...fans ka dil turna gandi baat...haina...plz plz plz dont end to soon...m literally begging you!





Take Care!
Sunain❤️

Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago

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