FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 46

Well written chapter!!!!! waiting eagerly for the next part...

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Res

Morning was bliss...waking up beside the person who is everything in your life... 😉 their cute bantering, 😊 Shravan teasing "thinking about certain morning,"" certain brute"😆🤣 Sumo turning into human tomato... 😳😳 possessive Shravan... 😉 master chef Vikas Khanna... 😛 everything was beautifully penned... 👏

Nice update dear as always big 🤗

Thanks for PM Lara.

Vinu ❤️

Hey Lara!!! I m the same Beas from watpad who disturbed you a lot. Coming to the story...I m really dead 🤢 . Your words are truly magical and hypnotizing giving us the urge to go through your chapters at least two times. You portrayed them in such an organised manner. And again some more challenges...hope they overcome them together without any hurdles. Plz post soon. Can't resist anymore to read the next part.
Loads of love
😛
Beas 😆Hey Lara!!! I m the same Beas from watpad who disturbed you a lot. Coming to the story...I m really dead 🤢 . Your words are truly magical and hypnotizing giving us the urge to go through your chapters at least two times. You portrayed them in such an organised manner. And again some more challenges...hope they overcome them together without any hurdles. Plz post soon. Can't resist anymore to read the next part.
Loads of love
😛
Beas 😆Hey Lara!!! I m the same Beas from watpad who disturbed you a lot. Coming to the story...I m really dead 🤢 . Your words are truly magical and hypnotizing giving us the urge to go through your chapters at least two times. You portrayed them in such an organised manner. And again some more challenges...hope they overcome them together without any hurdles. Plz post soon. Can't resist anymore to read the next part.
Loads of love
😛
Beas 😆Hey Lara!!! I m the same Beas from watpad who disturbed you a lot. Coming to the story...I m really dead 🤢 . Your words are truly magical and hypnotizing giving us the urge to go through your chapters at least two times. You portrayed them in such an organised manner. And again some more challenges...hope they overcome them together without any hurdles. Plz post soon. Can't resist anymore to read the next part.
Loads of love
😛
Beas 😆

OMG...Thank You sooo much for dedicating this chapter to me dear...I m overwhelmed...thanx once again...
The update is also super duper nice...I love it...u r a genius at ur work..keep it up...

Awesome update...beautifully penned...
Shravan and sumo moments were just adorable... Jealousy shravan was so cute
Vikas khanna 😛 ..one of my fav... hope sumo meet him soon...
Looking forward for next part...
Thanks for pm

Very nice update. Thanks for writing it.

Originally posted by: anum20jamali

Hi Lara 😊

It was an amazing chapter dear!

The kidnapping, Shravan's outburst, dem consummating der marriage, evrythin was beyond awesome

Besharam chapter bhi tha thoda sa, haha 😛

Shravan had planned evrythin and yet he was so patient wen things didn't turn out d way he would hv liked. He's a darling 😳

But Sumo did not make him wait nymore and u did not keep us waiting nymore 😉

Thanks for d beautiful story, awaiting d next chapter.

Plz update soonish 😊

Lots of love,

Anum ❤️

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Take a bow lady 👏

Read both versions and just loved how nicely you took forward the entire story...

The kidnapping and Sumo's initial way of explaining was so Khushi Kumari.. 😆

And then everything after that was all you.. you bring Shravan alive in front of my eyes with each expression and his total exasperation at his wife's behavior..

last part was 😳 long awaited by all and much more than expected.

👍🏼

Originally posted by: Crazypiya

AwesOme update
The whole kidnapping thing is just just amazing
Shravan's restlessness for sumo
His concern that someone might have harm his sumo
Sumo's daring attitude
And ohh lastly how can i forget the blissfull night
It was much more awaited and it was worth waiting gor...
Ohhh lara .. My love u have penned down the mature content without any vulgarity
Which is the toughest part i guess...
And tge way u wrote it ..
"""" super hot..
During nthe intimate moments how shravan asked her permission is really overwhelmingly
And onemore thing i am scared that u mention if he will leave her she will die... Dont make it asad ending plzzz