FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 49

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Finally!
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Unres..

Lara🤗
Where have you been buddy...?
And now that you are here with a chapter you are actually telling me there is a wrap up in sight?
Okay, no like.

I mean yes I know that the story was finite but this was my only connection to ShraMan other than my own works.
No other story, no other writer does justice to them as you do. No ones works come close to being in the same vicinity as yours not even mine.
Your writing evokes the familiar EDKV feelings.
Honestly, you are my favourite writer and you have set the bar so high that I can't even get myself to read anyone else's works.
You are simply outstanding, and if I may, the best we have!

Be nice and let the story run a little longer?
Or if you have an end in mind then would you be so kind as to continue writing on ShraMan?
You are inspiration bro, if you stop writing on them, I will be

Coming to this chapter..
Preeti? What even?
I had not expected this one bit!
You love bowling googlies right?
And then Pushkin doesn't want it?
Clean bowled!
Yeh ho kya raha hai?
I would love to see Mr. P as a pulp, it would be nice given his current behaviour.
Please tell me Shravan will slap him and give him a earful like he'd once bestowed on badass lawyer😆

Suman could be preggy too?
Hmm... now I wanna know...

Don't forget Shravan hated Sumo, where is this coming from and why? Lara, don't hurt my heart...
And better not keep us waiting on this one!

Mr. Junior Khanna could soon be baigan ka bharta if he doesn't stop. I love jealous Shravu and all that happens after.

My favourites, absolute favourites from this one:
The cuddly part! Oo that was adorable! And Shravan's pride really needs a bit of taming 😉

And secondly, over my frigging dead body. That was passionate and I can't tell you how much!
You know that already!

Way to go hon!
Can't wait for the next..
Thanks for the PM🤗

Love and Admiration,
Zoya😳

Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago
Itssanjh thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Ohhh! How badly was waiting for this one!
devilaonmoon thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Human tomatoe ☺️

Jalkukdu...ufff Mr. Malhotra..! Possessiveness goals..!😳





Would love to see Shravan ki masterchef meeting MasterChef! 😃



Sumo will on cloud11... Shravan m not sure..!😉

Wow update!!



Thanks!
I really like this masterchef vs masterchef gif. 😃
They'll meet soon.
Love yaa...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

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Lara my love you are too good👏

Loved the follow up on a night to remember...
They made love again *Blushes to human tomato* ☺️ 😆

So there is Vikas Khanna angle too😆
That was his son...
The guy seems coocoo...
Jealous Shravan! Possessive Shravan! What a treat buddy!
🥳

She blushes... I am in love!
Sakshi seems to have gone but please tell me she isn't coming back..
For some reason Sakshi to me is synonymous to danger

So That's where Shravan was the whole day!
Bringing the devil to his knees!
He's gone all in... That's my sexy lawyer ❤️

What was that in the A/N?
You are bringing in new problems?
Why Lara, do you not like seeing me happy
Having said that, I trust you... You have a vision for this story and no matter the hiccups you will see ShraMan through...
Can't wait..

How will she get preggars after all calculations?
Human body is funny and you can never be too sure😆
Oh Shravan was just too potent 🤣
I'll let you be the teller of this one!

Amazing update!
Keep them coming!
Love,
Zoya



Thanks a lot, Zoya!

Yes, there's a Vikas Khanna angle too in the story. 🤗
It's just... I've always wondered what it would have been like if in the show Suman went to a cooking contest like masterchef or something? 😉

Thanks for your trust in me, dear. Know that some storm is needed to strengthen them more.😭

Love u. Take care.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pritiyerne

thanks lara for PM...

i used to wait for ur update eagerly, every time u manage come with such a beautiful update and bombshell me with ur writing 👏


Thanks, dear! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bworm

Awesone darling...it was fun

Loved shravan jealousy...
All prepared for what you churn out.
Like the development of sharman.
Life is a journey. .so a few pit stops in the form of trouble. ..makes it interesting

Thanks for the pm


I'm glad to hear you like the development of the characters.
Thanks a lot! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

Ah ! Yes , the update was at turtle pace , but better late than never..

I love the way you create magic with your words while describing the physical intimacy between them,its nothing obscene but all serene and bliss of 2 ppl in love for so long😊.. I think Shravan is lil apprehensive about becoming a parent this early,let's see if their mistake would trouble them later,even after miss'know it all'sumo has rested his concern for timebeing😉

That was unexpected,but u r as unexpected,Sumo became Hero for her fav Chef's Son !!
That was a real facepalm moment for them,but agreed his talk showed lil gratification .. And jealous Shravan is fun always .. 😆

I don't think the evil will get deleted so soon and as easily , though Shravan has done quite a lot as precautionary measure for her lady .. She really brings out the best and the worst out of him .. But then aren't we all like that for the ones we love ?

Amazing chapter and your precap indicates things going to be dark in future , update at rabbits pace this time ..😊


Thank u so much, sweetheart! 🤗

Hmm... we're all really like that for our loved ones, we're at out best and then we're at our worst.
Yes, darkness awaits. Pray for them!

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update, full of twist.
Preethi news was very shocking. And I cantbto read the next major twist preethi news will weave.
Looking forward to read more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow... different shades of inner animal.. 😳

but Khurana😡 can be that easy? nope..

their moments togehter the way you describe are hmmm 😊

Preeti!! TIWARI before marriage 👏 that too based solely on date mathematics from a girl who only attends nail art or chinese classes🤣

I wish you might pen down Mamiji's wrath in chapters to come.. also Pushkar Pulp is eagerly awaited.. 😆

Now will Suman and Shravan enter a similar fate? Also why did you remind about Shravan's hatred for Sumo from earleir chapters? will this Prikar issue cause problems between them? and how??😕

mind is in permutation combination mode already now and I know I ll have to wait a few days before you send the next update 😭


ending?? nooo no no no NO NO... no ending... not soon at least 10 chapters will end too soon... no not done.. not accepted. We can have a PIL sent you know for this story to not end 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow
what a twist
cannot wait
continue soon
superb

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