Shravan's Guilt:'Hum Bewafa Hargiz Na The' Song My Version

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey everyone!!!
Just wrote my version of "Hum Bewafa Hargiz Na The" to describe Shravan's Guilt and Predicament. This is for everyone who love my Lyrics. Thank You So Much. Much Love To You. Please let me know what you think. Like and comment.

Please read it in "Hum Bewafa Hargiz NaThe "Tune:


Hum bewafa hargiz na the

Par hum wafa kar na sake

Hum ko mili uski sazaa

Hum jo khata kar na sake


Kaise hum batao raat aur din

Jeene ki chahat Kare, tere bin

Dard teri aankhon me humne diye

Kaise ab mitaayen woh Palchin


Tere paasbaan banke rahe

Par jaan fidaa kar na sake...

Hum bewafa hargiz na the

Par hum wafa kar na sake.


Soncha na tha tujhse ae zindagi

Tohfa milega aisa bhi

Nazron ke aage hote hue

Hum Tum banenge yun Ajnabi


Jis dosti par tha Gumaan

Haq woh Adaa kar na sake...

Hum bewafa hargiz na the

Par hum wafa kar na sake


Thanks Guys. Really hope you like it.


Lubna.



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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey me first 😊
Its beautiful, loved the lyrics as much as original one ❤️
U have a promising lyricist in you , please do write master pieces like this 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pritiyerne

hey me first 😊

Its beautiful, loved the lyrics as much as original one ❤️
U have a promising lyricist in you , please do write master pieces like this 😃

Hey Priti,
Thank you so much. So glad you loved it.

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lubnnaaa🤗
Firstly the song is so apt to match the situation and your lyrics did I the work of cherry on cake
soo beautifully penned down...it completely depicted shravan's guilt...please come up with more of them ...
Man you write so beautiful. ...no beautiful is a small word...something beyond that...and I am a biggie fan
And yes...ff bhi jaldi update kar dena please...tooo eagerly waiting for it 😆😆
Edited by Namiksfan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww beautiful as always dear


Love,
Spandana
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Meaning ful Lyrics
U have given words to Shravan's guilt..

Nice one dear.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res 😳
****
Unres
Hey Lubna... 🤗
Awesome dear... 👏
Perfactly apt for Shravan's feelings... ❤️
Even though I loved whole of it but ...
Hum ko mili uski sazaa
Hum jo khata kar na sake


Jis dosti par tha Gumaan
Haq bhi Adaa kar na sake...
... ❤️
I just love love loved them... ❤️
You are amazing girl... 😊
Keep them coming...You know na how much I love reading them.. 😊

Loads of Love n 🤗 your way
Nik
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh meri Galib ki nani
Its prefectly penned. So apt and yet so beautiful.

Can I use it in lost if possible one I reach a point?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Lubnnaaa🤗

Firstly the song is so apt to match the situation and your lyrics did I the work of cherry on cake
soo beautifully penned down...it completely depicted shravan's guilt...please come up with more of them ...
Man you write so beautiful. ...no beautiful is a small word...something beyond that...and I am a biggie fan
And yes...ff bhi jaldi update kar dena please...tooo eagerly waiting for it 😆😆

Hey Dolly,
Thank you so much. You really make me so happy every time you comment. Can't tell you how much I love writing my version of songs. I can't concentrate on anything else, when I'm making a song, and when done writing your comments make it worth.
Will update soon. Thanks for all the love Dolly.

Lubna❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sptrno

Awww beautiful as always dear


Love,
Spandana

Hey Spandana,
Thank you so much.

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