Shravan's Guilt:'Hum Bewafa Hargiz Na The' Song My Version

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806
Lubna Di! !!!!
I'm so proud of you
how can you manage to hit it on the right spot all the time😳

Thanks Arpita. Miss the show so much ke bas yaad mein gaane likh kar khush karte hai Dil ko. 😆

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Itssanjh
wow Lubna... Just wow... No more words can express what I felt after reading this!

Thanks Sanjh, that means a lot to me. So glad you liked it.

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Lub! Lub! Lub!🤗

Kya cheez ho tum yar...srsly..phly tu tum mjhy apni magic wand dekhao...aj tu mein jaan kar hi rahon gi tumharay pitaaray mein itni amazing Shaiyri ati kahan say hai...you never fail to blew me away...literally...whts the secret behind ur talent han🤪😆

U wont believe...mein jis tarhan Sher ki tang tor sakti hon waisa koi nhi kar sakta...kissi ki line kissi mein mix kardon gi ya tu yaad hi nhi aay ga...only i knw how i suffered my 9th 10th 1stYear and 2ndYear urdu's paper...not tht m weak in urdu it was just coz of the shaiyari...Tashree tu phir bhi buhat easy task hota tha par jab mutal-e-qa(reference) sher likhnay ki bari ati thi tu all blank...jitnay yaad kiyay hotay thay sab choohmantar ho jatay tha aein examination k time aur bad luck ki bhi kya timing hoti thi k koi gana bhi nhi yaad ata tha k wahi likh doon😛😆...ohh ghar par jab sher learning mood on hota tha tu mein unchi unchi awaz mein parh kar yaad karti thi n tht time my family literally use to beg me to stop torturing thm😛..aur jab friends ko sunay lagti tu kahein ka sher kahein mila deti n thy wud beg me to stop my useless attempts to get the correct one out🤪...Learning Sher was never my cup of tea...n whenever i look at ur Terrific pieces i feel embarrssed.

U r hell Talented Bro!👏👏...An Incredible one⭐️⭐️

Now coming to the song...

Ohh..m all flattered!...Beautifully Penned!👏...so loved it!❤️

So apt for Shravan and it totally suited him as wel as the siuation..plus his emotions were Brilliantly expressed!⭐️

Cudnt really pinpoint the best stanza as i loved each one of thm equally...but the lines i loved the most are...

Nazron ke aage hote hue

Hum Tum banenge yun Ajnabi

Jis dosti par tha Gumaan

Haq woh Adaa kar na sake...

These lines just made me say UFF...Fabtabulous one..indeed⭐️

Reading according to Shravan's prespective made ur hardwork worth it..wakai har maeina mein yay ussi k leay likha gaya hai...So brilliantly penned!👏

You literally stole my heart❤️