MG FF -- Meri Jaan - Part 19 - Pg 86, 21/10/2017 - Page 41

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very cute story...

but banner mein Pari ko dekh kar and Pari wanted same dress as Geet I doubt whether pari will try to take Geet's place in future...
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Today I read all the episode's together
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All elders played with children's life
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Originally posted by: ns.1

Nice teaser.Eagerly waiting for the update 😛


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interesting teaser. .update soon



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Originally posted by: saro

Our little geet is too cute... poor maan has to pacify her ... good job


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Part 17



Maan and Geet come from school and entered in KM, where Geet ran for their room(Maaneet room) too much angry with Maan. Maan seeing her running. Saw no one is in Mansion today, so he asked Nakul(Servant) that where is his mom and Dadi


Maan : Nakul kaka mom kaha pe hai ?


Nakul : Ji chotey shaheb woh...shopping pe gaye hai, thodi der mein he ajayengi


Maan : Aur Dadi


Nakul : Ji woh apne kisi dost se milne gayi hai




Maan nodded his head then slowly left for his room where his Sherni already present, he actually don't know why she turn angry so much ... pipped his head saw her sitting with gloomy face thinking something so he enter and tiptoe goes close to her...Putting his hand on her shoulder, she instantly jerk that and make a pouting face looking so cute with her red nose.


Maan : Umm...Geet



But she gave angry look like indicates him keep silent, she is too much angry. Tapping her one foot on the floor puts her both hands below her chest looking at him with her puppy eyes that is now red in anger pouting lips like complaining him and her nose turn red because of continues sneezing as she cried after he scolded her front of her best friend



Geet : HOW DARE YOU SCOLD ME THAT TO FRONT OF MY FRIEND...BEST FRIEND
screaming on top of her lungs...with her eyes closed, because she drains all her energy with this then open her hazel again giving him her famous angry look


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Priya : Nakul...Nakul
she come from shopping , her both hands is full with bags, Nakul came running , she handover all the stuffs to him ...he was about to leave

Priya : Bacche agaye ?


Nakul : Ji madam





She left towards Maaneet room want to know how's their day went

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Maaneet room




Entering Maaneet room she stood like a statue seeing the scene, Maan sitting on his bed both of his hands on his head , and both of his legs dangling on the floor. Geet one by one take all her clothes from the cupboard and putting all that in one bag...she is looking at her Bahu(Geet) face she seems angry so much...make a confused yet smiling face she come forward to asking what happened with her suddenly





Priya : Geet bete aap yeh kya kar rahi hai ?
Asked in wonder




Geet : Mai ghar chod k ja rahi hu...humesha humesha k liye




Shocked nothing to describe pasting on Priya's face... then turn to Maan or say giving her angry look but he is giving puppy look like saying he didn't do anything





Priya : Par bete achanak aisa kya ho gaya ...joh aapne ghar chodne ka faisla le liya ?




Sabitri Devi also come to from her friend place and Heard conversation from upstairs Maaneet room so she also goes towards Maaneet room.





Geet : Inhone mujhe purey school mein sabke samne danta
pointed her index finger at Maan who is now nodded his head with no vigorously





Geet : Jhoot mat boliye mom k samne , aapne nahi danta mujhe Aruhi k samne ?
like warned him making her eyes big like want to scared him ...he gulped his saliva




There Priya trying hard to control her smile so as Dadima who is now standing there Maaneet's room door




Geet : Mom aap sunn rahi ho na ?
With pouting




Priya : Haan...haan bete , hum Maan ki achhi khabar lenge aab... dekhna
make serious face


Geet nodded with smile and teasing him


Priya : Maan say sorry to your wife now...
she command




Maan : But mom...




Priya : I said say sorry
she didn't listen




He nodded helplessly then murmur sorry, but Geet is now in her Devil's mood





Geet : Kya kaha suna nahi...aur jod se bolo...
she is taping her ears like she didn't heard anything




Maan : I said I'm sorry
louder then before




Geet : Huhh
making innocent face still behaving like didn't heard




Maan : I SAID I'M SORRY...
his scream filled with whole Mansion making everyone puts their hands on their ears.






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Handa Mansion

Ranu : Aiye pandit ji , humne kitne khabar bhijwaye par aapka koi jawab nahi aya, aap itney dino kaha thy.
..she asked their famil's old priest who is now come from his Yatra. Took blessings from him so as Mohindar and Pari




Pandit ji : Jeeti raho...khush raho, mai yehi batane yeha pe aya hu. Maine tumhari choti beti Geet ki kundali dekhi phirse , ushmey manglik dosh toh hai lekin...


Their breath struck...

Ranu : Lekin Kya Pandit ji ?
With fear then looking at Mohindar who is also not less then



Pandit ji : Woh Manglik dosh taal jata hai agar woh baccha Manglbar ko janam leta ho.




Now everything stopped to hearing that revolution






Pandit ji : If a Manglik is born on a Tuesday, the negative effect of Manglik Dosha gets cancelled.




Mohindar : Nahi yeh nahi ho sakta ...yeh nahi ho sakta




Ranu : Haan yehi sach hai, humne apni hatho se apni bacchi ki zindegi barbad kar di



Mohindar : Humari Geet
only whisper. Pandit ji feels something went wrong so he asked later they told everything make him shocked of their foolishness. Feeling Disappointed he shakes his head then told solution and left from there...




Precap :

Char dino ka pyar o rabba ...
Badi lambi judaai...lambi judaai


MG

Edited by MGMahika - 8 years ago


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