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'''Some Manly Talks'''



A big thanks to ''Srilotus'' my dear friend who motivated me so much to start writing again and here I am writing again after so long
Thanks Buddy

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After kidnapping the mobile he instantly dialed his favorite uncle's no...
Hello BigCha...Golu spoke twisting his lips...

Junior tu ab tak jaag raha hai soya nahi????...came Dev's voice from the other side...
Bedtime story ke bina kaisey so jayon BigCha...please jaldi se story sunao na mujhey ...


Arey golu what happened tu, tu apni badi dadi(Ishwari) se story sun'ney waley tha na???...

Oho BigCha badi dadi is so boring wo tu story bhi hamesha "Once there was a Raja Beta" wali sunati hai...very boring story bilkul badi dadi ke jaisi...he moved his head in disliking...urrrggghhh...
Chacho badi dadi ne apne school me bus "Raja Beta" wali hi story pardhi hai kya???...aur stories unko aati hi nahi hain...mujhey tu lagta hai badi dadi bhi meri tarah school me fail ho jati ho gi...


And next all golu could hear was Dev's laughter...
Kya hua chachu...aap itna laughing laughing kyun kar rahey ho???...


Golu teri badi dadi ka na aik secret hai...
Kaisa secret BigCha????...

Unke pass na aik khilona tha...khilona samajhta haina matlab toy ...aur uss khiloney I mean toy ka naam tha "Raja Beta" teri badi dadi uss se bohat shauq se khelti thi but phir aik din wo ghum gaya aur badi dadi sad hogayi...issi liye teri badi dadi hamesha sab se ussi ''Raja Beta'' ki baat karti rehti hai...


Zaroor ''Raja Beta''hi badi dadi se bore ho ke kahin bhaag gaya hoga...ufff she is sooo boring...
Anyways BigCha please na aap bhi unki baat kar ke pakao mat ...(waisey bhi wo show main bohat irritate karti hai sab ko)...


Haan I know golu...chal tujhey story sunata hoon...


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Next morning


BigCha main happling lag raha hoon na????...Golu came to Dev setting his hair with both hands...
Haan golu tu bohat happening lag raha hai aik dum happening gunda lag raha hai aur aisa hi dhikna bhi chahiye...


BigCha iss ka matlab aap bhi roz happling gundey jaisa dikhtey ho???...


Dev smirked...

Haan bilkul golu boys ko happening gunda hi lagna chahiye...warna girls unhein xiada bao nahi deti...unko bechara samajhti hain...aur issi liye tere BigCha bhi aisey hi dikhtey hain...


BigCha papa kehtey hain ke wo bhi pehley aap ke jaisey dress kartey they...tu kya papa bhi happening gunda lagtey they???...


Golu tu sawal bohat achey pochta hai...Dev appreciated his sense of humour...
Batao na BigCha papa bhi lagtey they happening gunda???...
Happening ka tu pata nahi golu... par haan terey papa gunda zaroor lagtey they...


Hehehe Bigcha..aap ko pata hai papa na villain wala gunda lagtey hain aur aap hero type gunda...
Golu tu na bohat badmash hogaya hai... chal tujhey terey school drop kar doon...


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On the way


Acha sun golu...aik baat tu bata...
Konsi baat BigCha???...


Tu roz itna happening lagta hai...girlfriends tu bohat banayi hongi tu ne school me????...
Golu's face dropped at this question...
Arey tera chehra aisey kyun latak gaya????...Dev questioned him...


Golu came near Dev's ear and whispered...Boys secret kisi ko batana mat..ok???...
Ok done...nahi bataon ga but tu mujhey tu bata...
Tu suno...meri na abhi tak aik bhi girlfriend nahi hai...he said innocently shaking his hand...


Suddenly the car came to a halt...
Kya baat kar raha hai golu...roz tujhey itni tips deta hoon girls pataney ki aur phir bhi no girlfriend???...
Yes BigCha phir bhi no girlfriend...golu said making a pout...


Aisa kyun???...Dev tried to investigate...
Because of ex-GKB wali dadi...wo kehti hain good boys girls se friendship nahi kartey...girls achi nahi hoti...


Aik tu ex-GKB mami ji bhi na...
Golu giggled...waisey BigCha dadi khud ko pehley GKB aur ab ex-GKB kyun bolti hai???...
Good question Golu...
Tune dekha tu hoga na ke jaise logon ki promotion hoti hai issi tara tu samajh le teri dadi ki bhi promotion hogayi hai pehley wo GKB (gareeb ki beti) thi ab wo ex-GKB (gareeb ki beti) hain ...
BigCha mujhey lagta hai dadi ke pass ''axe'' scent hai issi liye wo apney name ke pehley axe bolti hai...


Oh God Golu...Dev hold his head in his hands...
Kya hua BigCha... aap ne bhi dadi ko papa ka axe scent uthatey huye dekha hai kya???...
Nahi golu mujhey teri baat se shock laga hai...
Kyun BigCha????...


Mujhey lagta hai tujhey sach main english pardhani pardhey gi ab ...teri dadi apney name ke saath ''axe scent'' wala ''axe'' nahi lagati woh ''ex wala''...''ex'' lagati hai jis ka matlab hota hai ''former'' ''pehley ka'' ya ''purana''...
Matlab dadi pehley se hi purani GKB hai???...


And this made Dev burst into laughter...
Golu Golu Golu...tu kya cheez hai yaar...
He side-hugged golu and placed a kiss on his head ...
Agar tu nahi hota tu pata nahi tere BigCha ka kya hota...


Aur chachu agar aap nahi hotey tu pata nahi mera kya hota...he said curving his lips into a smileand hugging back Dev...


Sahi bola Golu agar hum aik dosrey ke liye nahi hotey tu zindagi kitni muskhil hoti na...Dev whispered tightening the hug...


Looking at your face for the first time I knew that I had fallen in love with you
Your innocent eyes and your sweet smile is enough for both of us




THE END





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Anjali333 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
So cute OS
Golu bigcha bonding is my favorite
Love it😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali333

So cute OS

Golu bigcha bonding is my favorite
Love it😊

Thank u dear😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww that's so cute but kya dev golu ko bigaad nahi raha? itna laad bhi accha nahi homework bhi karne nahi deta
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww ..that was so cute
Love it
Golu having chat ...manly chat with Dev...
mujhe aisa laga jaise yeh story mere ankhon ke samne chal rahi hai and m watching them .
This is that good

Thanks Meera for writing such a cute OS on KRPK.
So, u r watching this serial from the beginning as u said kitna Ishu ne humein irritate kiya hai...pehle toh raja beta ne bhi dukhi kar diya tha ...ab utna hi khush kiya hai..(season 2)

Ok maine koi motivate nahi kiya...call me selfish...main itni achhi writer khona nahi chahti thi ...plz aur likho...bohot clarity hai in ur writing.

oh isliye poll banaya tha ki whose is more cute...nice one.

Thanks once again...ab toh main samjh lun na that u have started writing again...aur humein fictions read karne ko milenge...

Thanks for the pm dear.
sa1234B thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely OS...soo sweet & funny👏
Even i luv ur writing...Do write more often
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic OS

Just loved every bit of it
Gayu_K thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so cute yaar
Golu bigcha are my fav pair after devakshi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was really cute. Loved it.
I was actually visualising Bigcha and golu doing all those antics and making fun of everyone. 😆

That raja beta punch, Axe GKB were superb and the best was tere papa gunda zaror lagte the and villain wale. 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Os soo cute... Do write more..

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