The Phone call- A PriVeer SS(ft.Oberoi siblings)[updated on 27th April

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The Phone call


Soumya just finished her last paratha and was now wondering what to do next so that... when suddenly she collided with Rudra and her phone fell down. She mumbled a slow sorry without even looking at him. This enraged him. She quickly grabbed her phone and started checking if all was right or not. When she started to walk past him,he said "don't you disturb your phone too much? Sumo, see you were too busy to look at the next thing u were to hit". Laughing out a little he resumed teasing her saying-"It's good that it was me so you are
saved from the guilt of injuring a person". She didn't looked at him and continued to look at her phone screen. This irked Rudra him a bit more. "I can bet, you didn't even let the poor thing take its breakfast as I saw u continuously looking at it while you were having your own food. Bechare phone ne bhi kya phooti kismat payi hai". Saying that he nodded his head sideways to look sad and smiled at her. But still she paid him no attention and left him to wonder Subah subah kiss k call ka intezaar hai isko ki yeh meri taraf Dekhi bhi nahi!! He continued thinking regarding this sudden change in her behavior and bumped into Shivaay, who was busy with his own line of thoughts to sort out the matter at the earliest possible. He couldn't wait any longer. For the past 4 days he did everything he could do but... he failed? He ? Shivaay Singh Oberoi failed not one but 6 times!! However Anika asked him not to become a pessimist. So again he started his work. It amazed SSO to some extent, that he can't deny. As someone so different yet so similar in some ways had this effect upon him.
Meanwhile, Priyanka checked her phone for the 3rd time in 10 mins to find no new message or call to her dismay. She pondered over giving another call or message. But was unsure as to what will that person think of her. Already the call log revealed how important it is for her. "But why wasn't he responding to her calls and texts?" she mulled over. She calmed down muttering "Prinku relax!!! Everything is going to be fine!! Patience Prinku, patience!!".Suddenly her phone ranged. Guessing it to be him, she accepted the call and was about to speak out, when she was stopped by the male voice from the other end asking her if she wants to activate a dialer tone pack at Rs. 180 only? He went on mentioning the other benefits to her as she started declining gently. She ended the call as the caller annoyed her. But the voice was hell bent on making her accept the offer with its infinite benefits, understanding his motives she said yes and was rewarded back with the call ended information being flashed after. She quickly checked her phone now to find if that person for whom he was waiting for last 3 hrs has called back or replied, but to her dismay, none from that person. This anxiety was killing her. She thought of calling from a new number, to find what's the matter with him. After
hearing Jhanvi's & Pinky's repeated calls for the breakfast, she finally left her room.
Finishing her food quickly, she came back only to be excited with a message from that person. She fumed over the message,
it wasn't even a complete word! Just one alphabet asking- y?
This is my first OS with Shivaay and
RuMya. I don't know how it is. Don't forget to let me know with your likes and comments about this. Forgive my typing errors and etc😃 I will include other couples as well gradually but the focal point would be on PriVeer Happy reading.
Chapter 1- Above
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter-6
Chapter-7
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Intriguing. ..
Looking forward to more
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Haha haha! Oh my goodness! This was beautiful! Absolutely loved it! The way you linked one character to another was simply superb! Perfect balance of cuteness and comedy. Please write more!
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wow!! its very gud but i wanna know wht happens next. plz continue it.
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Originally posted by: bworm

Intriguing. ..

Looking forward to more

Thank you bworm! I'm happy u found it intriguing 😃
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Originally posted by: twerping

Haha haha! Oh my goodness! This was beautiful! Absolutely loved it! The way you linked one character to another was simply superb! Perfect balance of cuteness and comedy. Please write more!

Thanks Twerps!! I'm glad to find, u loved this one. This was based on the initial episodes of Ishqbaaz dear.So,here ACP was still in the good books of Prinku. Rudra has just started to like Soumya and for Shivaay, u know Anika had always some effect on him 😃. Initially they used to show all the characters. I'm not sure whether I would be able to continue it further or not. But whenever something strikes apt, I will try to put here😉
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Thanks Mystic River 😃! I'm happy to know u found it interesting.
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Aww, this was really good. It was cute and funny. You're an excellent writer, so everything you write is definitely worth my time 😊😊
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Originally posted by: starbright9

wow!! its very gud but i wanna know wht happens next. plz continue it.

Hi Shiyana!
Thank u dear. I'm really unable to say whether it would be continued or not, coz it was based on the initial episodes of Ishqbaaz. But yes! if I find something, I would try to put here 😉. OK?
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Hello Harini!
I'm very happy to know u found it interesting 😊.

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