Ravish- Ab Waada Nibhaane Ka Waqt Aagaya Hai.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yes Ravish. Aaj Waada Nibhane Ka Waqt Aagaya.
That Promise Which You Gave To That Girl.
That Girl Who Has Insulted You Everytime.
That Girl Who Has Trampled Your Heart Under Her Feets..Not Once But Many Times
That Girl Who Didnt Respected The Relation In Which You Two Were Bound Together.
That Girl Who Called Your Commitment..Your One Wish..Your Relation With Her.. As 'Bediya'
That Girl.
And You Fulfilled That Promise.
With A Smile On Your Face And Your Head Held High!😊
But Wait.
Whats Wrong With That Smile Of Yours?
Are You Hurt?
Yes?
No?
Ofcourse Your Eyes Were Speaking For You.
And It Was Saying.."I Am Letting You Go..For Your Happiness..But It Hurts"
And That Smile..Half Sad..Half Happy..
Half Sad?
Letting Her Go Was Not Easy..It Was Tough..
Tough On You..Your First Love..Your First Feelings..Your First Smile..
You Bore Her Every Behaviour..Your Bore Her Taunts..You Bore Her Accussations..You Bore The Pain She Gave You..
Yet You Loved Her Even Then And Now..Selflessly..Without Any Terms And Conditions!
And Today..That String Which She Called As Bediya...You Took It Off..
It Was A Thorn..And You Pricked Your Hands. With A Smile. That Smile Which Was Happy For Her. But Sad For Yourself..Because Only You Knew Whats The Meaning Of Letting Go.
You First Broke Her Bangles Why?
Because She Was Wearing It On Your Name?
So You Broke It?
Just Like You Broke Your Heart..
You Slowly Broken Them..Just Like How You Broke Your Heart..For Her.. Slowly..Slowly..Crushing It Into Pieces And Then Finally Broke It And Allowed It To Fall.. Just Like Your Heart Ravish..Just Like Your Heart !
How Can You Play With Your Heart Like This? Oh Yes. You Can. Because When You Love..You Love Unconditionally. And Its How You Are..
You Dont Go And Give Heavy Lectures To Others About What You Stand For And What Your Thinking Is. You Just Go. Silently. And Do Your Work. And Reply Only When Its Required.
And Your Silence? Its Not Your Weakness. Its Your Strength. That Strength Which Not Everyone Possess.
But Its Bitter Sweet In Its Own Way..
And Thats Your Beauty And Your Most Attractive Quality..
You Were Half Happy?
Because You Fulfilled Your Promise.
Because You Were Giving Her The Freedom Which She Was Screaming For
Because You Were Uniting Two Lovers..
But What About You?
What Were You Doing To Yourself..?
You Were Clearly In Pain To Know That The Person You Loved Was Calling Your Relation With Her As Bediya..It Was Painful To Know The Person You Love Didnt Wanted To Stay With You..
And Freeing Her Was The Only Option You Had..And You Chose Her Feelings Above Yours..
And See Now You Are Gone..
Away From That Girl..
Away From That House..
Away From That Room..

But Will You Be Able To Go Away From Her Memories?
From Her Smile?
From Her Silly Talk?
From The Feelings She Evoked In You?
From The Emotions That You Felt Fir The First Time?
From Everything That Reminded You Of Her?

CAN YOU? NOW?

So Dont Even Pretend To Smile. And Say Everything Is Fine.
Things Are Fine But Not Everything.
Atleast Not In Your Case!
So Dont Even Try To Hide Those Feelings From Yourself!

You Were Having Those Flashbacks? Why?
Because It Was A Beautiful Memory? Or Because That Day Gave You So Much Of Pain?
No Matter How Hard You Try To Forget Them.. It Will Remain With You..

Your Eyes Showed The Burnt You Have Recieved At Her Hands. The Brutality Of Her Words Have Stuck Back In Your Mind That It Will Take A Long Time To Heal Them..
Your Eyes Spoke "Out Of All The People Who Could Have Ripped Me Into Shreds, Why Does It Had To Be You? Why Vividha?"

Her Words Were Fire..Which Burnt Your Every Part!
She Has Ripped You Apart With Her Words And Left You There To Bleed..

And See You Are Bleeding With That Half Forced Smile On Your Face..For Her! And For Your Brother.. And For Your Dead Father!
And She? Just Looking At You..Thats It..

But Its Okay Ravish. You Did What She Was Asking You To..
Just Take Care..And One Day Your Broken Smile Will Turn Into Beautiful Happy Smile..And It Will Be Worth Your Wait..ONE DAY!

P.S.- Buri Nazar Waale Mere Post Se Ho Kaale. Lol. I Am Justt Jokingg. Dont Bother To Comment Here. If You Did You Will Be ROYALLY IGNORED By Me! And Ravishians/RaVidhians Just Ignore If They Comment!😳
P.S.S.- Saaru. This Post Is Especially For You!😳
Edited by Shanky-Ki-Biwi. - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Me first was waiting 4 this lemme read😉
UNres😳

First Thank U SKB🤗 for dedicating a post on this forum for the first time to ME😲🥳Others pls dnt get Jealous🤣

Excellent wordings dr👏 Just loved it👍🏼

The below sentence just showed how much pain R has hidden in his heart👍🏼

Your Eyes Spoke "Out Of All The People Who Could Have Ripped Me Into Shreds, Why Does It Had To Be You? Why Vividha?"

Voh sab kuch seh saktha tha but yeh toh sabse badi chot hogi uskeliye aur sabse bade chot hi hai q ki ab tak voh bass andher hi andher apna dard daba dabake chal raha hai & he is fine with it bcz he is an army officer who knws to tackle with such unfair conditions...👏 Way for new missions😃 As U said One Day... He will get wat he deserves😈

PS: ek spelling check de rahi hu tereko 😆 Its "Bediya" not "Beriya"😉

PPS: U knw wat I was a superactive mem on NAUC forum & na janne teri DP dekhkar aur tere UN "Hell Heaven" waali dekhkar muje aisa laga ki tu NAUC forum kabhi aayi hai...😆 Aisa kuch hua tha q ki tere PS made me rem my PS q ki I used to write "bure nazarwale tera muh kala" on my posts🤣
Edited by SaruSenan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb post.
I want to see him smile. Want to see him happy.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's hard to bring a genuine smile on that face back.. But yet we can expect a fake smile of his that the whole world know is a fake one he's using to hide his pain... Really hoping for a girl who will be the cure for his pain..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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subi...what a powerful post. ravish is only person does not talk much...but whn he says something he makes it true.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Jannu👏👏⭐️
Waah u are really a Shanky/Ravish ki biwi... Awesome.. now words

The pain, anger, frustration, love, sadness everything of Ravish ..U explained was awesome..⭐️👏

He is man of his words...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Subi No one can beat you while putting Ravish's character and his feelings in words ❤️Excellent post
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I can say nothing better than this.He endured alll the pain and came out as a winner.Don't even have words to add to your post Subi.So I will put that adorable smile/smirk/expression whatever it was,which I was talking about in Update...


Khurafati dimaag mein jo haansi chalti hai wo ye hota hai...Jaab you can see future and see whats gonna happen next then log aise smirk karte hai...When you are expecting some pachka faces then aisi expression nikalti hai...And isse pyari and adorable satisfied face se achcha kuch ho bhi nehi sakta...

Bhai kal tune mereko mara,aaj to tu soch bhi nehi saakta main tere saath kya karne wala hun...Kamal hai banda...😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Subi,I have lost all words,how to appreciate this post!But yes Ravish I have started Loving you Millions time more than before!You are truely a Hero,a Selfless guy and the Modern day Lord Ram!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Me first was waiting 4 this lemme read😉

UNres😳

First Thank U SKB🤗 for dedicating a post on this forum for the first time to ME😲🥳Others pls dnt get Jealous🤣

Excellent wordings dr👏 Just loved it👍🏼

The below sentence just showed how much pain R has hidden in his heart👍🏼

Your Eyes Spoke "Out Of All The People Who Could Have Ripped Me Into Shreds, Why Does It Had To Be You? Why Vividha?"

Voh sab kuch seh saktha tha but yeh toh sabse badi chot hogi uskeliye aur sabse bade chot hi hai q ki ab tak voh bass andher hi andher apna dard daba dabake chal raha hai & he is fine with it bcz he is an army officer who knws to tackle with such unfair conditions...👏 Way for new missions😃 As U said One Day... He will get wat he deserves😈

PS: ek spelling check de rahi hu tereko 😆 Its "Bediya" not "Beriya"😉

PPS: U knw wat I was a superactive mem on NAUC forum & na janne teri DP dekhkar aur tere UN "Hell Heaven" waali dekhkar muje aisa laga ki tu NAUC forum kabhi aayi hai...😆 Aisa kuch hua tha q ki tere PS made me rem my PS q ki I used to write "bure nazarwale tera muh kala" on my posts🤣


Saaruu..🤗
THAAANKK YOUU.😳
😳*blushing*😳
@bold 100% APT !👏
He Will Feel Everything..Every Pain..Yet He Will Smile Like Nothing Has Happened!
HE IS A BOSS!😉
aOiiooo..I Will Edit Mann!😆🥱
Oye Meri Hindi. Bechara Bezzat Hojata Hai Mere Haathon!😆
NAUC? Kon Sa Forum Hai Yeh?😕
HAHAHA! Yaha Post Kyu Nahi Banati MF Par ?
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