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CHARACTER SKETCH:

ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte-an arrogant man, full of attitude, has a big ego and does not think twice before doing something or saying whether in personal and professional life (was a very nice person,always smiling and happy person was best friend of Sameer but after meeting Roshni he changed for worse)<I will tell the past later>

He treats Sameer just as a colleage and chief now but secretly wishes to rekindle his relationship with him but ego problem, Age 26

ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathor-Chief of ETF, very strict just like Arjun, has also attitude problem but very nice to his colleagues (very rarely) unlike Arjun and does not trust people easily like before (after Roshni) <they broke their friendship 6years ago (after Arjun's entry a month ago,he became more strict)Age 26

Riya Mukherjee-age 25, a very nice girl, always smiling lives her life fully +she is a little sensitive, best friends with Shree (since childhood),Chotu,Ayesha and Liza(recently) and lives with Shree and Chotu because she does not have any family in Mumbai <her mom and dad are not alive,she was only 10 when they died in a car accident,no one in the ETF knows except for Shree> a research specialist, knows martial-arts,sometimes goes undercover,trying to learn how to shoot,she has only 2 problems<she can not hear anything bad about her parents and she does not like when people underestimate her


Ayesha Kapoor-Age 25, an undercover agent and ammunition expert,comes from a wealthy family(only child), but she wanted to do something for her nation after her graduation,so she joined the Police force,her dadu and nanu supported her decision but not her dad <he wanted her to help him in the business,but she wanted to be like her dadu(ex commissior of lucknow)and nanu(ex DCP of Delhi) >her mom only wants her happiness.After a showdown with her father she went to Delhi with her nanu and nani to become a police officer and later she was appointed in ETF<after the Nadia episode>Now best friend with Shree,Chotu,Liza and Riya.


Shreekant Sen-Age 24,childhood friend of Riya
best friend with Chotu,Ayesha and Liza (always fighting with each other without any good reason since college) knows everything about Riya and treats her like his elder sister,his family live in Calcutta <how he met Riya and became friends will be told later >he is a technical expert,always busy with gadgets and stuff,he is a very sweet guy cares for his friends, he met Chotu after joining ETF, Riya joined a few months later and became friends with them and later Ayesha and Liza except for the ACP's


Chandrakant Patil- a commando and an encounter specialist,they say looks are deceiving this sentence was made for him that's what Riya and Shree say,because eventough he is very tall and has very big muscles he is very sensitive, sweet and caring, loves Riya,Ayesha and Liza as his sisters
Age 26,loves his 11:30 wali <his dad worked as clerk in a minister office and mom supplied tiffenboxes for schools,while he worked parttime in a pizza store to pay for his studies.After graduation he joined the police force and made his parents proud> his parents live in Delhi,he shares an apartment with Shree and Riya,only weakness FOOD mostly when it is made by Riya or his mom, he is very strict when it comes to criminals. everyone calls him Chotu.

Liza D'Cruz-age 24,forensic expert,best friend with Riya,Ayesha,Chotu and Shree (they have been fighting without any specific reason since college and are still doing it) has friends but not very close ones,her parents are both doctors,live in Dehradun and are very supportive with her choice of profession,she has only one close friend

<When she first met Shree they began to fight with each other because he accidently spilled a chemical potion on her favorite dress.he did not wanted to say sorry because she was the one that was not looking where she was going and so began a Tom-Jerry relationship>When she came in ETF she made real friends because she knew she can trust them with her life even Shree


Roshni Mehta-will tell later(feel free to imagine any actress as Roshni)

Sikander-will tell later

Mr Sameer Mukherjee-father of Riya

Mrs Meenakshi Mukherjee-mother of Riya

11:30wali: Rukshar Najma Khan- age, 24. doctor for ETF team members, she recently opened a clinic next to the ETF hq, she is sometimes very shy but can be very witty and bubbly at times, loves to cook and shop for groceries, likes to talk with people she is comfortable with and has feelings for Chotu. she lives with her brother and sister-in-law

Commisioner Coelho

And now for the Angel:?

SAKSHI- Riya's sister who is her angel her guardian, she is bubbly, a very nice girl always smiling but has powers which she uses when she wants, she has 4 missions and she is currently working in ETF, her best friend is M who is also an guardian who lives also on earth and her mentorji from heaven helps her from time to time. she works in ETF as a crime reporter, her friends are Riya, Ayesha, Liza, Shree and Chotu, she is the only one who is not afraid of Samjun well second Riya is not afraid of Arjun anymore, age 21

Siddhart Kapoor- Ayesha's cousin and best friend since childhood, he is sweet and kind and a romantic person, he doesnt have a ego but he loves to think he knows everything but he meets his challenge Sakshi who always confuses him, he used to work in the army as a commando recently transferred to ETF for a special mission which involve Riya and Samjun, age 27, lives with Arjun who doesnt likes him


Manvi Sen- Shree's twin sister, age 24. she knows everything about technology and likes to make new gadgets and invent stuff just like Shree, is only sensitive when it's about Riya or her past with Virat (gets angry at this part), lives with Choreeiya. she used to work with Ayesha's brother Sid in the army, she used to the technical support there as an intern and then went on to work with the CBI where she met Virat with whom she a bickering relationship even worse then Shriza's

Virat Vadhera- age 27, ammunition expert and undercover agent, a harmless flirt but doesnt cross his limits. he went to the same academy as Ayesha, he was a senior. he is Liza's childhood friend, his parents are both lawyers, he can be nice and sweet but when he is with Manvi, they both start fighting, he used to work for the CBI, he has sometimes ego problem, currently he lives with Sameer who doesnt like him at all

More characters will be added as the story continues

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THREAD 1 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4183787

THREAD 2 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4361185


Chapter 47 c- page 2
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happy new year everyone, new year new thread
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CHAPTER 47c

S: if everything is done here, we should go back, let's go (to Akhil) don't worry mr. Akhil we will surely get the culprit

Akh: please sir, I hope you will find the culprit soon otherwise I am in big trouble

S: don't worry, if we get anything we will call you and if you find anything important useful for the case, inform us

Akh: yes sir, I will

They left from there; this time Riya and Sid went with Sameer much dismay of Arjun, Sakshi and Ayesha with Arjun much dismay of Sid and Sameer

Meanwhile Chotu was enjoying his first date with Rukshar (well if you call shopping for groceries a date)

They were eating some gol gappa's when Chotu got a call from his informer, he excused himself and went to talk to on the phone

Ch: bolo, did you find anything?

Inf: solid khabar hai, Chotu boss. They are planning to sell the painting today at midnight at the ABC Street and they are currelny looking for buyers and if it's not sold tonight they will sell it overseas

Ch: are you sure?

Inf: yes, bolo toh ek dum sach (it's the truth)

Ch: ok, then keep up the good work, we will send your reward very soon

Inf: ok boss

They cut the call

Chotu went to Rukshar and told her:

We should go back; I have to report something to the sirs

Ruk: ok

Ch: sorry, we have to rush, if there wasn't a case, I would happily be here with you to help with your shopping but ... (Making a pouting face)

Ruk: works come first, I know. Most of the shopping is done, will do the rest later, toh chale?

Ch: ek minute (one minute) let me call Shree

Ruk: ok

Chotu called Shree

Sh: bolo Chotu

Ch: where are you? I got big news

Sh: we almost at the office

Ch: kya? (Shouting)

Sh: pagal hogaya hai kya? (Have you gone crazy) why are you shouting?

Ch: I am dead meat; I am not at the office

Sh: kya? I think you really got crazy, oh no. we already reached the office

Ch: kya?

Sh: come quickly and apologize, warna you're dead meat

Ch: just try to handle it, I will be there soon (after cutting the call) we have to hurry, the whole team is almost at the office, if Arjun sir and Sameer sir find out I am really dead

Ruk: don't worry, I will tell them that it's my fault

Ch: no, I will handle it, you don't worry, I will be ok but for now let's go

Ruk: ok

They left for ETF office

Meanwhile the team had reached the office and went inside the conference room

S: where is Chotu?

Shree was tring to hide when suddenly Sameer asked the question; he was biting his nails not knowing what to say

R: wait, I will call him. Chotu, where are you? (She looked in all the cabins) weird, he usually is in the canteen or in the cabin

L: maybe he went to get a snack; I am going to check the evidence in my lab

Sa: I will come with you too

L: cool (thinking this is the chance to talk to Sakshi)

Ma: me too

Sameer nodded and the three went to the lab

Ay: maybe he just went next door

Sid: who knows?

S: Shree, call Chotu

Sh (gulped): sir? Call? Chotu?

S: don't you understand, get your phone out of your pocket and call Chotu

Sh: yyy...yes sir, will do sir (tries to call)

Riya: I will go and bring some sandwiches; we didn't eat lunch

Vir: I will come with you

R: ok

They went to the canteen while Arjun looked at them go, so he tried to follow them but SAmeer stopped him

S: and where are you going?

A (tried to come with a lie): me... washroom

S: but washroom is in your cabin

A: I was going to ...

He couldn't complete his sentence because then Chotu came in running with bags full of groceries and Rukshar was behind him also running and panting

S: Chotu, where were you and why is doctor Rukshar with you?

Ch: woh... she... Me (out of breath)

Seeing that Sameer was busy with Chotu, Arjun slipped away to the canteen

In the canteen Riya was busy putting the sandwiches on a plate while Virat was putting coffee in cups

V: how many coffee cups?

R: everyone expect for Sakshi and Arjun sir, Sakshi drinks tea and Arjun sir drinks cutting chai from the small tea stall outside, here is the number, call them and they will bring for him

V: ok (he took her mobile and went to call)

Arjun saw Riya talking and hid behind the door to listen what she was saying

Riya didn't realize Virat was gone so she kept on talking while amkign tea for Sakshi

R: I know what you think cutting chai, I couldn't believe either, I always thought it was unhygienic, because I wanted to know how it tasted so I tried drinking it once when the delivery boy came with his chai, it wasn't that bad but Arjun sir saw me with his cutting chai and he took it and glared at me and drank the whole cup before I could tell him that I drank from it but then it was too late. I think I should have told him right?

She turned around only to find Arjun who was looking at her dumbfounded

R: s..s.ssir a...a..aap? Where is Virat? (She looked around but she didn't see him) want a sandwich?

She handed him the plate with sandwiches hoping he didn't hear anything

After looking at he noticed that she wasn't looking at him he smirked and said:

Well, Miss Mukherjee, I don't know what to say, was the cutting chai that tasty?

R: uhhh...

A: maybe that's why the taste was different that day, I will take one sandwich

He took one sandwich and left from there leaving Riya there who stood with her mouth open from shock

R: what's wrong with Arjun sir? Really weird, he is weird here and he was also weird in the store room

Virat saw the whole thing but decided not to tell anyone for now; he went in the canteen and said:

Riya, I think we should go and give the sandwiches and coffee to the rest of the team members

Riya came out of her trance and nodded, they went in the conference room where SAmeer was scolding Chotu and Rukshar who were standing with their heads down, they put the sandwiches and drinks on the table and went to stand next to Ayesha

S: I told you to stay here didn't I say that? What if a big thing happened at the office and you weren't there

Ch: yes sir, sorry sir but...

S: and doctor Rukshar you just joined the ETF force even if it's not directly but you should know what to do and what not to do

Ruk: I am sorry sir it's my fault

S: that's it, you guys must be punished, but I can't give any punishment to you doctor but that means Chotu will do it in your place

Ruk: but sir it was my fault

Sid: he was only away for a while

S: he has to know the consequences, from now one you will wash both of SUV and will clean around here, oh Rawte you are here (noticed Arjun in the corner), and you were going to the washroom what happened?

A: nothing just came from there

Riya in her mind: liar

Virat in his mind: smooth lying bro

Ay: but sir he didn't do anything wrong

S: Miss Ayesha Kapoor, I know he is your friend but still rules are rules, so Rawte are you going to give more punishment to him? You don't like people other than you breaking rules right? (Sarcastically)

A: me? Give punishment to Chotu? (He began thinking)

Shree was thinking: Chotu is now in bigger trouble

Ayesha was thinking: oh no

Riya was thinking: if he gives him more punishment I will really make him suffer

Rukshar was thinking: oh please no

Sid was thinking: this is bad

Virat was thinking: this is really new to me, only second day and so much drama, omg

But what ARjun said next shocked everyone:

I think this punishment is enough, but don't touch my SUV, you can wash Rathor's

The whole conference room got silent because of the shock

precap: Arjun getting help, solving the case

sorry for the late update, got stuck while writing

thanks for all the likes and comments

hope you like this Chapter


Edited by VirMan505 - 8 years ago

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