TH#2 Wo Lamhe/Epilogue/pg20/30 April

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this story simply based on arranged marriage...or said love marriage..this time its little confusing...you know soon why ?

khte hai jodiya upar se bnke aati hai

aur niche aake mil jaati hai

ye ek sanjog hi toh hai
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.
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par kya ye jaroori hai
ye sanjog aapko phli baar mein hi aapke shi life partner se mila de
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aur kuch asa ho
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partners exchange ho jaaye toh 😲


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Prologue

Adi : maan bhabhi ko kb tk room mein chipake rakhenga

maan : kya yaar tu bhi
teri bhabhi ready ho rhi hai

.
annie jaake apne bhabhi ko le aayo

.
she come out with annie ...
.
pinky : bhabhi gunghat toh utha lo

annie help her in taking out veil...

.
.
pinky : bhabhi you are so beautiful
.
annie : bhai
ye bhabhi nhi hai 😲

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jinse aapki shaadi huyi hai
.
maan : what you saying annie
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annie : truth bhai
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pata hai
.
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taai ji
ne kissi ko bhi bhabhi ka chehra dekhne nhi diya
.
par maine asi hi koi jhoothi rashm ka khke
dekh liya tha😲
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#3
Character Sketch



Maan Singh Khurana



Married with Meera

Meera Khurana



Dr. Dev Sighaniya

married with Geet

Geet Mehra



Annie khurana


Maan sister
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Index


part 15 on page 2

Part 16 on page 8

part 17 on page 14

Epilogue on page 20
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Summary

This story is based on arrange marriage , maan & dev are on same platform for caught the train, in little hurry maan take with own dev wife...no one knows each other and partner never seen too each other...

When first time maan see her , he likes her so much but her sister drop the bomb on his head she is not her bhabhi meera ... Sudden four strangers facing same situation... no one have any idea now what he or she do...

With the passing time maan - geet & dev - meera become friends...And reached to right place too... but why now he or she feeling that's wrong living with own husband or wife become wrong and that stranger become so right...

Each day , each partner with own emotions and at end all lost to heart another partner... But thinking about another one is wrong...

Khte hai jodiya upar se bnti hai

Aur darti pe aakar mil jaati hai

Toh ye galati kaise ho gyi

Un lamho ne kuch asi khata ki

Jaha apna apna na rha

Aur paraya sb kuch ho gya

.

Ye kahani hai maan, geet , dev , meera ki ..jo na chahte ase rishte me ulaz gye

Jaha se na wo apne humsafar ke sath aange bad sakte the

Aur na hi piche un betein lamho me jaa sakte the

.

At last all accept the truth , he or she can't able to hold the thread of marriage and confess own love to exchanged partners...

Izaar he mohabbat toh ho gyi

Par ye smaj kaise apnayenge ase rishte ko

.

Kya unki family manegi

Stay tuned

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Ongoing FF on page 8 With concept

1) You are mine

2)Ye dil kya kare

3) Mere humsafar
4) Khawaish Season 2

5)Khamoshiya...gungunane lagi.

6)Hum Aapke Dil mein Rahte h

7) Mohabbat...ki adhuri kahani




8)Beintaha - Mohabbat ya junoon

9)Is pyaar ko kya naam du

10) Waqt ...badalte rishton ki dastaan

11) SANGINI...PIYA KA MEIN BANUGI

12) wo lamhe

13 ) My Beautiful Mistake

14) WO HUMSAFAR THA

15 )khudrat ka khel



16) Teri Meri love story

17) Is Life A Dream ?

18) Vivaah Adhura Bandhan

19) Tere Liye

20) Dil... Ki..Kalam se

21) Dastaan - E - Mohabbat - OS

22) Wo Ek Din Season 2

23) Sauda


24 ) Gunaah
25) Aapka Dil Humare Pass hai
26) Bulleya
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congrats on the new thread! will b waiting
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Part 15

Damad ji aap subh - subh yaha

Dev : yaha kya ander bulane ka riwaz nhi hai

Rano : ji aaiye na andher

Geet hugged own mother tightly...

Brij : baithye na

Dev : mein yaha baithne nhi aaya hu

Aapka diya huya aapko wapas lautane aaya hu

Darji : kaisa samaan putar ji

Dev : ye aapki beti

Brij : ye aap kya bol rhe ho

Ye aapki patni hai

Dev : Rakho tum apni behen ko yaha

Mein iske sath nhi rhehne wala hu

.

Rano: bte isse kuch galati ho gyi hai

Toh maaf krde isse

.

Dev : Iski koi galati nhi hai

Aapki beti bhut achi hai

Tayji : achi hai toh fir kyun aap isse chodne ki baat kr rhe hai

Dev : mein kissi aur se pyaar krta hu

.

Brij : ye baat aap shaadi se phle nhi kh sakte the

Mohinder : damad ji

Aap isse nhi apnayenge toh kaise rahengi ye

Dev : mujhe majburi mein ye shaadi krni pdi

Pammi : geet bolt u

Jb maine us din tujhse pucha tha

Ye bed alag kyun hai

Tum dono sath nhi sote kya

Tune sch kyun nhi bola

Brij : tu jaanti thi

He held pammi arm and going slap to her but dev held his hand said tumse aur koi umeed bhi nhi hai mujhe

Aur ha ydi isse marne ka plan ho toh

Pointing towards geet and said

Go-ahead

Waise bhi aap sb yhi toh krte hai ladkiyo ke sath

Chahe galati ho ya na ho

.

Aur ha

Ydi mujhe koi bhi nuksaan puchane ki koshish ki aap logo ne

Toh sb jail mein honge

.

Kyunki mein apne advocate ke pass already letter chodke aaya hu

Jisme likha hai

Ydi aange jaake geet ke sath koi bhi hadsa ho jaata hai

Jisme wo gayal ya uski death ho jaati hai

Uska karan sirf uski family hongi

Na ki mein

Aur mujhe bhi kuch huya

Toh saare ilzaam aap logo pe jaayenge

.

Dev : waise kuch din mein humara talaak ho jaayenga

Rano : geet tune sign kr diye

Geet : maa mein majbur thi

Inhone

Dev : maine dbav daala tha ispe

Bye all of you

.

He take deep breath and left from here fast, brij try to hit him but darji stop him...

Dev : my work done

Mein aaj hi wapas jaa rha hu

.

Maan : kuch din whi ruk jaate

Dev : pagal ho kya

Uski family mujhe chodti nhi

Maan : geet kaise manage karengi akele

Dev : don't worry

You can talk with her on phone

Bs dhyan rahe raat ko

Maan : hmm

Thanks

Dev : meera ke ghar kb jaa rhe ho

Maan : you very well know

Phle geet ko waha se bahar nikalna hai

Dev : hmm

************

Rano : ab kya honga iska

Iski toh puri zindagi barbaad ho gyi

Tayji : pata nhi kaisa bhag likhwa ke aayi hai ye

Phle iske janam ke waqt itni takleef huyi rano ko

Dusra bacha bhi nhi janam saki

Ab ye sb

Aur

.

Tayi held geet arm and said tujhe kya apne pati ko rizana tak nhi aata

Kaisi aurat hai tu

She pushed her but vartika hold her...

Vartika : mem sahab

Isme chokri ka kya kasur

Ydi iska mard hi isse chod gya

Rano : par sb issi ko kasoor denge na

Vartika : mein isse iske kamre mein le jaati

Brij : oye ruk

Kal ki aayi huyi naukrani

Tu hoti kaun hai

Darji : brij

Brij : tu isse kamre mein nhi

Balki store room mein bnd krde

Geet : veerji humne kuch nhi kiya hai

Aap smjhiye hume

Brij slapped her make her fall on floor, vartika try to hold her but he stop her in mid...

Brij : saari izzat mitti mein mila di is ladki ne

Vartika : chota mooh badi baat

Abhi us admi ne bola tha

Isse kuch huya

Toh aap sb ko jail ho jaayengi

Brij held her by neck , but mohinder and darji stop him...

Darji : ye ladki shi kh rhi hai

Tu isse kamre mein leke jaa

Vartika : ji

*************

Vartika make her sit on bed and close the door...

Geet tum thik ho

Geet hugged her tightly and cried...

Maine bola tha maan ko

Hum kissi ko kuch nhi batate hai

Vartika : geet kuch nhi honga

Dev ne aapne patte khol diye hai na

Aaj nhi toh kal pata lag jaata family ko

Tum dev ke sath nhi maan ke sath ho

Aur fir na jaane kya hota

Geet : meera tum nhi jaanti

Wo maar denge mujhe

Meera : mein hu nay aha

Now my turn to play own cards

.

I mean

Ab meri baari hai aange khelne ki

Ye tumhe kuch nhi kr sakte hai

.

Tum maan se baat krlo

Mein bahar dekhti hu

Room ko andher se bnd kr lena

Geet : hmmm

***************

One week going passed , but dev not ready to bend on any situation , another side brij temper increasing with passing time whenever geet come in front of him , he hit her, she cried on phone at night while talking with maan...

Maan : geet bs kuch din aur

Mein jaanta hu

Tum bhut takleef mein ho

Bs mein aur dev divorce procedure hi complete kr rhe hai

Bs ek baar ye ho jaaye

Mein waha aa jaayunga

Geet : maan tb tak mein jinda rahungi na

Maan : ha

Tumhe jina honga mere liye

.

Meera apna kaam kr rhi hai na waha

Geet : hmm

Maan : I love you

Geet : hum bhi

**********

Brij : ab toh ghav waale bhi baat krne lage hai

Ye ladki kbse yaha padi hai

Rano : brij beta

Ab hum kr bhi kya sakte hai

Vartika : sahib hum kuch khehna mangta

Brij : tu

Darji : brij isse bolne de

Bol

Vartika : kyun na aap sb geet ji ki shaadi dobara kr do

Brij : pagal ho gyi hai ke

Tayji : shi kh rhi hai wo

Par ab isse shaadi karenga kaun

Vartika : mere pati ka ek dost hai

Uski bhi abhi kuch din phle talaaq huya hai

Ghar mein uski bs ek choti behen

Aap bolo toh mein baat chalayu

Darji : wo maan jaayenga isse shaadi krne ko

Vartika : wo mere pati ko apna bhai manta

Aur inki baat nhi taalenga

Aap kaho

Waise in dono ki shaadi krwa dete hai

Rano : par geet nhi maanegi

Abhi toh wo bechari

Brij : kya puri umar yaha baithke ghar ki izzat uchalengi

Tum uss ladke se baat kro

Aur usse yaha bulayo

Vartika : mein krti

Mohinder : hum kuch din aur ruk jaate hai

Darji : bilkul nhi

*************

Precap : maaneet vivaah

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