A Cursed Up Love T1 - Page 81

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Part 15

the feeling of being lonely where even ones close ones, the parents are not there in reach or to support is miserable..Geet felt that dejection for a moment, but her family was there to meet her in person, and she was back to normalcy for a while cribbing like her old self to her father and brother..
I like the way Brij and her brothers are always there rolling up their sleeves to do anything that will bring smile on her face and to protect her.
she wanted to go back for Darji..but Maan protested, may not be completely selfish, but a little bit selfish act for his Dadima sake, though he assessed the situation of Darji's health..and Geet too affirmed it for his request.
I think the act in front of her family was not a complete pretense..he is moving forward towards Geet and their marriage.

Thanks Flame, having no support system leaves the mind to its own devices which in many circumstances can be scary, however short-lived it was Geet felt that exclusion. And again i agree with you, Maan's act wasn't pretense though it may not be genuine love, it was still a step towards Geet

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Part 16

did I read it correctly..Is Geet Vicky's love or he is talking about someone else..😲
if it is Geet, then that would be a shocking but interesting twist, making all the relations much more complicated.

Maan and Sameera..that was a touching part...their relation is neither superficial or shallow.. something unnamed, may or may not be love at least not love for Sameera, but they were partner in the crime or say in alcohol...emotionally being dependent on each other.
she wanted someone with her in her distressed state and counted on Maan for that..he was there to take care of her..and he did it again after parting away.
letting go of it and saying a goodbye is really difficult.

and although it was between Maan and Sameera, but it was quite an emotional update..very well written..beautiful update.

You're not the first to think like that and for a few minutes your comment got me thinking, Should Vicky be in love with Geet then it rejected, stupid brain 😆 I suppose the story is quite complicated as it is plus personally i think Geet needs a friend more than a lover atm

Thank you it was hard to write even though its wasn't Geet, Sameera's character changed while writing the last few parts initially i had wanted her to be conniving and manipulative but then changed my mind, i suppose victims of abuse are more fickle and submissive

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Part 17

Maan is scaring her to the level, that she is keeping distance from him which is irking him further..
and definitely he is not liking her closeness to Vicky..which is good ;)
another good thing is she has cleared it in the beginning that she would be there for Dadi's sake..Maan's reactions to it was great to read.
while Vicky has been much supportive to Geet like a brother or friend, his love interest still remains a mystery.

fabulous updates.

I suppose frustration leaves you incapable, the same can be said for Maan. In his pursuit, he forgot he wronged Geet no matter what he does that wont correct itself especially when his making decision. He needs to involve her too, since both their lives would be affected and not only his.

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

I read all parts of this story now...

it is a very interesting story...

Handa family is cursed by a mother and after so many generation Geet is born to live that curse...

Maan is in love with Sameera but forced to marry Geet...he rejected her but after daadi hospitalized he agreed to accept Geet...but Geet is not willing to compromise with the man who loves somebody else and forced to abide by the relation with her...

in last part I don't understand why Maan is angry...whatever he is suffering or in dilemma between his love and Daadi's demand Geet has no fault in all this...she never knew what Maan wants or what Daadi wants...what does he expect from a girl who is mercilessly rejected on her first day of marriage that she will happily came back running in his arms thanking him to accept her...

I am very happy to see this strong Geet who is ready to fight for her dignity...being cocooned from harsh realities of world and not allowed to go out of the house without bodyguard brothers I expected Geet to be docile and submitting but this Geet surprised me by her fiercy side...

but whatever story is I want them together in the end...I don't want Geet to die of curse...if Handa forefathers did wrong to a woman then the mother who cursed unknown girl who didn't even took birth is also wrong...punishing a innocent girl is wrong...so that curse can make its effect to some extent but I think it should not have such great effect to take Geet's life...

please pm me whenever you update...

I read note about your mother...please take care of yourself and your mother...hope she get well soon...

Hiya and welcome to Cursed, Geet's death 😲 i haven't even gave that a thought 😆and totally agree innocents should not pay the price for their family/forefathers. About Geet being fierce, i suppose her being spoilt and demanding caused that effect, but i agree an individual under house arrest would be docile/afraid to a point, which Geet would highlight in the future chapters

Thank you for reading, n i've sent a buddy resquest😃

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

loved it

thank you Sweets

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Happy New Year! Hope all is well! update wen u can, thanks

Thank you, may the new year bring you lots of happiness
n i'm fine just real tired 🥱

Sorry for the delay, with my mummy not so well I have alot more duty: cooking. its not fun when its a chore But its either me cooking or eating take-outs everyday🤢. Anyway wish you a very happy and prosperous year ahead. May it be filled with joys.

Thank you to those that commented and liked, I have replied from pg 127-132
Mums not too well today so you may have to wait a while until the next update. Its been like that for some time now. One day she's fine and the next its bad. Thank you for the wishes and the care 🤗 though.

I think that's it for now 😆

11th Jan was a special day for someone 😉




Wish you a belated happy Birthday Sharmeen, have a great year ahead. May all your wishes and desires come true inSha Allah.

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